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I think it sounds good, but ofc it's up to you what you decide to do
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Hi Cross okay then, I thought maybe it would be refreshing if Lara did something without being forced since we had punishments in previous stories, but I'm sure whatever you write will be great
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Hmm, maybe this time Lara would be willing to let herself be fucked by homeless people? We've seen similar punishments in other stories, so now that Lara is addicted and craving more due to her lust, maybe a gangbang with homeless people would be something she'd like to do without being forced? You can still use your idea, but let's say Lara meets him (dressed sexy, of course), they drive around the city in a car so as not to be overheard, etc. Lara gives him Pandora's Box and Reiss as an act of goodwill (he knows that Lara had the box for weeks) will give her more supplies. Then Lara left car and she would walk the streets thinking about what she had done and who she had become, she would go into some shady alleys without noticed because her mind was focused on other things, she would see dirty, ugly homeless people and immediately think about how she would feel, fucking them with bliss in veins and how much shame and pleasure it would cause, she would inject bliss into her and she would go and have fun with the homeless.
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Hi CrossroadsMk2, the new chapter is great and it was interesting to see how Lara's staff quickly decided to take advantage of the situation, and of course, Lara being turned on by doing depraved things is always great and hot. It was also hot that Reiss wanted to keep the deal, but Lara, already addicted, wanted to continue and begged for more doses. Really curious how this will play out. I suspect that at some point the manor staff will be insufficient for Lara and she will start visiting other, less clean and poorer places to satisfy her hunger 👀. I wonder how Winston will safeguard that and what he, Alister, Zip and Reiss will think about this
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Second part of story? So story will be longer than three chapters?
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I really like the first chapter of the new story, the interracial sex, Lara turned by doing depraved things, mixing her aristocratic genes, etc. I wonder if the drug will be addictive? I remember you said that Lara will become addicted and will beg for more and more dosages until she will eventually end up as a "crack whore". Either way, I'm really looking forward to the next chapters, especially the one where Lara fucks dirty and ugly homeless. I had little hope that they will knock up Lara, but it seems she keeps using protection alltime, still cant wait for the next chapters.
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Good to know How's the story?
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Hi I'm just wondering how everyone is doing?
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Hi Cross, yes if there is so much corruption I think blackmail makes sense. I think I misunderstood at first because when you said this story would have a BDSM Raider length so much shorter than most stories, I thought it would just be about Lara and her or her father's enemies who would want to destroy her reputation (by making her taking drugs, and when she's addicted, make her beg for another dose, which will make her junkie and at some point they would throw her next to the homeless to record this and release it to public), and not for such widespread corruption. Anyway, the current plan sounds great too, and I'm really looking forward to reading this story. I really like the contrast when the woman is sexy and the guy is ugly, and when hot woman do depraved things especially willingly, so I bet it will be a lot of fun
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This means Lara will have sex with the homeless because of the drug's effects, but after a while she'll start craving all that filth, smell, depraved stuff etc.? If so, not only will I be happy, ABigFan will be too, he was the first to mention Lara's thirst for filth It's a bit of a shame that everything Lara does will be blackmail because every story so far has had some kind of blackmail (except BDSM Raider) and addiction imo would be something new and imo would be more degrading for Lara. But you boss, so it's all up to you, I'm sure this story is going to be hot, and if it ends with Lara getting pregnant with dirty hobos, I'm probably going to die because it's going to be so hot. It would be perfect for classy and hot women like Lara to be fucked without a condom by dirty and ugly homeless people, they would contrast with her in every way from status to looks, and in the end she would combine her beautiful aristocratic genes with random hobos and would use her sexy body to give birth to a hobo’s child
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Well she is still hot so maybe if you hate her so much and cant hate fuck her then write her being hate fucked xD.
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Hmm, since Lara is a British countess, maybe it would be better to use someone from British royal family instead of Taylor Swift?
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I don't know tbh on the one hand I would like to know the details on the other hand I prefer no spoilers xD. Let LHunt decide
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If I'm right, Devil's Breath works like a date rape where the victim has no idea what's going on. I think it would be better if Lara did everything when she's perfectly ok and knows what she's doing, but she's turned on by drugs and can't help herself. But its ofc up to Cross .
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Take your time, I bet it's worth the wait BTW so let's recap Lara's enemy will force her to take the drug, Lara will get addicted and beg the enemies for another dose, they will use it against her, they will dump her with the drug near a area with homeless men, Lara will have sex with homeless people, they will be dirty, ugly, some fat, they will smell bad, Lara will be disgusted with all the filth at first but too horny to stop, then after some time she will start to crave all the filth because she identify it with all the pleasure that she received etc? Also why you think about no condom for homeless and no birth control for Lara? She'd probably be terrified of catching some STD (it's up to you if she gets any) and getting pregnant(i hope she finds out she's pregnant at the end of the story) but she'll be too horny to stop.
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A cardboard box will fit even better, or it can be both boxes and tents. Everything else with Lara crawling from box to box then gangbang sounds great, omg this is going to be super fun and hot to read.
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Jennifer and this scene are super hot but I heard this movie is actually depressing because my friend said whole movie killed his boner for that scene xD. Btw, not sure if this is going to be helpful, but i have two favorite porn videos where a hot woman has sex with a homeless person, It looks that i cant paste link here so first one is Samantha Rone Bum Luck on eporner and second one is Shona River Depths Of Depravity on pornoeggs. Maybe you'll take a look and see if you want to take inspiration from these videos if you look for inspiration from Jennifer video too.
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I love both the homeless camp idea and the idea of craving filth after the initial disgust sounds super hot. Would be also great if ofc all that filth, stench and dirt of homeless would be described, and I hope homeless people don't have condoms their cum need to go into Lara's pussy, mouth, ass, and on her body. It would also be great if Lara didn't have any birth control also, so the potential ending would be her being pregnant, her aristocratic genes mixed with some random hobo and using her perfect body to give birth to hobo offspring
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I agree with Donkingkong and ABigFan. I like reading porn stories about game characters and other, I read a lot, but Cross's stories are so detailed and well-written that its crazy, and none of them feel like just another version of a previous story. I like number 4 the most too, especially with the ideas that ABigFan has given, basically make her addicted and make her do anything for another dose every disgusting and degenerate thing she can do to contrast with her beauty and status. My only limit are scat, vomiting and things like cutting legs, arms, etc. But everything else is good dirty talk, degradation, drinking urine, sex with dogs, sex in dirty alleys or bathrooms, sex with ugly men, sex with dirty homeless, shota, rape, all kinds of filth like smegma, stench, rimming etc would be super hot. Ofc, if this is something you or other readers don't want, then ok, I know these things are a bit extreme.
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BDSM Raider was great, I like how Dante was always one step ahead of Lara and used her crush for him to make her his best sex toy in his club and free use for his customer and that story ended with kinda happy ending with toxic relationship but also a hot one The African staff at the manor would be great especially if they would mock and make fun of her because of the history between countries and their races. Also looking forward to African Village Part 2, so far Part 1 is my favorite chapter of Voluntary Enslavement . I also posted some ideas for story back in may not sure if you will like it but maybe check
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I am fine too BDSM Raider Cross posted one chapter a long time ago but deleted it, but believe me, that first chapter was hot so it's nice that he decided to finish the story.
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BDSM Raider has a really good start. I still have that first chapter you sent me through email before the family break, so it'll be good to read the full story. I never found your stories boring or repetitive (I think the only thing I didn't like was the Supernatural Adventures chapters where Lara turned into a cow, just not my thing) but a break for an open mind and fresh ideas is always good and good that there will be a new story in between. btw impressive that Voluntary Enslavement is longer than Return of The King
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Sorry to hear about your family's health issues Well, they don't need to understand her, she could just talk anyway We don't talk about homeless gangbang in our email(we talked through email a long time ago before your long break due to family and we talked about BDSM Raider story) but I'm all for it xD I'm also very curious about this new short story I am a bit surprised that Voluntary Enslavement becoming a bit grind because last chapter was probably my favorite from this story
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Just wondering how are you and how is the work on the new chapter going? Have you seen my idea, is it too extreme or doesn't fit the story or its ok?
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The village gives me some ideas like that Lara would be fucked by common peasants (in part 1 she was fucked at least by the king and his sons) which would contrast with her aristocratic status, the peasants would be ugly, dirty, smelly bad, obvious lack of hygiene (some might have smegma under their skin), small penises, some of them fat etc. basically they would be the opposite of Lara, which would contrast with her beauty. They would be told who Lara is, so they would use that information to humiliate and degrade her. Lara would be turn on and disgusted at first, but over time she would only be turn on to the point she woul agree to do even rimming. Maybe there would also place for some colonization jokes and dirty talk which mean the villagers would want to knock her up, and Lara would be so horny and turn on that she would beg to be knock up and mix her aristocratic genes with some of the lowest scum she'd ever seen. Don't expect her to actually be pregnant later on, but it would be hot if she found out at the end of the story that she is pregnant which would later on also caused alot of interest around her