hi everyone i'm looking for someone to look over my grammer and give honest opinions about what they think about my work, where it's going and if i am staying within the parameters of the charactors personality.
my story is a naruto fan fiction revolving around my own charactor named Kurine and Kakashi Hatake. It's ment to be a romance and does include a group of other pairs including Shino/Ino Hina/Naru and Sakura/Lee eventually.