vampkestrel

I am looking for someone who has a better grasp of English than my self since i often have silly mistakes like then vs. than, comma usage, and other type things I'm hopeless at. The fic is already written up to chapter 14 and I would love someone to look it over before i post, but I have posted the first to chapters. It is a Harry Potter fanfiction with a romance between Severus Snape and an Original character I am trying very hard for my OC to NOT be a Marysue, an the fic is rated nc-17 for sexual scenes. Though the sex scenes are fairly vanilla as far as these things go I just rate higher in case I might be wrong but generally the fic is pretty low rated pg-14 up until around chapter 12 where it has a sex scene for that chapter and the following one. I wouldn't mind reading anything a beta has up but since i mostly need editing for grammar and not content (though I appreciate suggestions) I don't think it is absolutely necessary. If interested in seeing what kind of a fic it is, it is listed under the title Polyjuiced in the Harry Potter archive. Help would be greatly appreciated.