Seaman

Thank you for your review of my story, “First Date.”  I did work for a while on the dialog between Zuko and Jin about going all the way getting it to sound plausible – clearly in the series she was hoping for more than she got.  “But Mai would kill him,” becomes a recurrent phrase when talking about Zuko boinking anybody but his goth-girlfriend.

Oh, and the PC muscle is because in an earlier life I was certified in massage.  The course included quite a few hours of musculoskeletal anatomy so it comes naturally to me.  Once upon a time I could name all seven layers of muscle in the upper back but time has eroded that.