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Hi Cross, first I want to congratulate you. I hope your wife and twins are doing well and are home now I had my gallbladder removed so I wasn't in the mood for a while to do anything but now I recovered and I finally read the new chapter and it was great and hot as always. The idea of stages in the next chapter sounds great and further improves this masterfully written manipulation. I also like LHunt idea about acceptance or maybe push this even further. Lara will become fully aware of everything she's done (and what Sarah has done) or maybe even Sarah will reveal the truth to Lara. Lara will be shock and first will kick out Sarah and will try to return to her normal life but Lara after deep thinking, remembering how much fun she had, how free she feels now and that she discovered something about herself, will decide to bring back Sarah and continue her new life because she loves it and sees it as being free, just like LHunt said. On other hand I also like idea of Lara being gaslit that everyone know how fucked up her situation is except her.
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Hi Cross, I'm a bit late, chapter 21 was great, I love how Lara was manipulated and how she had a brief moment of awakening before being manipulated again. As for your puppy vs pony question, I think the puppy is more humiliating and more "low" so it'll be perfect for Lara
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Hi Cross, the new chapter was great. I like how after so many chapters Lara has been brainwashed step by step and how she is no longer like she was at the beginning. It's also a bit scary because something like this could probably work in real life, especially with the new chapter summary where Lara is conditioned, cut off from her life and real friends, and then praised for doing things that are obviously not good (but still hot), so her shame is completely replaced with lust, desire, and pride. The next chapter sounds very promising, so I will wait patiently and let you cook
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Congratulations to you Cross and your wife, time flies so fast because I can swear I wished you and your wife all the best not long ago when you were talking about your first child
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Hi Cross, I'm a bit late, but I just want to say that the new chapter was great. I like stories with corruption, both manipulation or when a characters starts to like something they don't like at first. If I sum up the story from the beginning, its amazing how slowly but super well and believably written Lara's "fall" was and now she's almost completely shameless in what she does. As always I can't wait for the next chapter and new adventures of our now favorite pornstar countess
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I often see people commenting "Womb Raider" on R34 sites, so it would be quite nice to have that in the story. "Thanks BLANK for raiding my holes today" also sounds good. ABigFan's Countess line sounds the best to me, and I think it fits well even if Lara isn't a Countess, because as you said earlier, she want to remind about her old life when she was a Countess.I don't know much about this stuff, but I think being an aristocrat for the English is something that people here are incredibly proud of and are very respected for. So for Lara to mention her past life while also starring in porn and doing other scandalous things that are not appropriate for a wealthy and well-bred aristocrat would be sexy and I'm sure at that point Lara would be a little embarrassed but also incredibly turned on. Especially since she would use her former title in such lewd way.
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Sounds great btw I don't want spoilers, I just wanted to say that I'm very curious what will happen next
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Hi Cross, the new chapter was great, the way Lara was manipulated into everything and now into porn was brilliantly written. I wonder what will happen in the next chapter since Lara has become a well-known porn star and what new adventures await her
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Hi Cross(and everyone), how are you and how is the story?
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Hi Cross, the new chapter was great. I like how Lara's mind is broken deeper and deeper, to the point where she doesn't even care that much about her reputation compared to previous chapters and like ABigFan said everything is perfectly planned
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Hi Lara Cunt, are you the same artist who posts Lara's comics and photos on Imagefap? If this is you, I just want to say that I really like your pics, especially the ones with captions, and also the one where Lara is giving a blowjob to this fat, ugly, dirty guy
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Hi Cross, I'm late but I really enjoyed the new chapter and can't wait for the next one which sounds interesting based of what you described
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Hi Cross and everyone, how's it going and how is the story progressing?
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Hi Cross, new chapter was good and the idea for the next one sounds great too
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It's good and happy to know that you're okay, Cross, and that the new chapter will be up soon
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Cross last logged in on January 17. I hope he's just busy and everything is fine, because he usually always responds to posts.
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Hi Cross, how are you and how is the writing going?
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Happy new year
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Thank you for your wishes and I wish you Merry Christmas too Cross and all readers of your stories Btw ABigFan a pregnant woman can still have sex, if I'm not mistaken, it's not dangerous.
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Sounds really good, I really wonder what will happen next By the way, are you planning to continue Voluntary Enslavement now or return to Bliss?
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Hi Cross, the new chapter is great and hot. I like how Lara once again decided not to limit herself and decided to fuck the entire village, not even considering the age of the men she fucked. I also A LOT like how she fantasized about leaving her life behind, getting pregnant, and become village’s breeding bitch. Tbh I would like to see a happy ending where Sarah gives the choice and offers Lara to return to her normal life and all evidence of her naughty adventures would be destroyed, but the more Lara thinks about it, she will realize that she will come back to life she now consider boring and tiring with constant care of her title and status, she would again need to meet with people she doesn't even like, vs being free and living in mad pleasure for the rest of her days in an African village. After thought, she would decide that she want to leave her current life behind, she would remove all birth control, and return to the village, being daily fucked and knocked up every year, and giving birth to strong black warriors for the village. I don't expect this to be the end (unless you decide to write it or write more than one ending like you did with Natla's Revenge), but just something I thought about after reading the new chapter. As for ideas for new chapters, I think I like ideas 2 and 4 the most, but they all sound good so I'll be happy with any of them.
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I'm very happy that a new chapter will be released soon, I can't wait to read it
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I would have preferred non-magical and continue psychological manipulation instead, so either she would be conditioned or that manipulation would awake her horny, slutty side, which I think fits with what we already have, since part one is that she had fantasies about prostitution, especially with African tribes and she now fulfills her fantasies.
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Hi Cross African Gangbang Part 1 was my favorite chapter of Voluntary Enslavement so far and it ended with a lot of potential for Part 2, so I'm really curious to see what happens next. Impossible to go wrong with your stories, we'll have more of our favorite high born respectable english countess whoring herself with an African tribe (and being turned on by it), and then her being addicted to drugs and fucking ugly and dirty hobos for fun and being also turned on by it. Alot of fun and hot stuff there will be.