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Hi. Tried to just log into delete my stories, not necessarily my account, but I can’t get into it. If it would be simpler to just delete my account, I can do that. This is my account: https://members.adult-fanfiction.org/profile.php?no=1296995725

I definitely have considered it, specifically Anna and Tay, but I feel like AEW needs to give more time to its women’s division before I devote a substantial amount of time writing something for it.

Thank you so much! I definitely hope to revisit this continuity some time and explore these dynamics some more. I have a second part started but I have a lot of other fics I want to get to first before I make any significant headway on that one. While not exactly exploring the Raquel/Dakota dynamic, I do have a fic with Dakota bottoming that I’m hoping to publish soon.

Thank you so much! It was one of my favorite fics to write thus far.

Have a bit of catch-up to do! Here we go! Reviews on Sweett Victory From SailorNemesis on September 26, 2020 Read 3 chapters. Hot stuff, very sexy. Needs some fisting though. Thank you so much! I’ll see if there’s ever any inspiration to have some more in-depth fisting. It’s not a well I go to a lot because there are other things that interest me more but I’m not ruling it out. From Deadman on September 29, 2020 I do like the idea of this continuing and getting a little fun. Maybe go with Donna meeting Cheryl as she suggested. If I ever continue this, Cheryl will definitely get involved somehow. From TheChemist on December 20, 2020 This was a great story! Had me hooked from the first paragraph. I've been wanting to use Donna Sweett in a story for this very reason - dominating Betty. You added in Veronica which was a great idea as well. Loved your wiriting style; it was very clever and perfect characterizations as well. Now I need to go read the rest of your work! Seeing you in my reviews was an extremely pleasant surprise!! I’ve followed your fics for a long while and have always really enjoyed them, so the fact that you took the time to not only read but offer feedback on one of my stories—it truly means a lot. I would love to read a Donna story from you :-) the more fics like this, the merrier IMO.

Review on Sweett Victory From SailorNemesis on September 16, 2020 Chap1 super-hot. I hope Betty gets fisted hard sometime. Thank you! I’ve included fisting in one of my stories but it’s not a huge kink of mine. There is a brief mention of Betty getting fisted in Chapter 2, but whether fisting ever evolves beyond that in this fic—well, never say never, but as of now, I don’t have an idea for it. From Sazbi on September 16, 2020 Hope there's more Thank you! I definitely want to write more, specifically in terms of adding Cheryl to the mix, though when that will transpire, I’m not sure.

Review On “An Empress. A Princess. A Queen.” From MTL on April 05, 2020 Great to see this story posted here, I love it more every time I read it. Asuka slowly accepting Charlotte's superiority is a thing of beauty here, and there are some fun hints of things to come. Hopefully eventually you get there, lol. And you post One Hot Night With Hart & Fire on AO3, so both websites can have the full set. And yes, I know that the story was a bit rough, but I think people on AO3 would still like to read it. Wow, you really have turned the corner on this fic, haha. I have considered putting Hart & Fire over there but reading it now...oof. If I post it anywhere else, I would want to just drastically rewrite it. Maybe it’ll make its way over there at some point though. Review On “An Empress. A Princess. A Queen.” From Clukesh on April 05, 2020 This was an amazing story I think a great way to continue would be the following night after Carmella cashed and for Charlotte to get topped by Carmella or Charlotte topping the iiconics or something like that great job would love to see more from you Thank you! I can say with confidence at least one of those things will happen next chapter :-) I’m not sure when I will get to writing Chapter Two of this though.

Review On “Sweett Victory” From SailorNemesis on April 04, 2020 Good job, I think I can tell whose fics inspired you. Hopefully read more, but only girls please. With vaginal fisting. Thinking of MTL? If so, guilty as charged . I have considered branching out into different gender pairings, but I love femslash enough that it may be a while before I ever do that. I’ll consider the fisting, haha.

Hoping to post part 5 someday here haha. I have it started and may go back to it now.

Review on “Fire Melts Ice” From Deadman on November 24, 2019 There's some interesting stuff here. I'm kinda curious to see what Jughead would write next. Obviously, a very delayed response here but thank you for reading and glad you found some things to like. I do often consider writing a follow up where Veronica commissions a story. We will see if that ever sees the light of day.

I’m glad you like it so much haha! I’m not 100% sure when this will be updated as I’m working on updating my Riverdale Betty/Veronica story since it has been longer since I’ve updated that, but once that is done, I’ll come back to this.

I’m glad you enjoyed it! There will definitely be an update, but I’m not 100% sure when.

Update for anyone who reads this thread (which honestly may just be MTL): I took a break from writing for a bit because I wasn’t really feeling it. I’ve put my WWE fics on hold for a while as I am not really into the product right now and writing fics for it was making me sad. I have recently been working on my Riverdale Beronica fic and have actually been having a lot of fun with it. While I don’t wanna make any guarantees, my hope is I can post it sometime this week. -Heyoo

I know, I know haha. I always want to go back and check it out but just haven’t. I think I will tonight, especially after reading the Io vs. Shayna spoilers. Season 1 was cool because it seemed like they had everything mapped out from the get go. In season 2, the showrunner himself has admitted that they had like 3 different options for the Black Hood in mind, which already means certain clues and details and stuff are meaningless. I actually kind of liked season 3 just because it was so batshit insane it went back around to being entertaining IMO. It’s a Beronica fic. If it evolves beyond a one-shot, there might be some Cheronica thrown in as well.

I really need to get back to NXT soon! It’s embarassing to admit but I think the last time I watched regularly Asuka was champ, and the last Takeover I watched was Gargano-Ciampa III. Wednesdays are just a busy night and I always wanna go back and watch but I have way too much on my watchlist haha. Anything cool happening right now? Cole is champ, right? Funnily enough, my non WWE fic is also a show that has turned a lot of people away due to its illogical storylines and mishandling of characters—Riverdale.

Hey, thanks for checking in! I’m not 100% sure. Currently I’ve started both Chapter 3 of the Alexa fic and a non WWE fic and I just don’t have a ton of motivation to work on either one for whatever reason. Per the Alexa fic, it probably doesn’t help that my interest in the ‘E is waning a but. The fact that they have one of the best male wrestlers today and one of the best female wrestlers today and their grand plan is to put them in countless matches with Baron Corbin and Lacey Evans isn’t really sitting right with me, nor is the fact that their current “final boss” is a 50 year old non-wrestler who can’t heel properly. All that complaining aside, I do hope to return soon!

Yeah the Bellas/Eva understanding is kind of what I had in the back of my head. This also kinda works since (as of now), Nikki’s last match would be at Evolution, which lines up with the timeline, and means her role would need to be filled. Can’t decide if Sasha’s the one who got away or someone who had been with Eva previously. Which would be hotter? At this point in time, Becky is a switch who prefers to top (and she’s definitely trying to become the Alpha), while Charlotte is still the true SDL Alpha. Meanwhile, Rousey’s the Alpha on the RAW side of things.

REVIEW OF “ALL RED RETURNS” From MTL on June 11, 2019 Again loved the dirty talk and everything surrounding the sex. And to be fair, some of the sex acts were fine here, like the spanking. I thought that was a decent length. But then there was the cowgirl, which was only a couple of lines. I would have really liked to hear about how Tori's entire body was aching, especially her gaping butt hole, and it was painful to move, but she did so out of pure adrenaline and need to cum. Then re-stuffing her ass and building up a rhythm. And her thoughts during it. Just little things which would extend the sex, and make your stories perfect IMO. But they're pretty close to perfection anyway IMO, and I really hope you keep it up. Maybe part of the problem is basically by the end you were just rushing to get it over with? Because I know the feeling, and I definitely relate to not being happy with a story. But just remember, we're easily our own worst critics, and give yourself a break. After all, this is just meant to be a bit of fun, right? As mentioned I'm a big fan of models topping wrestlers, and I felt this was a great example of why, as the humiliation Toni Storm felt submitting to Eva Marie was soooooo hot! Even though I'm not that familiar with Toni. I mean, I saw NXT Blackpool and was impressed with what I saw from her, and she certainly is hot with a great ass, but for some reason I just can't find the time to watch NXT UK. It's on my to-do list, but I never seem to get around to it. I don't know, maybe I'm just burnt out with wrestling at this point. I've seen way too much of Eva Marie, both on NXT and the main roster, and I would love to see more of her topping wrestlers. Admittedly, between the two would like to see the Alexa story continued more, but you can continue this and make it different from that. My favourite part of the story was Eva showing Toni that footage on her phone, and you could easily do a couple of chapters of Eva staring at them and flashing back to how she conquered those women. Or she could tell Toni all about it as her new pet kisses her feet. It could even be all from Eva's perspective. I would hate to lose the perspective of her victim, but it would make it different from the Alexa story. Alternatively, to make it really different, you could have chapters of Eva playing with her already broken bitches in turn, may be introducing Toni to them and making them tell the story of how they got here while Eva ass fucks them. Also, if Eva is returning, does that mean she was the Alpha female, and in her absence some of her former bitches have rediscovered their dominance and need to be broken again? Easy to do with all that blackmail material she has, but that doesn't mean it wouldn't be fun. Especially if she brings along some of her bitches who stayed loyal to help, like AJ, Paige and Emma. Then of course, what about the possibility of Charlotte being the one that got away? Or maybe it was someone were not expecting to be able to survive? Either way, Eva hatches a plan to finally get them, and if it is Charlotte, it can involve the other horsewomen. ******************************************* Thanks for the review! I think you’re right on the money as far as rushing to the end. I know that I’m super close to posting it so I just want it to be done, but obviously that hurts the story as a result. I’ll hopefully be more patient going forward. And yeah, sometimes I beat myself up a bit when a story isn’t going how I want it to. I really wanna get these posted but I think I’m gonna slow things down a bit for now. Not a huge NXT UK follower myself, although every once in a while I’ll see what’s going on since I’m semi familiar w/ some of the talent due to their indies work. Mainly discovered Toni through the MYC and have tried to follow whatever she’s up to WWE or otherwise. It’s definitely really easy to get burnt out on wrestling—there’s just so much! Glad you like the Alexa fic more, because that’s probably the fic I’m gonna focus on the most. I really like your suggestions for future chapters of this though! I don’t know if Eva was the overall “Alpha” per say but she was a top, and if this story continue, she is definitely going to try to become the Alpha. Not 100% sure if I’ll incorporate the Charlotte angle or not, mainly since kind of the whole crux of the Alexa story is her journey to Charlotte. However, if I wrote more of this, I’d definitely want to incorporate some horsewomen. (An Eva/Sasha chapter seems really hot in particular.) -Heyoo

Ok, awesome!!

Tbh, I hadn’t planned on a HUGE Nikki confrontation but there will definitely be something in the coming chapters.

Actually, it’s kind of a combo of both of those ideas. After Becky won the title, she tried to assume the role, but everyone (including her) knew Nikki was the true alpha. But neither one of them really made as much of a show of it as Alexa. Idk though if this will really be mentioned a ton in the story, it’s just kinda the back story I created in my head. Idk when the Eva/Toni fic will be done. I’ve fallen into the trap of concurrently working on that and ch. 3 of “Alexa”, so I’m gonna work to just stick to only one for now and then go back to the other. Also, thank you for the site suggestions!

Yeah, it would be really hard I suppose not to turn face after that Bayley match. I think maybe some of my Sasha babyface resentment stems from my Becky bias, because I felt, based on the story they were telling with her and Charlotte at the time, it would’ve been awesome if Becky would’ve won the Mania Triple Threat and got her revenge (although she obviously wasn’t going to, and she probably shouldn’t have, since Sasha WAS the hotter act at the time, and if Becky won, the crowd might have turned on her. Charlotte def. shouldn’t have won that match though, especially by making Becky tap. But my Becky booking rants could fill an entire post. At least they’re doing right by her now. Also sorry that this has devolved into me talking all about Becky haha that’s kind of what happens when I get into conversations about the horsewomen.) I do like the tramp stamp idea a lot. If I can work it into the next chapter somehow I definitely will. I definitely love bottom Paige too! I’m not 100% married to my current PaiJ idea so we’ll see. Charlotte is def the RAW alpha, while Alexa is the SDL one (and obviously the roles will switch once they switch brands). While I haven’t completely decided how/if I’ll integrate Charlotte/Mickie in this, there will def be some Charlotte/Becky soon. Let’s just say your assertion that there’s some love still there is an accurate one.

REVIEW OF “ALEXA ON TOP” From MTL on June 07, 2019 Wow, I'm really impressed with the amount of back story and world building within this chapter. I'm glad you're taking a page out of my book, and to be fair so many others, dipping into other characters thoughts and allowing some of them to be in conflict, and not as confident as they seen, making them seem like three-dimensional characters with a rich history. And I'm so, so happy you bought Becky back. Honestly how broken she was and all her thoughts might have been my favourite part in a story whcih featured Mickie James getting ass fucked, which is really something. Although this was kind of a double-edged sword of the chapter, as particularly the triple ass fucking was an amazing concept, which seemed to be over with one thrust. Granted, not even an anal veteran like Mickie could realistically be fucked long and hard that way, but there's definitely a happy middle there somewhere. Just a little constructive criticism, as I felt the sex itself was better in the first chapter, even though this is my favourite thing you've written so far, because everything around the sex, was just so amazingly erotic to me. I'm thrilled that Alexa seem to have made two of my all-time favourites, Becky and Mickie, her permanent bitches, and I love the thought of them getting lead around on collars and leads, but it's going to be tough just walking around if Alexa does that to every woman in the division. Don't get me wrong, it would be incredibly hot, but also kind of silly. Maybe this 'honour' could be saved for her favourite bitches? Or maybe she takes no more than two out at a time like that, just in case they get any ideas about turn the tables on her? Oh, and how you feel about branding? I've read fics, where actual branding irons are used, which I admit I would find hot, but tattooing would work just as well, if not better. Either way, imagine the likes of Becky getting 'Bliss Bitch' tattooed on her arse, or her forehead, or as a tramp stamp. As much is this fic, and admittedly the last few years of booking, have convinced me Alexa would make a great top I love the fact you revealed she was a bottom before in NXT, and is desperately trying to repress that side of herself in order to be the Alpha female of the WWE. A term I'd be honoured if you used, BTW, even if it wasn't an official title. Anyway, this makes me hope for at least one chapter, or ideally several, where she is getting her perfect little ass reamed, especially if she can then turn the tables on at least some of them. Oh, and I also hope Paige is included at some point. I think she was injured and taking time off at this point, and while she started out strong in the main roster, particularly NXT (where honestly she peaked) she also lost a lot, so by the logic of this fic surely she must have been AJ Lee's arse whore, and then even worse, Nikki Bella's, making her an easy conquest for Alexa. BTW, I know AJ Lee was gone at this point, but I'm a huge fan of her, so what if in the story she was the Bella Twins's Bitch and Alexa tried to steal her away? I mean, I hated the Bella Twins with a passion, and they were booked strong so infuriatingly consistently that I couldn't bring myself to write about them topping anyone, but I have to admit, I would find that incredibly hot as it totally fits my fetish for models topping wrestlers. I think Liv Morgan is underrated, both as a wrestler and as a hottie with an incredible ass, so I'd welcome a chapter with her, although not quite as much as the possible inclusion of some of the other women mentioned above. Anyway, back to the review. Love Alexa bossing the NXT 'rookies' around, and they're various reactions to her, the extreme of posting kind of stuff online and the reaction to it, and that cryptic message to Alexa at the end. God, I'm so looking forward to finding out who sent it. And kudos on making the first ass to mouth really mean something. I hadn't thought of that, and that's a great twist on the norm. Finally, thanks again for including Mickie in this. Again, she's one of my favourites, and the thought of having her not only be a wrestling veteran, but a submissive veteran who has bottomed to pretty much every woman that crossed paths with her is just perfect to me. Especially that her first top was Trish, as I shipped them so hard it got me into writing fan fiction in the first place. So it figures she has a thing for blondes. I wonder if she'll get to meet Charlotte in this fic? Because again, while her being booked over everyone else at all times frustrates me, the idea of Charlotte being the greatest Dom in the history of the WWE without a hint of submission in her is hella hot. ******************************************* Thank you so much! I always find it hotter when the characters have depth, although that’s not to say PWP has no merits (hell, my “Hart & Fire” Story IS PWP). Glad you like the Becky stuff. It’s really a lot of fun to write, as I really like her as a sub. Yeah, I really wanted to get this posted, and I think in retrospect, I should have taken a couple more days to ensure the sex descriptions were up to snuff. I also think a pitfall is I’m still learning how to write sex acts w/multiple ppl, as one on one is way easier for me to write. As far as Becky and Mickie are concerned, I realize now it came across this way since I had them both sleeping at the foot of the bed, but I don’t necessarily plan for Mickie to be on a leash in this fic. I think that’ll mainly be reserved for the horsewomen. I’m kind of...indifferent to branding I guess? It’s an area I haven’t really explored a lot. I’ll have to check it out more. Thanks for the permission to use alpha female! It was getting hard figuring out what to refer to Alexa as, and I wanted to use it, but I didn’t want to steal it. It’s funny you mention PaiJ Lee, as there are plans for both of them to be in this fic (a little closer to the end, however). I suppose logic should dictate at least Paige as a bottom, although, and not trying to completely copy or anything, the Paige/AJ relationship I envisioned for this fic is closer to how you wrote it in “The Harder They Fall” than “This Is My Ass Now”. However, I didn’t consider the Bellas connection until now...interesting :-) Liv is def underrated, hope they use her sometime on SDL. I’m afraid I might have built the mystery of the sender up too much haha. It’s not exactly a big twist. Yeah, my goal is for each chapter to build on each other, we’ll see how I do with that. I kind of retroactively regret doing a moresome so early in this story. As you saw, I cheated a little with some brief ATM in this chapter, but I still wanted to try to preserve some of it, so that it’s kind of a “wow” moment. Of course! Mickie is awesome and I think that suggestion helped my story! Didn’t consider the Charlotte angle either. That’s most likely an inevitability now.

Hey! Not 100% sure when I’m posting the model topping superior wrestlers story, as right now, I’m struggling a bit with it. I know what I want to have happen in it, but I’m having issues getting it to translate in writing. I mainly labelled it a one shot just because unlike the Alexa story (or even the other one which I may get back to someday), I have no concrete ideas on where to go with it after this, but I definitely wouldn’t rule out a return if people had requests and suggestions. Either way, I’ll hope you like it when you red...er, um, read it. It will be interesting to see how AEW fares for sure. It’s smart that they won’t be directly competing at first, I think. Yeah, hopefully that’s what occurs with this Bayley/Alexa feud. And then maybe Bliss can go to the women’s tag title picture, as it seemed they were building to that anyway, and I like the Nikki Cross pairing (I’m a sucker for out of left field partnerships). To me, the problem w/ Sasha is that she hasn’t been a heel on the main roster really ever (there was Team B.A.D, but that came and went real fast). Not to get into my controversial opinions here, I guess, but I just really think, like how Becky and Bayley work way better as faces, Charlotte and Sasha work way better as heels, and some of Sasha’s babyface stuff has been...rough. Let her be The Boss! (The actual Boss, not just a name that Michael Cole can shout on commentary) No worries, I think it’s in our wrestling fan DNA to complain about wrestling. Now I wish I would’ve used one of those titles haha. It’s mainly called “Alexa On Top” because I couldn’t think of anything, and there’s supposed to be a sorta double meaning in that she’s both on top of SDL, as well as topping the other women, but yeah, it’s kinda...weak. -Heyoo