Mamacita Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 Tricked into treating 14565 • lem.lem.” • flatteurseurself • nhis his soon • sire. “ [para] “ [para] “Apart • for onc once • kneeknees • smase ime image • were al Eth Ethan’s • becauf yof you Voyeur 14046 • make rua run • amazement, k hak hard • The vae hie hissed • reacdowndown Lost in the dark, cleansed in the flame 10555 Ch 1 • [in AN] alswarnwarning • abl sta stand • ps hps he’d • handhand and • penirougrough • of clu club • whe he he wanted • swhis his Ch 2 • comforting.e woe worst • mng. ng. “Do you • Maybhe’she’s • functioning.at wat • blivblivion Ch 3 • pon pon waking • Xand He He • mene oue out • midsecti [para] B [para] Behind • Theck fck feel • donreadready • luctluctantly • fiscenscent Ch 4 • they’eeding mng me • laime.ime Ch 5 • the nrs ars allowed • ted, ed, intent • fy ify insisted • triedgrabgrab • thelinglings • deepry gry growling • He mum to to • was eam eam figment • alreaakedaked • ap grp groan • st hst his • hisgue.gue • being ed ced completely • and scr Wi Within • both Xand nip nipples • wrapped sly [para] ly [para] around Ch 6 • themeeineeing • tu to to the Ch 7 • going to bt. 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[para] Angel checked Ch 8 • bat tht the ... soldier ly hyl had Ch 9 • didn’therther • thn-ann-answers [the non-answers] • Spiks sos soul Ch 10 • Xa ask asked Ch 11 • thsearsearch Ch 12 • ike ike had • iet tet the • fallto hto his • liv living room • sturstured • Spikehighhighs ... the whe was • hacheached • Instee gre groaned • lipslips forward Ch 13 • exprexpression • contcontinued • te vae vampiress Ch 14 • Or wasre sre • watcwatch • Gil Giles’ books • He d ted tell Ch 15 • bri bright glow • in he he saw • fuckioke oke down • outgrabgrab Ch 16 • vampreacreached • precludm ofm of • er’ser’s still form • recteected • to kat tat the • despe toe to feel • teeth a [para] hel [para] held on • ing ing to Bound to my heart 13725 • coc cocked his head Dream versus reality 12521 • cottoverovered • oncdonedone • tight, l” H” He • squeezedt [para] t [para] wanting Xander • is his time, Xanderced ced his Shifting like sand 11597 • let the lie lie The gift that keeps on giving 11589 • arme ple placed • scalp?e Wae Watcher • drift tre pre pressing • bell mhis his heart • vampi hun hungrily • tried his to to • smoothhilehile • him st ust • you’t w’t work • witndernder • aike ike tucked Reality 11033 • entiree ane and • and the e wae was • Andreganegan • eas ias if unable Make believe 9684 • off of hinds nds and • the cake finefine • undeny Any Andew • of prec fri friction —there’s a line of code or something at the end right before the words “the end” How? Why? bloody hell, yes 10495 Threesoem? Menu 1 • [in Summary, inside Ch1] just a flufic fic • [in Disclaimer, ditto] n’tn’t own • his v he he pushed • hw etw etched • know.andeander • was was reeling • ow row rest Menu 2 • muchlovelove • I h [para] yo [para] you do • excld atd at • on thher her hand • ve yve you • ?!” ?!” The word was squeaked out Menu 3 • hyes.yes • werout out to do • ood ood hard • the man ry [para] ry [para] out and arch • Hisk wak was Menu 4 • him. H [para] who [para] whole being • cominf hif him • peakeout out • dressioom oom Menu 5 —for some reason inside the chapter this is called chapter 6 but it should be 5 • ancogncognize • nd and and pulled • now [para] Whe [para] Where was Spike? • get goi Rem Remind • storedre, re ... I pu dow down • stoodthe the lighlight • Andcoulcould • sco up up the boy • Spi Spike’s neck • redrredressed Menu 6 —skipped another chapter number here; inside chapter it’s called #8 but should be 6 • fuo buo bursting • onothnother • Spi Spike once again • Spi Spike had • his hud. [para] d. [para] “Thank you • etchedtheitheir Menu 7 —called #9 but should be 7 • bt tht the • onothnother • thpikepike • tie Xan’s [para] ‘s [para] ankles to the • “No Xan Xander • toucu alu all • juightight • ke’ke’s arm • yontednted?” Where? when? gah 10475 Ch 1 • reng bng back • ponatonate • Hntednted • beihe ohe • to at l lis listen • andeander • thihat hat I • tw [para] ab [para] about the risks Ch 2 • whip thr through • “ X” Xander saw • hned?ned?” • thouul cul concern Ch 3 • Spflinflinch • ry wry washed • brean. n. An honest • returne the their • enunciatlowllowly • er cer could Ch 4 • from ide ide his own • as hlt wlt warm • his eyes [para] t [para] throw his • aver ver his • wae was wearing • afraf yof your • I’m su [para] you [para] you’ve never • good cy acy Ch 5 • bod ald allowed • their ti [para] tog [para] together? • in in the day • up ais pis penis was • do n How How • and embarrent ent made • eyebrose ose in • gas a s a chance • Iss yss you felt • by his namename Ch 6 • looas ias if • exp Wil Will’s • you t tht think • the throg wag was • grab er her • Juslax.lax Ch 7 • as sas soon • the the minutes • he as mes me • could thatthat Ch 8 • enteree she shop • severiffeifferent • shspokspoke • Willetoretorted • foles’les’ • all o Gl Glory had • more fu tha than • er ler looked • whe phe potion Ch 9 • brow in comf [drops off] • brontilntil • thme ime is • heplasplastic Ch 10 • vabefobefore • withous los lover’s • boyn ifn if he • mowithwith • tuestuesting • everin ain and Ch 11 • smackin his his ear • himself.SpikSpike • down he ghe ground • minito sto stay • collapsnto nto Who? what? huh? 10410 —as mentioned in several reviews, Ch 1 is at the end. per LadyFlame’s count: Menu1=Ch2, 2=3, 3=4, 4=5, 5=6, [here they lost count and accidentally numbered the next ch.8 instead of 7 which it should be] 6=8, 7=9, 8=10, 9=1. i think they misnumbered the chapter in the text of menu 6 as Ch 8 when it should be 7, which got skipped; this makes a total of 9 chapters, but yes—ch.1 comes first and should be moved to the beginning along with its title in the pull-down menu (that it shows for the title of menu 9). YEESH! Menu 1 (really ch.2) • what he ed ted • ilesiles was • heere ere they • have ant ant it • Yo not not bruising • overk hik him Menu 2 (really ch. 3) • while toy soy slept • Tok fak fangless • able to gt dut during Menu 3 (really ch. 4) • waitiaiting • knew hae had • Xanadmoadmonished • have the the fun Menu 4 (really ch. 5) • paddour our arms • Spikem tom to Menu 5 (really ch. 6) • mostlked ked body • licked all tr of of the • aro around to • out a l crl cry of • anxiety ak. [para] k. [para] “Shhh luv • couroterotest • incredib It It was • toust ust in Menu 6 (should be labeled ch. 7) • swiXandXander • finaloundound • dict tct the • r itr its mate • aulleulled • rougay way was • like tSpikSpike? Menu 7 (should be labeled ch. 8) • pectpect • and com whm whatever • wast ant an • untimorrmorrow • sur sure that he • for a mi, ru, rubbing • pulbackback • untis sps spasms • Xander’s f “M “Maybe Menu 8 (should be labeled ch. 9) • forgotthe the • hanme dme down • thiep aep ache • fle Xan Xander • he fhe feel of • expect anyt fro from you • the firs rec recover Menu 9 (this is ch.1 and should be moved up, if possible. everything in this one is labeled right, it’s just in the wrong order) • bri [para] bring sustenance • as of la In In the • stalkenacinacingly • turno hio his Bordello 9862 Ch 1 • farmhouhat • and a l, yl, yet • wou wouldn’t be • squintedit iit • hav have to wear • eah,eah, Giles • tiogetogether • oe toe toaster • or Fa” [para] “ [para] “You can’t ask • eientient • streorneorner • chedched • tryinr a r a sort • nothing,der.der. Ch 2 • gu to to seduce • danyoanyone • staringoughough • waobabobably • kise moe most • his m mor more • pullt ovt over • anmostmost • an eych, ch • ministratioAndAndrew • Sweas sts standing • devily, “y, “—but not if you • moun of of meaning • atd at him • of Wa for for • Andworkworked • mee wae was aware • chec wit with me • she she like a Waiting 9852 • of thr throat • whi whines • half-finishNo. No. • idrewdrew • amusind hnd he • wep wept in front • smilarityweenween • gocrazcrazy • spricpicious • sli slim fingers • is aled,led • then leg smg small • touch io beo be • in Spi hea head • deligake ake • of hiper per arm • Spike’t w’t worried • with han hand • the welcg hag hand • were apirepire • destiontion • knee sionsions • abo about Call of the wild 9767 • and e the there • lipt unt until • invainvading • wasominoming • from ple pleasure Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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