Chthonic

I can't really say anything, because my titles are historicaly cliched, but I have seen some really terrible ones out there. And the 'no title yet' does bug me and results in no clickage. Some of my terrible titles: Stirring Darkness: an RP I started about warring elvish nations and the Dark and White elf princes caught in the middle. Gah, even the plots cliche =_= Words Will Never Hurt Me: Gakuen Heaven fic in which Iwai overhears Shinomiya talking about him, and it changes their relationship forever Seeing Me: another RP I started where my character is a Seer and falls in love with the only person to truly believe in his gift Oh, and on another note, songfics really do suck.

I have this problem alot. So many o the pairings I want to see are just so obvious, and yet, no one really writes them. And then there's the pairings I just can't for the life of me concieve of, and it's EVERYWHERE! I mean, Gaara/Lee, will someone please explain to me where that came from and why anyone wants to read it? Some pairings I love and never get to really see are Shinomiya/Iwai from Gakuen Heaven, though, I admit that whole fandom is sorely neglected, and I can't imagine why. It screams of not-so-behind-the-scenes boy love. Also, Yami No Matsuei is sorely neglected, as well as K/Hiro from Gravitation. I'd also love to see more Neji/Shika from Naruto. It's not so rare, but still rarer than it should be, and so much of what I find is poorly written. I also really want some Shunsui/Ukitake from Bleach. Such a cute pair that very few writers write.

I'm brand ne to the world of AFF, at least as a writer. Loooooooong time reader, lol. But yes, I ama review whore, so far as my other haunts are concerned, so I know I'll become a review whore here. Right now, I only have one chapter of one story posted though, so not whoring myself out to bad, lol. I expect this to rapidly change though.... As for types of reveis, I agree with most everything said thus far. I enjoy the occassional squee, but I'd much rather have some solid concrit. It's jus more useful to me as a writer. Also, I don't think anyone needs flames. Sure, lots of wirters out here need some SERIOUS concrit, but I always try to be nice about it, and expect the same courtesy. And gah, reviews in another language. =_= I try not to let these annoy me to much, but god. If you can read my english story, I assume you can write in english, ne? Ugh, I'm going off on tangents... Me+no sleep=tangents

Hi! I am a long time reader of fanfics, but a first time writer, and would love any and all input you could give. I have just recently posted the first chapter of my Gakuen Heaven fic, so if you're a fan, please take a look! Title: Words Will Never Hurt Me Author: Chthonic Rating: Adult + (for now) Summary: When harsh words are spoken, is it too late to take them back? Sometimes what you say changes everything. Pairings: (M/M) Shinomiya/Iwai (Koji/Takuto) Warnings: Shounen-ai, angst, lemons in later chapters Anal, Angst, Language, M/M, Oral, Rim, Yaoi Feedback: Greatly desired. Fandom:Gakuen Heaven URL: Words Will Never Hurt Me Thank you in advance, Chthonic

I am new to the world of writing fanfics and yaoi/slash, but not to writing, though i must admit, slash writing is a whole other animal, lol. I would like a beta for the first chapter of my Gakuen Heaven Fic featuring Shinomiya/ Iwai and, should I write more, any other fics that may follow, if interested. I would like a beta for basic grammer/spelling error catching as well as feedback on hos OC and believable the characters and story are as well as what I could do to improve. Mostly, I'm looking for honest constructive critisim. If you're interested, please let me know.