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But the so-called upper-class loving parent who trade their child’s flesh to another person to pay off their debts and call it honorable. It just as bad as slavery! Why don’t the kids run away and detest and hate their parents forever. No wonder it does nasty little thing to their lovely heads for they are merely considered chattel that belongs to the family to use as necessary. Ah! So! Maybe that is the difference between east and west?
G, still grossed out!
From what I do know. Here in the South-East (where I live)
In the generation before mine (meaning, my parents generation).
The idea of 'marrying off' their child (either male or female, depending) was a very very popular way to forge blood ties to strengthen alliances or friendship bonds.
Most of the time, these match-made couples arn't always happy with each other, there are rare occasions where by the couple are happy with each other.
But well, the world is modernizing, and more children are becoming educated. So despite being from the East, I myself refuse to the old ways, much to my elders distress. Hehe XD
Slavery, and the act of selling your child to the art and trade of debauchery... Well, I suppose, things like that DO happen, especially in the overpopulated countries.
In China and India, I know for a fact that 'gangsters / mafia' will forcibly take your children from you when you 'owe them a debt', and well, selling these children off to brothels as it is one way of making money from them. Another way is to maim them, then turn them to the streets as beggars. It's an actual fact that is still occurring btw.
As for other parts of the world, and the 'establishments' and 'businesses' they conduct. I too have little idea. And as Juka said, it warrants more investigation...
And that was my 2-cents rant. Sorry if I reddened your ears!
Edit: my time is practically half a day ahead of this forum time...
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Bian Lian. (mask changing...)
Juka, chiang hwa i, ni che tau ma?
Here I was thinking you knew Chinese. OTL
Demo, nihongo wakarimaska
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Chapter Fifteen Replies: @Nekoii-desu
Reply to Juka:
I am proud of owner too *beams* and they better NOT take three billion small steps backwards~!!! I'll have a heart attack. (Besides I think doing that would drag your story out another 20 chapters?
xD Do you want that? )
As for the other plot. Well. Just let it flow as it will... and if it ever comes to fruition, we'll see it yeah ;3
(plot bunnies for me, however, are just evil things that can not possibly be good... OTL )
I had tried to put a long long row of "
:D :D :D :D " but they stopped me.The maximum 'emoticons' you can put in a single post, is 10. See, there are 10 smilies. and that's all you're getting! xDDDD
QUESTION to Gslinger !!!
Is your 'Needs of a Sorcerer' complete?
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Yes, thank you very much. That was what I thought as well, you just confirmed it. Thanks!
The update on my HP story will be done as fast as my Beta is!
Love Trix
You're welcome *hugs*
All the best with 'Glad It’s Friday'
I don't think I will read it thou.. the pairing... is not to my liking. ^__^"""" hehehehehehee~
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I actually need some more help, yes. I tried using the site … but I did not find what I need.
Do anyone know if the fight between Lucius and Arthur (in the Bookshop), happened at the same time as Lucius house were ransacked two times? - The Chambers of Sercrets?
My Beta said she would ask her Beta. But I think she forgot, I kind of need to know this if I'm going to chase my current plot bunny.
Love Trix
From what I can remember (I don't hold a copy for HP.CofS so can't check)
The scene where Arthur and Lucius had a fight in the 'New DarkArts' proffessor's bookshop, was the same scene where Lucius had dropped Tom Riddle's old diary into Ginny's cauldron. (thou this fact was revealed near the end of the book)
And yes, I think so too, that it was the same book, occasion, whereby the Malfoy house was 'checked' by the ministry, for holding dark items pertaining to Lord Voldermort.
Because his house was 'ransacked', this was what led to Lucius going through measures to 'hide' said 'dark items', by sorta like, giving it away t ginny. Nobody would think to check the Weasely children you see. So that's why (what i think anyway) why he choose to secretly drop the diary with ginny.
Yeah... That's all I can recall as of now. in regards to that.
Does it help much?
- Nekoii
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About that other plot floating in your head. Let it stew and broil for another week at max.
If you arn't too busy with other stuff (like say, other plots/plans, work, life). Then I suggest you quickly start putting most of the plot (and chapter 1) onto document.
I had a plot stewing in my head for a good few weeks, but I decided to let it stew and dry up, in my head. Because if it ever reached paper... *groans* no. cant.!!! I'm not even done with current work!!! D=
Btw, Parents will always insist you wake up before noon. But when they decided to take ten thousand naps in between noon and night, its totally okay. *rolls eyes*
Chapter 15 is very very very
............. ............... edit: You have posted a message with more emoticons that this board allows. Please reduce the number of emoticons you've added to the message ...
Well thank you for spoiling my fun
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Wah *A* in the review page. My name comes three times in a row. Shits is this what you label as spammage? =X
Anyway, R, R and R 'ed ~! ^___^~ Chapter Fourteen - aftermath was something more! OwO
You find it embarrasign to write smut scenes? Awww shocute~~~ XD I only find it really embarrassing when someone I know personally reads the smut scene's I've wrote >/////////<
GOOD LUCK with work! I don't envy you. Waking at 5.30am... D=
At least my work wakes me up at 9am xD but i only come home at 10pm D=
Hello Gslinger (or would ya prefer Calanthee) *waves waves*, thank you for checking out my story! *squeeks* >//////////<
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Does this mean that reading or writing fanfic about such issues is shameful and dirty?
Well definitely not. Thou if you are thinking on a religious level, then yes. But that's another discussion issue.
How true to RL does fan and original fiction has to be?
Should 100 per cent of all fics be a clinical account of real stories?
It should be true enough so that it is logical, at least. It doesnt have to be real life accounts. But. It should be logical.
Because no matter what, we learn alot from what we read, regardless fiction or non-fiction.
Like per-say, the quote said
"There has been a trend in fan fiction writing where someone is raped, a non-con story, and a few paragraphs later, they're fine as if it never happened. That's not how real life works."
So, what I would advice authors out there is. If you are going to write about non-con, and such, don't be ridiculous and have the character 'super heal' and be a-ok.
If you don't want the trouble of writing about an 'emotionally damaged' character, then don't get him/her raped in the first place.
And madloger,
as for the advert banners here on aff. Well honestly, aff can't do anything about it. They need money, so I think they'd take in any donations and sponsors they can get.
If you are wondering why these 'sponsors' CHOSE aff to put up their banner, then you can just think of them as 'overly concerned'.
For the normal passerby, someone who writes erotica and such, is a 'dangerous' person, thou honestly, we are harmless.
People don't feel safe with us, I understand, just let them be paranoid. *shrugs*
But when a crime of rape and kidnapping does occur, the world would know that it will NOT link back to authors of fiction about rapes and kidnapping.
Get it? Real life rapist and kidnappers are all sick in the head, or desperate for something. Such people would not be capable to write out stories, let alone read them all.
I can go on and on about this... but. I think I'll stop now.
My point got across yeah?
*patpat* take a deep breath madloger, and go read some humour section stuff. okay. Relax? ^__^""
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Hey there,
I've only read your 1st post. But from your concerns posted there... Here's my 2 cents worth (hope ya don't mind the... rant...)
Writing in the character's POV (meaning 1st person POV) is an interesting thing, especially if you do it right.
Honestly, I don't think there are any rules to this. As long as your reader understands what you are writing, then it's fine, regardless what approach or style you choose to use.
From what your 'first person' and 'second person' said. I can understand what they mean. Both of them can be right. But in the end, its up to you and how you feel your story should proceed.
Example: If you want the whole chapter to be exclusively for one person only POV, then plan it in a way whereby it won't be 'boring'. Have different scenes (like change scene). Or don't make the chapter too long.
This style would be good, if that chapter is concentrating on one character only (mainly the character doing the 1stperson POV), and if it's a chapter that delves more into thoughts and feelings.
If, like say, the scene has two characters in it. Then one chapter you do in personA POV, then the next chapter in personB POV, yeah, the repetition might get.... irritating.
You gotta see. sometimes it's good to do this. and other times you just shouldn't repeat.
And say. if in a single chapter, (which has many scenes), it would be perfectly normal if you feel like you want to switch the 1stperson POV. Just separate with line breaks and things like that.
I understand how, certain scenes are better to be in personA POV instead of personB. so go with the flow of your plot and characters.
I hope you are getting me so far? Gosh, I hope I wasn't confusing (or annoying =X )
So yeah. to end it.
I think you feel that "maybe I have been writing things in an entirely incorrect way which has me hesitant to continue writing" because... You have been too bothered about rules and stuff like that.
Try ignore the rules, and just go with your flow. If you feel like the next scene would suit another character better, then switch to his POV. and switch back if you want.
But of cause. too constant the switches, and readers might get annoyed... I don't know. it all simply depends on how you handle your words. Anything is possible really *shrugs* There are no real rules in writing.
It's not like you are writing a school report, or a university thesis.
It's the authors wish how they want to portray their book / writing. I'm sure you have the basics down (y'know, like .i. introduction .ii. development .ii. climax etc etc... and you should know your grammar and vocab, stuff like that) Other than that, its up to your imagination really. *shrugs*
Just try out your style, and post it up here on aff, to see how people like it.
Yeah. That's all.
SORRY IF THIS WAS TOO LENGTHY!!!! *bows*
btw. errihu's advice is really educational.
and twistedhilarity, Tempestuous is damned sound.
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Need any more help? That site ought to help you loads thou.
Just that, I'm working on a harry potter fic too now. *shrugs*
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I'm glad things are beginning to make more sense now! ^^ Slowly, all the questions should be answered!
Chitose and many people in the club have strong bonds, different kind of bonds, of course. Maybe Chitose and Takumi will become closer in the future.
Thank you very much for the review, I'm glad I could convey the messages through with this chapter!
And I have many muses, some are actual people and some are original. The one I was prefering to is an actual person sort of muse. *laughs* Do you RP as well?
I will post up the character bios in a new entry, thanks for reminding me!
*has just finnished reading chapter 13:Opiate*
Well. A huge issue has been cleared up, that's for sure. After this, if Konbayoshi continues denying his 'unhealthy' attraction to Kazuya, then someone ought to shoot him. Someone like Chitose perhaps. Thou Chitose currently has a... hmmm.... something's going on...
Well Takumi, seize your opportunity... now would be good.
I have muses, whom are, fictional made-up imaginary beings that float in my... head? o__o""
and I have a beta, who claims she is equipped with a whip which I have never seen, ready to whip me when I do not type (vomit) out my updates... *is suffering an authoress's block*
And I used to RP... alot. on online communities and then with those people online via msn RP. But I decided to stop. Forcefully stop. As RP-ing causes my plot bunnies to go on hyper fucklikebunnies mode which is not good. Coz then, I'll have more plot bunnies than I can type out throughout my lifetime. Which is bad.
So yeah *sighs*... shits, now I'm tempted to RP.... *headwall* Gaaaaahh!!! NOOOoooessss!!!! *head-wall-slams* Graaahblluurrghhbulb--- *spasms* -blubgrluhurg-*foams at mouth* .........
okay. I shall go leave you a review now. *floats off*
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{ is currently reading... [14. Interlude two - Hisayuki Takumi]... }
I'm putting this here (honestly, for my convinience sake), Juka, if you were to edit your upper post and put this there, then I'll remove it from here~ ^______^
Btw... is your muse an actual person, or something created by your brain?
My muse, however, has great joy running away from me... It seems to prefer loneliness than my company...
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*pokes head in* aaaah, no new faces? *sads*
anyway Juka, R, R, and R 'ed ~! ^____^
My reviews lately are getting so damn long. Please shoot a bullet this way so I know that it's annoying you. (Then I can pipe it down. I can TRY to... XD )
Jaaaa~
PS: I don't know what happened to those RP com/frms out there (there where?)... o__o"""
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I'm beginning to wonder if we're the only ones on this forum thread page. (Or maybe I'm the only one who relies here DX )
Anyway, latest chapter 11, read reviewed rated! It was a great chapter!!!! *kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa* lotsa tension and lotsa questions and lotsa possibilities!
As for Baku-sensei. His training style promotes ones unique points, I guess, I understand that (*shrugs* huh). But Chitose is a world of his own, and taking note his background of sorts, well, *raises eyebrow* of cause he's refined. XD
Chitose is the number 1 uke, and I'm finally beginning to grasp why. Despite being the 'bottom', Chitose is most definitely capable of a dominant ruling character. The model example of "Do not judge a book by its cover". Thou not seeming the part, he's the one who is able to call all the shots...
And I think. that, despite Kazuya not liking Chitose much (due to jealousy), I think Chitose will begin to like Kazuya... But well who knows hey!
Laters~
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Yay what luck! I woke up earlier than usual, and had some time to check a peek at AFF's latest column. and... HEY SAY! I see Heaven Far Away~!
Read and Reviewed
Good luck for you exams~~~ =P I'm not schooling yet~~~ School doesn't start till autumn~~~ heheheheeeee~~~ But part-time job keeeels (at least there's money)
*iRambles* Laters~ ^^
- nekoii
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[reply to Juka on review reply for chap 9]
The manga is.... "Ai to Yokubou wa Gakuen de" by the mangaka "Umezawa Hana"
Its about a school that teaches sex (and its various techniques). The graduates of the school move on to become host's or are bought as pets or lovers. The chapters are mostly one-shots, depicting a certain student and his going-ons in school. Thou the chapters are one-shots, they are very much linked as a whole. Its uber cool imo *A*
You can read it on mangafox.com
So... Chitose is the girl from the photograph... Well that clears things up. But also, I don't think that would be the last we see of Fuyu either~
Bakusui's interlude seems to be one that would be of high importance (since uncle Konbayoshi will be in it). and Seeing as to how he is the oldest member of Opiate... I wonder what Baku-sensei was when he was not a trainer... *A*
He certainly has this enigmatic aura about him~
Okay~!
It's real good you got this forum thread. I hope the other reviewers will make an effort to visit it. At least over here we can talk comment, vent out concerns of frustration, without bothering the story page and the moderators.
And you do not need to reply within 24hours. XD You're not some automated machine are you?
I'd understand if you took some days or weeks. We online people, after all, do have an actual reality life to live in (sadly so... Since real life is not always as fun as the stories on here! XD )
Okay till later~
- Nekoii
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Uhm hello everyone.
I'm Nekoii. I'm not-so-new-here, but still very n00b, so please help me along the way ~
"I know this is the introduce yourself forum, but I'd like to ask for some help to anyone who read's this.
Something went wrong. I never faced this problem before.
I was trying to post out a new chapter, for my story, and I can't.
The page just freezes into the white html page, the bottom left side says "Done" and the page is still forzen at "http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/base/trans.php?addchapter"
Uhm so yea... And I can't log out. The same white-freezing thing happens.
Sorry to bother you with my questions. But, I cant find (or maybe I'm blind) a technical section on this forum.
Thank you, and sorry for the trouble.
- Nekoii
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