SkyaraSnow

http://yuyu.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600201356 I'm not sure what this is, but I'm pretty sure it doen't belong.

I cant say that I have the same experience as some of the other writers that have responded, but I just get to it when I think it's appropriate for the characters. Sometimes thats four or five chapters, sometimes it's three. (I don't post a lot of what I write. It's just me messing around and seeing what I'm comfortable with, so a lot of it stays in my binder.) I agree with the one shot theory, especially if sex is the main point. Though, I like to write, (Or, as one of my proffessors put it, I really like to use my words) so my one shot that I have posted went seven or eight pages before I actually got to the sex. And then it was three pages of slight foreplay and teasing, and one page of actual sex. I guess it all depends on the writer though.

The Dante's Inferno Test has sent you to the First Level of Hell - Limbo! Here is how you matched up against all the levels: Level | Score Purgatory | Moderate Level 1 - Limbo | High Level 2 | Moderate Level 3 | Moderate Level 4 | Low Level 5 | Low Level 6 - The City of Dis | Very Low Level 7 | Low Level 8- the Malebolge | Moderate Level 9 - Cocytus | Low Level descriptions: http://www.4degreez.com/misc/dante-inferno-information.html Take the test: http://www.4degreez.com/misc/dante-inferno-test.mv First Level of Hell - Limbo Charon ushers you across the river Acheron, and you find yourself upon the brink of grief's abysmal valley. You are in Limbo, a place of sorrow without torment. You encounter a seven-walled castle, and within those walls you find rolling fresh meadows illuminated by the light of reason, whereabout many shades dwell. These are the virtuous pagans, the great philosophers and authors, unbaptised children, and others unfit to enter the kingdom of heaven. You share company with Caesar, Homer, Virgil, Socrates, and Aristotle. There is no punishment here, and the atmosphere is peaceful, yet sad.

If my parents knew I bought a dildo online.... I'm pretty sure I'd be dead.

I once had a friend do a Tarot reading for me.... It told me I was going to be a home wrecker.

If my parents found out what happened in some of the RPG groups I'm in.... I think they'd worry.

If my parents found out I've been looking at porn.... They'd either give me the talk again, or offer to buy me a hooker or something....

If my parents ever found out that I let two gay men have their way with my neck at my schools graduation party....I'm not sure what they'd think. (BTW, I am a girl.....it was very awkward.)

No porn for me.... My parents would kill me if they found out. Though I am curious about it.

Ugh....Their, They're, and There. That one frustrates me to no end. We all should be over the age of 18 on here, so we all should know how to use these. Alot-A lot. It took me ages to fix that one. Now I cringe when I see it used the first way. Been-Ben. One is a name, one is not. There's many others, but I can't remember them.

I....can't generally find good things to read. I like yaoi/slash/guy on guy, but when there's fourty bajillion fanfics on it, and not enough on anything else, it tends to be a problem. So I don't read as much as I write. And I don't get many reviews....tis sad. Moar het plzkthx.

Mine wasn't the first....but it certianly made me laugh. It went like this: I thought I was going to die of laughter. The character in question was meticulously made to NOT be a Mary-Sue. And her use of punctuation.....I won't even start. Oh, the review was on ff.net....which might explain a few things.

I twitch in my sleep.....it's Restless Leg Syndrome, but still....I once fell asleep sitting on a couch next to one of my friends....she said I kicked her in the butt three times..... I felt bad after that.

Heyla all!!! *Waves* Names Skyara, Sky for short. I've been writing fanfiction since the seventh grade, and I'm almost through my senior year of High School....so I've been writing for almost six years now. I love to read, write, draw, sing, roleplay (My current addiction is this really awesome X-men AU that I've been doing with a few friends.), and lastly, hanging out with my friends. I'm fairly new to Adult Fanfiction, but hopefully, I can write some pretty great stuff!

Evanescent

Only a little... Why did I start playing forum games...?

Same. 'Cept....I have no SO. I have never 69'd anyone. Ever.

I am getting ready to write more yummy smut. I am hoping it gets good reviews. I am also wishing I had a boyfriend.

Hey.....this'll sell well on Ebay!!!! *Goes to sell it on Ebay* *Chucks a book down below*

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Zimarah-I don't get many on here either, but I'm okay with that, for the most part. I get more on fanfiction.net, which is odd, because sometimes over there, people don't know what they're talking about. I did get an e-mail from a girl I bumped into about a year back on the site though, who read the other story that I have on AFF. It'd been a while since she'd wandered into the Yu Yu Hakusho section, but she said she absolutely loved it....Now I have to get Chapter 2 up over there. shinigamiinochi- I've noticed that people tend to be a little more supportive here then on other sites. When you get reviews, they tend to be more supportive instead of full out bashing. I did giggle at the one that made the reference to doing some Hip dancing between the sheets. That was just hilarious. I don't read much guy/guy, but that made me want to go out and write some!!!! cu-kid9-That would be a big honor for me as well. I haven't managed that yet, but I hope I might someday!!!

Yesterday, I got a review on one of my stories that made me melt on the inside. Now, to be very honest, I have never recieved a review like that. Ever. It made me absolutely giddy on the inside, because I've always thought I wasn't very good at writing. Especially considering the story was PWP, and I'd never tried to write PWP before. I did tell a friend who is on aff as well about it, and has read the story, and she said that I had done a wonderful job on it as well, which made me do a happy dance. Now, I want to ask, have you ever gotten a review that's made you stop and go "Wow...am I really better than I thought?"

In reference to the whole Star Wars thing.....Yes, it does seem a like, but every action/fantasy book I've ever read has been set up in a way very similar to Star Wars. It's the whole good vs. evil thing. It's....the basis of everything. The Bible being a relatively good example. (Please don't shoot me for that....When it all comes down to it, edited and changed and what not, it is all about good vs. evil, even if you think it's a fictional peice of garbage.) I got the first Harry Potter book in December of '98, I wanna say. (Can't remember....All I can remember was it was a Christmas present when I was a lot younger.) At first, I put it aside and didn't really read it because at that time, books like that didn't interest me. I was an extremely intelligent little kid, (I have the IQ and other various testing scores to back that up.) and I was reading at a high school level. Though, after several months, I got bored, picked it up, and cleared through it in a day. I have to say that it was amazing, and it left me going 'Is there more to this? She did write stuff about it being a school that you went to for Seven years....HEY! I wanna go there!!!'...I was also slightly ADHD. I do think the quality went down hill a bit as each book came out (Prisoner of Azkaban being an exception. I really enjoyed that one.) and Deathly Hallows was definately a litterary peice of poo in my opinion. There were many unneeded things in there, (Like the Camping Trip.....WTH was that all about?) and things I definately wouldn't have done, had I been the author of it. But, there is one thing that does kind of redeem it....a little. The whole story came out of something she wrote for herself, and as stories for her young daughter. There were things she probably changed at the last moment because in they wouldn't fly right with her readers, or the literary community in general, and obviously, she made worse choices doing so. But I won't hold her against it. I still like the books, but I won't purchase anything that comes out after this. I believe that the movies will give her enough money to satisfy her. Oh, and Dumbledore, definately not gay. I think that was a publicity thing....a stupid one.

I agree with DemonGoddess061. That was really disturbing.

I have to disagree with that....I wrote a one-shot, and it only has one review. (Of course....that might be because it was eleven and a half pages long.....) But it is disheartening to not get any reviews. They do tell us how we're doing. Sometimes I wonder if written work on this site is used for things other than pure enjoyment of the written word.....