FaeryQueen

I'm interested in finding a beta for a story (HP Fandom: Harry/Draco - creature) that I'm working on. The first half (25 chapters) is done, though only 19 are posted (on this site, no less). I need someone who does grammar/spelling and Brit-picking (is that the right term?). I would prefer someone who can critique constructively versus telling me that something sucks and offering no advice on how to fix it. I get enough of that from myself. The story is slash and really, all bets are off on the kinks. There's no chan (unless the boys being 17 counts, but it's only same-age sex), a small bit of het, but not with Harry or Draco and, as I said before, it's a creature fic. The plot might be lacking and for that I apologize. I started it a year ago and am trying to complete it. It's definitely NC-17, but the warnings are all listed on the story page: http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600017939 Thank you in advance to anyone who can help!! ~ Faery Queen

You're awesome! Thank you so much!!

I'm looking for a fic that was on AFF where Harry comes back for his 7th year with his inheritance. I think he was a succubus and something else. Veela, possibly? Draco is a Vampire like Snape. It's rather angsty with non-con towards the end. Harry has to wear a special charm to keep from being attacked and he exudes his powers the most when he and his friends (all OCs) hit the club. He's got the nickname 'Pain-boy' and Draco is a jealous bastard who wants nothing more than to claim him. Snape is in character but kinder to Harry. I'd say more but that would give away too much. Please let me know the title!!