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  1. I don't know tbh on the one hand I would like to know the details on the other hand I prefer no spoilers xD. Let LHunt decide
  2. If I'm right, Devil's Breath works like a date rape where the victim has no idea what's going on. I think it would be better if Lara did everything when she's perfectly ok and knows what she's doing, but she's turned on by drugs and can't help herself. But its ofc up to Cross .
  3. Take your time, I bet it's worth the wait BTW so let's recap Lara's enemy will force her to take the drug, Lara will get addicted and beg the enemies for another dose, they will use it against her, they will dump her with the drug near a area with homeless men, Lara will have sex with homeless people, they will be dirty, ugly, some fat, they will smell bad, Lara will be disgusted with all the filth at first but too horny to stop, then after some time she will start to crave all the filth because she identify it with all the pleasure that she received etc? Also why you think about no condom for homeless and no birth control for Lara? She'd probably be terrified of catching some STD (it's up to you if she gets any) and getting pregnant(i hope she finds out she's pregnant at the end of the story) but she'll be too horny to stop.
  4. A cardboard box will fit even better, or it can be both boxes and tents. Everything else with Lara crawling from box to box then gangbang sounds great, omg this is going to be super fun and hot to read.
  5. Jennifer and this scene are super hot but I heard this movie is actually depressing because my friend said whole movie killed his boner for that scene xD. Btw, not sure if this is going to be helpful, but i have two favorite porn videos where a hot woman has sex with a homeless person, It looks that i cant paste link here so first one is Samantha Rone Bum Luck on eporner and second one is Shona River Depths Of Depravity on pornoeggs. Maybe you'll take a look and see if you want to take inspiration from these videos if you look for inspiration from Jennifer video too.
  6. I love both the homeless camp idea and the idea of craving filth after the initial disgust sounds super hot. Would be also great if ofc all that filth, stench and dirt of homeless would be described, and I hope homeless people don't have condoms their cum need to go into Lara's pussy, mouth, ass, and on her body. It would also be great if Lara didn't have any birth control also, so the potential ending would be her being pregnant, her aristocratic genes mixed with some random hobo and using her perfect body to give birth to hobo offspring
  7. I agree with Donkingkong and ABigFan. I like reading porn stories about game characters and other, I read a lot, but Cross's stories are so detailed and well-written that its crazy, and none of them feel like just another version of a previous story. I like number 4 the most too, especially with the ideas that ABigFan has given, basically make her addicted and make her do anything for another dose every disgusting and degenerate thing she can do to contrast with her beauty and status. My only limit are scat, vomiting and things like cutting legs, arms, etc. But everything else is good dirty talk, degradation, drinking urine, sex with dogs, sex in dirty alleys or bathrooms, sex with ugly men, sex with dirty homeless, shota, rape, all kinds of filth like smegma, stench, rimming etc would be super hot. Ofc, if this is something you or other readers don't want, then ok, I know these things are a bit extreme.
  8. BDSM Raider was great, I like how Dante was always one step ahead of Lara and used her crush for him to make her his best sex toy in his club and free use for his customer and that story ended with kinda happy ending with toxic relationship but also a hot one The African staff at the manor would be great especially if they would mock and make fun of her because of the history between countries and their races. Also looking forward to African Village Part 2, so far Part 1 is my favorite chapter of Voluntary Enslavement . I also posted some ideas for story back in may not sure if you will like it but maybe check
  9. I am fine too BDSM Raider Cross posted one chapter a long time ago but deleted it, but believe me, that first chapter was hot so it's nice that he decided to finish the story.
  10. BDSM Raider has a really good start. I still have that first chapter you sent me through email before the family break, so it'll be good to read the full story. I never found your stories boring or repetitive (I think the only thing I didn't like was the Supernatural Adventures chapters where Lara turned into a cow, just not my thing) but a break for an open mind and fresh ideas is always good and good that there will be a new story in between. btw impressive that Voluntary Enslavement is longer than Return of The King
  11. Sorry to hear about your family's health issues Well, they don't need to understand her, she could just talk anyway We don't talk about homeless gangbang in our email(we talked through email a long time ago before your long break due to family and we talked about BDSM Raider story) but I'm all for it xD I'm also very curious about this new short story I am a bit surprised that Voluntary Enslavement becoming a bit grind because last chapter was probably my favorite from this story
  12. Just wondering how are you and how is the work on the new chapter going? Have you seen my idea, is it too extreme or doesn't fit the story or its ok?
  13. The village gives me some ideas like that Lara would be fucked by common peasants (in part 1 she was fucked at least by the king and his sons) which would contrast with her aristocratic status, the peasants would be ugly, dirty, smelly bad, obvious lack of hygiene (some might have smegma under their skin), small penises, some of them fat etc. basically they would be the opposite of Lara, which would contrast with her beauty. They would be told who Lara is, so they would use that information to humiliate and degrade her. Lara would be turn on and disgusted at first, but over time she would only be turn on to the point she woul agree to do even rimming. Maybe there would also place for some colonization jokes and dirty talk which mean the villagers would want to knock her up, and Lara would be so horny and turn on that she would beg to be knock up and mix her aristocratic genes with some of the lowest scum she'd ever seen. Don't expect her to actually be pregnant later on, but it would be hot if she found out at the end of the story that she is pregnant which would later on also caused alot of interest around her
  14. Hi, the new chapter is very good and hot, probably my favorite from this story so far. I like how Lara starts to "break" more and more, how she gets turned on by prostitution, and I like race play too, and how it connects to the history of nations. I always thought that BBC really fits to our favorite British countess and I looking forward to the second part in Africa
  15. Ha I didn't expected description i just write that way because i am interesting what will happen next but still sounds interesting and hot af especially that Sarah will make Lara enjoy it
  16. New chapter was great, really enjoyed it. I wonder next awaits Lara now after she lost title, manor and money
  17. Sure no problem take your time i was just curious because after new chapters were posted thread was active and then suddenly it become quiet
  18. The thread is quiet since some time, everything is ok, but there is nothing to report or there are problems?
  19. Really like new chapters it's good to return to your stories
  20. Or Crossroads could also post on Hentai Foundry and AO3 very popular sites most of stories i read are on both sites.
  21. Curious what exactly happened with site? I heard before that there are some problems but i thought it will just be quick conservation.
  22. I read chapter 9 very good written like always though sex machines are not my thing especially if there is no other guy or girl involved but really enjoyed ending at club
  23. I read chapter 8 great like always i especially liked how Lara’s look was described at the end, that she took money from floor that were thrown to her feets and money she earned and that even with shame she wasn't resistant much to all of it and said multiple times that she is slut while she probably wouldnt have to because Sarah was nowhere close.
  24. Sounds good in my opinion btw Will Winston leave the manor or just stop working? If he stays, will he continue Lara's sexual slavery like Zip and Allister?
  25. New chapter is great high quality like always I wonder what kind of “happy ending” this story will have i think it went too far to everything return normal like before story started. I am curious if Lara will find happiness in current situation because she enjoy humiliation and everything that happens to her.
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