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Datpootisburdtho

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  1. Suppose I should make with the actual review replies at some point. It was nice to know that somebody liked it well enough to leave a positive review, and that probably mad me continue with this if I’m being honest. Thank you KratosAurion97. Sadly I gotta nix the idea of a twin cat threesome, as Lethe and Lyre aren’t twins. Unless I wanna invoke author fiat and make it so but naaaaaaah. As for Rolf getting cocky, I have been trying to portray him as more confident, and less likely to give the standard “oh no a immodestly-dressed woman I can’t look” response as the story continues. Whether or not that’ll burn him, eh who knows. Thank you Modern Tale-Spinner. I assure you Kratos, you asking for Titania made it sooooo much easier to actually write without making the plot, as much as a story like this can have one, get messed up. And I had to make somebody have a big ass, so why not Titania? And if you want to go into detail about why and how you liked that chapter, please do so, as that will help me improve.
  2. Hey all, Datpootisburdtho here, I have got to get a better name than constant TF2 Heavy references, author of a little rambling I call a story. Here I’ll reply to reviews, talk with the people who read and enjoy my very green attempts at FE smut, and probably take suggestions. Link to the story is below, I’ll go through the chapters and edit them sometime soon I hope, I swear pls don’t kill me. http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600090402
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