Clockwork_Knight Posted June 5, 2009 Report Share Posted June 5, 2009 This is a real first for me, I can write straight and yaoi just fine but I have never written Yuri before. I'm not huge on it but one of my OC is Bi and there is a chapter in a fic that is going to involve black mail from a female human noble of high standing that wants to sleep with her. I've never written Yuri before and I'm looking for some tips on it from some fellow writers that have written it. It's not going to be extremely graphic but still it will not be very pleasnt for my OC. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serani Posted June 5, 2009 Report Share Posted June 5, 2009 This is a real first for me, I can write straight and yaoi just fine but I have never written Yuri before. I'm not huge on it but one of my OC is Bi and there is a chapter in a fic that is going to involve black mail from a female human noble of high standing that wants to sleep with her.I've never written Yuri before and I'm looking for some tips on it from some fellow writers that have written it. It's not going to be extremely graphic but still it will not be very pleasnt for my OC. Okay, I've written Yuri, but in my story both were happy with it, so I'm not sure how much it'll help. My story Hot Springs has Yuri (one shot). It's an alternate to chapter 23 in my Protector. Protector has Yuri further on. Chapter (29? I think) is where it starts. Again, though, both are happy with it. So, from the emotional standpoint, I'm not sure if that would help. For the physical side, they might help. My profile. Hope it helps! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clockwork_Knight Posted June 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 I have the emotional standpoint down just fine since it pretty much non con and black mail, it's more the physical side Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zoi_no_miko Posted July 3, 2009 Report Share Posted July 3, 2009 Being predominantly lesbian, I find that one of the biggest issues I find while reading a lot of Yuri/lesbian porn/whatnot is the abundance of fake cock. Yes, fucking is hot, however, statistically most women do not come from penetration, or at least penetration alone. Oh, and g-spot orgasms do not happen spontaneously. Beyond that, Yuri tends to require females to take a more active role in sex beyond just laying back and getting fucked. One or both women must actively desire to go into it to pleasure her partner, stepping out of the submissive role. Also, girls tend to be a lot more emotional in general than their male counterparts. And twice the female equals twice the PMS.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clockwork_Knight Posted July 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 Male writers and some female writers seem to have in their head that g-spot orgasms do happen spontaneously, there is a lot of bad fics to prove that. Or the Wham-Bam, Thank You M'am crap that happens in Yuri, straight and Yaoi fics. I can't stand the sad abundance of fake cock that seems to have taken over most yuri fandoms. Toys are nice but as my favorite OC says, " Goddamn it ! You have a tongue, use it !" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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