caveman

I got an idea after watching the movie. What if Fox had not killed herself. Instead she stayed with Wesley, and they fall in love. I posted the 4 chapter even though I am looking for a beta. I am not totally sure about how many chapters I am going to do, but I have written a outline for this story. I hope you read, and enjoy it. I hope to write other stories about other fics, and even some origianal stuff. But first things first. Any comments or if you would like to help by being my beta, please email me at khalbm@gmail.com

I have an outline and a first chapter, but I want to do this right and use a beta. I have tryed write other stuff before, but I tend to get a little wordy. I also had a problem with tenses past and present. I try to read it before I finish it to fix the problem first, but stuff happens. Please help me, email me at khalbm@gmail.com

I started this story with the thoughts in my head. I drive public transit, and see hot women all day. I also watch a lot of discovery tv. For the user called hmm I say think and learn before you review a story you know nothing about. http://www.crimezzz.net/serialkillers/R/RA...HENDY_cindy.php David Parker RAY and his wife kidnapped, imprissoned, and raped several women in NM. There are also moives about this stuff. Kiss the girls.