[Heel Puppy]

Also I am still partial to the idea of Buffy having to change her name to Puppy (or make it Puppy Buffy or something in this direction).

For the record, I think Buffy should remain Buffy wherever possible.

[The Magic Pencils]

I like the story but I agree with pretty well all sennheiser wrote.

You could easily have stretched Willow's section over half a dozen chapters, each focusing on a different taboo (exhibitionism, defloration, degradation, cum play and so on) before reaching the final humiliation of being gang-banged up the ass in public.

That would be great. Please have her spanked as well. Buffy could probably be allowed to do that.

Speaking of which, I hope this isn't the last we'll see of Willow. She's hot and she's shy, which makes her perfect for this kind of story.

Couldn't agree more. Lots more Willow!

Also, I don't know about the whole "They will suffer FOR EVER!" thing. I don't know about you, but I like these characters. That's why I watch the series. It's always fun to see your favorite hot TV babes being treated as naughty girls for a little while, but it's hard to see Willow in particular being consigned to hell for eternity.

Worried me as well

Also, diapers. That's just ... weird.

I guess you like diapers, and that's what's important. For me its incomprehensible and a waste of a hot Dawn.

I'm looking forward to the next part - and rereading the parts that have changed.

[Heel Puppy]

It sounds good, but I hope you take the idea of including Dawn.

It also sounds as if you have rejected the idea of Willow turning sub mid-way, although I think that would be really cool.

Good luck however you choose to do it.