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  1. Glad to see Lana returning to complete the full circle… and its finally raining!

    The last scene was wonderfully sweet, showing the loving intimacy between the Louds.

    Very interesting to see parts of the story were based off your own life!

    I hear Enter the Sandboy 2 is in development :bounce:

    Also thanks for the list of your works you gave me, slowly working my way through them...

     

     

  2. This was probably one of the best of your stories I have read so far... 

    Incredible job on that first-person perspective, it brings voyeurism to a whole new level! 

    Great to see how each character had their own (sometimes odd) ways to meet their needs. 

    Suddenly being tugged out of the moment and into another room kept me on edge and waiting more.

    Lucy's narration helped break up the [longest] single chapter I have ever read!

    Well done! I guess I've exhausted most of your Loud House stories… What would you recommend next?

     

     

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