Guest Marsel Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 (edited) TITLE: Toby by Marsel SUMMARY: A restaurant with a secret. A creepy stalker with heaps of money. A marijuana addiction. A lot of boy on boy. And a smidgen of angst. FURTHER INFO: Three (very long) chapters so far. On average 16 pages per chapter in size 12 font in Microsoft Word. I'm mostly fine with spelling and grammar. I guess I need help with better sentence structure, plot, making sure the characters are in-character and not Mary-Sues. I know how to write, I just need to write better. I haven't been able to find a beta reader for ages. I don't know if that's because the writing scares them off or what, but... at least take a look at it. Any takers? Edited September 13, 2009 by Marsel Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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