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So I have written this story where the POV is in 1st person, I never written a story like this so I gave it a shot. Here is my problem when I started writing the story I couldn't decide which POV to set the story so I did 1st POV. Then I couldn't decide whether to tell the story present or past. So I did present tense like for example "I Run, she talks, we see, they watch" ect.. So I was wondering would the story still make sense? Would it make sense to read it 1st POV present tense? I wanted to make the reader feel like this is actually happening now when they read the story. Just curious to know if that really make any sense.
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Well looks like I fell for this bS and I am glad it hit me a few hours later. Basically I got a call from an inmate in jail stating that he needed to speak to Jessica. I am like Jessica doesn't exist here. So an officer gets on the phone and he explains to me that in order to remove my number off the call list that I need to dial *72 then this number and ask to speak some chick on the phone. Well come to find out all my calls are being forwarded to some lady with a cellphone that's not answering and she is hanging up in my face. I bet my mom called and a whole bunch of people just to try to get a hold of me. I left a really bad message on her cellphone I was talking to her like she wasnt human. Basically if you forwarded your calls to a number they can make all kinds of crazy long distance calls and international calls that can ring up a $5,000 phone bill. So please be careful you guys!
Basically do not fall for this scam. If a collect call comes through do not answer it for a jail member. And the bad part about is that my cousin is in jail I was hoping to get a call from him for this Christmas because I miss him dearly so I am thinking it's him calling me but then it hit me he doesn't have this number.
On a good note I am getting over my writer's block yeah!
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My biggest flaw would probably be Obsessiveness...
Whether with a fetish of mine or a person, once I get hooked then that is all I can think about constantly.
Yay I am not the only one! Weee....
Well I have OCD when it comes to certain things or at least I could say that I am a perfectionist I want everything to be perfect I am obsessed with it and that's a big down fall. Trying to be perfect can make you go crazy or possible insane.
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Thanks you guys.... so far I have been sitting here for a few hours and I have a good story but it's going to take a little history research to get it done. I don't mind it's all good. I took a walk and did my chores to keep my mind open to new ideas. So far I am going to write another story rather than finish the re-write that I had in progress. Let's just hope it goes well. As far as my readers they can wait lol
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Well isn't that scary because I do have ringing in my ears after a great orgasm.... Think I am in trouble lol... oh boy >_>
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Let's see I have alot of genres I like.... lately I have been listening to Metal/Rock
Killswitch Engage
Breaking Benjamin
Slipknot
KORN
Linkin Park
Mushroomhead
And of course I love Japanese music, been listening to it since 1998
Keiko Globe
Kotoko
Ayumi Hamasaki
Koda Kumi
M.O.V.E
Nami Tamaki
T.M. Revolution
And then there is Trance, Hard-Core Techno, Rave, Pyscodelik Trance, Cyber Pop
TOo many Djs and artist to name here most likely I will be listening to Dj Sammy or System F
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I don't know what's wrong with me lately. I can't write anymore my writing has seriously bombed within this past year. I can't get the first sentence out on a page it takes me an hour to come up with the first sentence. That's not like me I am always creative and I can sit here and think. I get up take a walk, go watch tv, or play my ps2. That doesn't work anymore by the time I am done doing something else to get my thoughts together I get distracted doing something else then I forget to write. I don't think it's fair to me and the regulars I get who read my stories. Not only that but I feel like some of the ideas I come up with are so cliche sometimes. I feel like somebody in the section has already come up with such ideas and that if I write it I am going to be labeled copy cat or some bs of that sort.
Yeah I get use to being bugged by readers asking when am I going to update but I feel so bad. Currently I am doing a re-write of a story so it's more tough. Have I lost it? Have all my ideas died? Is my mind not focused? I don't get it.
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Yeah winter sucks I got over my winter depression with vitamins and DDR and a new job lol
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Same thing happened to me but not as bad I had alot of sympathy emails and people backed away for awhile because I didn't update for 2 years. But now I re-wrote the story and I am getting harassed lol I get the same ol "when are you gonna update?" bleh that shit takes time ya know it's not easy being a writer.
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Sorry about that
Title: No Such Things As Vampires
Author: Dark Vamp Writer
Rating: Nc-17
Summary: Vampires are capable of living and masquerading amongst the mortals in order to survive for themselves. Nina however doesn't believe so until she discovers that her teacher is an immortal being taking each student one by one. M/F, Oral, H/C, Violence
Feedback: Yes
Fandom:
URL: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544184277
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friggin awesome is what it is
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Dont forget about me I have been in hiding...
I get this really bad feeling like aff.net itself is dying or it isnt as popular as it use to be? I could be wrong... I dont know there was alot of chaos with this place
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For two years I have finally re-written my story. It took that long because of crap and work lol. Anywho I have posted chapter one and it's way different from what I posted before. It goes in depth with the character(s) that way it won't leave people asking why. I changed some plot settings and character personality and added other stuff. I hope everyone likes it
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thanks for the info I was just making sure so I wouldnt get in trouble
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I know there is some kind of rule in place about editing stories. But I am doing a major edit where all the chapters are being replaced with new text. I am rewriting one of my best stories to make it better. I am wondering if I am allowed to do this?
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Hey I am sure everyone remembers the Recommended Reading sections on their author pages? Will those come back ever again I loved recommending other author stories to other readers on my author page. Also I need to know how to contact that Admin for aff.net
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i was born in 1987
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story updated! I have added chapter 4 today!
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Whoever this guy is needs some serious help. I thought it was a joke or something but this was real. I was laughing when I first read the article then I researched if it was real. It was then I felt bad for the bird since I am an animal lover.
You really can't tell what's real or not so I am glad I did my research just to make sure.
I am really sad about this seriously..... wtf
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yeah i hope so, I should have posted it in the Erotica section but it's so crowded over there lol
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I updated my story. It's not getting many reviews just alot of hits I wonder where did I go wrong with this one? Heheh it just takes time!
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Oh, I like this piece. I really do! I can't wait for you to start getting into the breadth of the fic.
Thank you so much, I must take time to read some of your work as well.
Currently I am finishing up for chapter 3,4 so it should be done by today.
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Hello looks like I am back into writing again. I have a new story published on AFF.net and I hope to finish the other ones.
This new story is called Silent House. Basically it's about a girl who desperately needed a job so she has been hired by as a house maid for the richest vampire in the world. Both of them tell their stories from their point of view. It's contains mostly sex, and lots of vampire drama
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Have you visited Writers' Corner here yet? There's several threads discussing writers' block.
I've been doing fine. Life's pretty much the same.
Oh thats good...
well it looks like everything really changed here since I have been here last it must have been that long. Well it's a new day so I woke up and told myself you can write it's fun. So I should be adding a new chapter today.
Hope everyone else here is doing well.
Story Writing Questions
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So far I deleted a whole chunk of a story then edited for some odd reason. I guess when you read it it's like being there. That's the whole idea for it. Then I can't decide if it's erotic enough to put in the erotica section but I don't think so yet. I added a chapter to it but I feel like deleting all together because of my moments of writer's block. This was an idea that just suddenly came up, I wanted to test a 1st POV I always thought those were awesome to read.