I like the story but I agree with pretty well all sennheiser wrote.
That would be great. Please have her spanked as well. Buffy could probably be allowed to do that.
Couldn't agree more. Lots more Willow!
Worried me as well
I guess you like diapers, and that's what's important. For me its incomprehensible and a waste of a hot Dawn.
I'm looking forward to the next part - and rereading the parts that have changed.
It sounds good, but I hope you take the idea of including Dawn.
It also sounds as if you have rejected the idea of Willow turning sub mid-way, although I think that would be really cool.
Good luck however you choose to do it.