daiyumi69 Posted December 30, 2008 Report Share Posted December 30, 2008 What I'm looking for in a beta: I've been lagging behind on updating my stories because I really don't know where they're going. The reviews I've gotten haven't helped much either. I'm looking for someone that offers more than just a simple spell check. I need (crave) constructive criticism in the form of a beta. If my story is lacking in certain areas, then by all means tell me. I can take it like a man! Anyone that specializes in : grammar, diction, style, characterization, cannon, original character development, flow, etc is greatly appreciated. Fandom: Inuyasha Type of Story: This story tends to be kind of dark at times, and full of angst; or at least it's what I'm going for. To me, it feels as if there is not enough character development prior to the sex scenes. It's really hard for me to explain unless you give it a quick read first. I have an idea where I want the story to go, I just need a little help getting there. Title: Liar Codes: Abuse, Angst, BDSM, D/s, Exhib, H/C, Humil, Language, Mpreg, Tort, Violence, Yaoi Rating: Adult, +++++ Pairings: Sesshoumaru x Koga, Inuyasha x Miroku, other yaoi pairings Summary: Kouga plays a dangerous game and is caught within Sesshoumaru's powerful clutches. Sesshoumaru, claims to live without love while deep inside living a lie of his own. Feedback: Very much appreciated! Greatly Wanted! Chapters: 3 URL: http://inu.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600090627 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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