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@bwm1013 I hide your last post because the forum isn’t the place to be posting stories, even single chapters. That’s what the archive is for.

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Hmmm interesting idea. I can see how the basic concept of the first story would, in some ways, continue over to the new story, enough at least for it to not be too jarring for someone who has read the first story. Thanks for that idea! I’m going to have to let that percolate for a bit and see what bubbles to the surface.

I Can’t Wait, by Nu Shooz

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For Step by Step Thanks for your very kind comments! I’m really glad you enjoyed it. I was trying for a more realistic approach, since my incest stories – at least the ones I’ve come across – tend to have a more fantasy approach to them and really don’t come across as realistic, and I’m glad that came through. My original intention regarding the neighbour was to simply leave a bit of a twist ending, because I like surprising readers with something they didn’t see coming. I’ve thought about a sequel, but a sequel would inevitably be quite a different story indeed to the original one, since that story was all about Brad slowly working his way up to having sex with his mother. By the time the sequel takes place, that’s already happened, so I couldn’t help but think the story would somewhat devolve into a fairly stereotypical incest story, which would spoil the story. I’ve got one idea, but hey, if you’ve got other ideas then I’m happy to hear them!

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If you wanted to create a review reply thread, then you needed to create the thread in the correct forum, as discussed here.

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