Guest Marssel Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 (edited) Summary of Toby is: A restaurant with a secret. A creepy stalker with heaps of money. A marijuana addiction. A lot of boy on boy. And a smidgen of angst. Recently started (as in a week ago). Two very long chapters so far, third one probably posted this weekend. I would like for someone to check for grammatical mistakes and possibly provide some helpful criticism with plot line or sentence structure etc. This would be very awesome Thankoo, Marssel Edited July 30, 2009 by Marssel Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Animedevildog Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 I am interested in working as a beta for you. I shall have to read your story so that I may get a feel for your writing style. If you still need a beta, send me a message and we can work out the details. Animedevildog Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts