Melrick

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Name is now changed. :-)

When The Devil Takes Hold Dancing Flames Point Of No Return

Dying for the Devil, that’s a damn fine title for a story. Must have been a freaking genius that came up with that title! ;-)

Oops, been forgetting to do this… Chapter 7 is now up! Story: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600109341

Regarding the daddy stuff, that’s no problem! It’s just that we’ve both come across reviewers that will read something in a story that they hate and complain about, yet will keep reading future chapters and continue to complain about it, and it just leaves you scratching your head wondering why the hell they’re continuing to read something they don’t like. lol And no, no offence taken! I just thought I’d explain that because many people – including a surprising number of writers – really don’t get that concept. So that wasn’t just for you but for anybody else reading that post who might not quite grasp that people can (and should) write for themselves first, even if that limits the number of readers you’ll get. It’s not like we’re professional authors that feel the need to write to a target audience, after all, so we’re free to do as we wish. One bonus of not being published authors, I guess! Not becoming rich and famous authors is the downside though. ;-) Anyway, we do appreciate the fact that you’re a diligent reader and reviewer! Not many people out there that are both, that’s for sure!

...it really worked for me... Come on, my girl, he thought, come for daddy. ...and sometimes it didn't. Still, even when it wasn't working for me it never stopped me from reading, and like I said, this was still a really hot chapter. Actually, just what the hell is pre-cum, and what the hell is its purpose? He hadn't really thought about it before. *Also Sprach Zarathustra begins playing* There comes a time in everyone's life, a time when the stars align and the heavens open, a time when their knowledge is finally called upon. At long last, my Biology degree has paid off, because I KNOW THE ANSWER TO THIS QUESTION! So, for the curious, sperm cells are very sensitive to acidity. This is sort of a problem, since semen has to pass through the urethra...which is also where urine, containing uric acid, is expelled from the body. Therefore, in order to protect the sperm cells, two small organs called the Cowper's glands produce a clear fluid (pre-ejaculate or pre-cum) that is flushed through the urethra before ejaculation in order to neutralize any lingering acidity. I realize that was the least sexy description of anything sex-related ever, and you have my apologies for that. Thanks again for your review! Right off the bat, I’d like to point out that if the daddy part bothered you then we wonder how worthwhile it would be for you to keep reading, since there’s going to be plenty more of that to come over the following chapters, many of which we’ve already written, and right to the very end, which we haven’t written yet. We just thought we’d warn you to give you a more informed decision, and to cut off any ‘well that really turned me off!’ complaints, because… well, you were warned. Anyway, it’s entirely up to you, of course! Also, I just thought I’d give you a bit of an insight into the reasons behind us writing this story. We wanted to write something that really appealed to the both of us, something that we would really enjoy writing and exploring, and that’s very much what we came up with. We love the story and we each love both of the characters – so much so that it’ll be a bit of a wrench when we have to leave them behind. We decided to upload it as well since maybe others might also enjoy reading it, but it’s first and foremost for us two. But we’re both firm believers in writing to appeal to ourselves first anyway, which we feel every writer should do!

http://www.ladbible.com/news/animals-aussie-couple-find-huntsman-spider-eating-pygmy-possum-20190617 That’s not a sight you want to see.

In case anyone is confused, someone made a request for a copy of the story to be sent to them, that post was hidden and I then deleted it, as I will with all such requests.

Thanks for your review! We like a good cliffhanger, keeps you coming back for more… hopefully. lol

Chapter 4 is now up! Story: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600109341

Chapter 3 is now up! Story: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600109341

We always appreciate people coming to us with suspected plagiarism, because we always take it very seriously here.

Chapter 2 us now up! Story: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600109341

Thank you for your review! I expect we’ll be posting the next chapter soon so I hope you can stick with it. :-)

For They Bounce I wrote that story right after my dad died of lung cancer, so there were a lot of emotions going around my head at the time. I have to say, it’s perhaps one of the favourite things I’ve written, even though it’s so short. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Authors: PippyChick and MelrickTitle: AwakeningsSummary: Ray moves to an Australian country town to get away from his old life, and becoming a school bus driver is about as far away as he can imagine. His first passenger, Nina, takes him even further away.Feedback: Yes, as always.Fandom: OriginalPairing: N/AWarnings: AFFO, AgePlay, Anal, Fingering, HJ, MF, Minor2, OralSolo story or chaptered story: ChapteredURL: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600109341

If you have a question then you need to start your own thread.

For Drawn Together I’m very happy to hear you describe the story as realistic, because that’s what I was doing my best to achieve. I don’t think gooey romance is really your thing too much, so i’m glad you were still able to come along for the ride. lol I’m really glad that you read the whole thing and enjoyed it so much. That makes me very happy! Thanks for reading and reviewing.

For Drawn Together The Slash was pretty much a spur of the moment decision, like much of this story. I’m surprised at how much of this feels like it largely wrote itself. Definitely not my usual style of writing at all. Thanks very much for reviewing!

For Drawn Together Thank you! I’m glad you’re enjoying it all so much.

For Drawn Together Thank you for your review! And I’m glad you enjoyed it. The cleaning lady was pretty much a last minute, spur of the moment addition, and I tossed around which direction to take that scene, so I’m happy you approve of the direction it did go in, and how that scene went.

Author: Melrick Title: Drawn Together Summary: Perry’s trip from Australia to New York City brings him physically closer to his life-long friend than ever before, a friend he's always felt an undeniable connection to, a friend he never thought he'd meet. They're close but still not quite close enough, or are they? Feedback: Yes, as always. Fandom: Original Pairing: N/A Warnings: AFFO, ChallengeFic, Fingering, HJ, M/F, M/M, Oral, Voy, Anal, D/s, Rim, 3Plus, DP, WIP Solo story or chaptered story: Chaptered URL: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600109288 Review Reply thread: http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/topic/64204-melricks-review-replies-original-fiction/ This was the first story I’ve written in 2 years. It was originally intended to be nothing more than a simple one-shot, just to see if I could still actually write, but it ended up growing from that. And it is my birthday today, so wouldn’t a quick review be a nice birthday present? lol

You’re not wrong about some other forums out there. There’s some real toxic places that just seem to attract dick heads galore, and they feed off each others negativity like some arsehole mosquito.