Red_Light_Zone
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You dont need to do that.
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Just say that they all end up in a happy polyamorous relationship.
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Why not just post your own challenge? You clearly have it thought up.
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So does Cody still get a harem?
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Just now, Strange_idea said:
Well it would LEAD to sex, especially since cody is suddenly mister ladies man and we have a chance for the girls to 'open up' and reveal their canon personalities, him to accept them (noting they somehow feel right) and to bond with him and fall in love, but i might do that anyway.
...sorry. I'm a sucker for emotional connection
Okay, that does sound cool. But if that's the case, why not just make it one guy who's in it like Cody or someone else decent and have him be mister popular. If everyone is on to each other, nobody os going to want to sleep with anyone because they knew them in the past. And if they do, it'll just be too awkward for both of them. Emotional connection is fine, but there doesn't seem to be a need for sexual encounter.
And, to add a point, everyone has some common sense, meaning that at least one is going to figure out that everyone is still the same from the contest.
Again, this is a good premis for a legit story, just not good smut material unless you make one person live out the fantasy.
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Just now, Strange_idea said:
Okay. But while here, can i hear your thoughts?
It doesn't really feel like something thT should be on this site. Maybe Fanfiction.net. It's a neat idea, but not exactly NSFW.
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1 minute ago, Strange_idea said:
No, there is sex EVENTUALLY. When i feels right and natural.
The way thia works is BEFORE the event, everyone shares and 'if i could be something i'd want to be such-and-such' wish, and in the new world that wish is granted. So if you wished to be popular, you'd suddenly be thrust into the role of yoy-who-is-popular. Lindsay wantes to have people respect her brain and she is now in the shoes of alternate, brainy lindsay.
But she is NOT brainy lindsay, so she struggles. They all do, as they are their old selves playing new roles. Cody, for example, is trying and failing to be the 'cool' cody of this world and is worried they're on to him because they're actig weird.
And EVERYONE is acting weird because EVERYONE thinks the others are onto them, as no-one knows that everyone else is switched over, because they remember everyone else having always been in this role.
Oh, so no one knows that everyone is still the same?
Why dont you make that it's own challenge?
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HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!
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4 minutes ago, Strange_idea said:
Idea for the 'mysterious wake up' version. What if the contestants had a bonding session the night before like when they discussed fears, and in thr new world they are living out those roles, e.g. lindsay wishing she was seen as smarter and being the 'intelligence queen' of the new world school. The problem? They have their old personalities and are struggling to carry out the new roles. And NONE of them remember how anyone else used to be.
Okay, so you lost me. Here's what I got from that.
They're all living in a new world
In this world, they're seen as better that what the were before, like Lindsey being smart or Cody being popular
None of them know each other
And there's no sex?
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1 minute ago, Guest Rbel said:
Why is this such a large harem? Can’t one just focus on the original cast?
That’s up to the writer. I just listed all of the physically attractive members. Do what you buddy.
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Happy Holidays to one of my favorite authors out there!
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2 minutes ago, Guest Kid coheed said:
I think many of us had similar thoughts to that, but the problem comes quick in that once Harry faces a problem, unless your artificial dragging it out would be Harry instantly solving the problem with his God like magic, every fight, every argument, every emergency. So the story become Harry shows up solves the problem and then sits on beach before heading off again showing up somewhere new, solving the problem and the showing up at a new beach. By making him strong but not Godlike he can still have the moments of 'Oh no we may lose' but then you remember it's a Action/Smut fic and Harry saves the day and dicks down some hot chick. Hell you can even do stories where Harry never reveals his Magical abilities like if you cross it over with Kenichi: The Mightiest Disciple and he fucks Shigure, Jennifer Gray (The Gun Chick), Freya/Kaname (who is like 19), even Mildred Lawrence (Archer) and Marmaduke (Axe) from YAMI. The entire story Arc would be Harry actually learning Martial Arts, kicking ass and Fucking hot chicks asses before fucking off to another universe to kick more ass and fuck more ass.
By limiting a characters powers it gives you room to have fun because the space between what they are and 'what they need to be' can be fulfilled with friends and Allies and tricks and gimmicks and puzzles. People that like Superman don't like the stories where he makes little Supermen (with all his powers) fly from his fingertips to back him up and is able to erase Lois Lane's Memories with a kiss. They like it when Superman has to decide whether to save that Woman Falling or stop the man that threw her off the building. By removing that level of power you gift yourself and the character freedom to fuck up or to have the Eureka moment that save his ass.
Very true, but if anime has taught me anything, it’s that the best way to make OP characters work is to focus on other people’s reactions as well as give the OP character some sort of human flaw. Good examples being Saitama, who can literally end any fight in a single punch, but is too foolish to realize the best way to be famous in the hero society. Or Momonga, who despite being a max level player with god magic never before seen in a fantasy land, struggles to keep his composure as the badass lord he makes himself out to be in the face of his abhorrent forces.
I was actually working on a fanfic (More like a rewrite) of a series called Kenja no Mago. In it (my fanfic, not the actual manga), a physicist from our world dies and is reincarnated in a world of magic, raised by THE merlin, and is taught the ways of magic. However, since the limitations of magic is only to one’s own imagination, and because the main character is a physicist, he’s capable of warping the foundations of reality at the age of 15 to the point where other kings, nobles, and rulers fear that he could easily take over the world. Despite this, the main character’s brilliance is matched by his naivitay, as he only uses these magics to hunt demons or make lives easier while not realizing the dangers of creating a spell that can open portals anywhere or building weapons capable of carving mountains and tools that can manipulate organic matter.
You see where I’m going with this, right?
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On 11/26/2018 at 2:23 AM, Guest Kid Coheed said:
Any spell really, a Stunner, Body Bind, a basic Reducto (if they aren't a Logia User). Can all work and work just as well. You can stretch it out over a longer fight to have some fun. He can shrink or make shit invisible, he can be the guy to send that shipment of guns to a group of anti world government types or deliver the food to a poor island who are being held down by the World Government.
I basically see these story ideas as Harry having a ton of fun having adventures and fucking. That's basically it, he's either getting stronger or getting his friends and allies stronger or fucking some chicks. In Pokémon that can be Misty's Sisters, Nurse Joys, Officer Jennys, Sabrina, Janine, Erika and all her Gym Minions, all the lonely moms through the region, all the one off female characters from the Anime aged up a small bit. It's basically the same idea for all of them.
You know, I had an idea like this. Basically, Harry found an ancient tome that taught him how to manipulate reality the same way an artist can draw pictures or a programmer can change code. After the battle with Voldemort in the Ministry of Magic, he stops holding back, obliterates the magic Nazi, and basically fucked off around the multiverse, still learning new ways to use magic like a god while also fucking up other asshole’s day. It sounded good on paper… but it never went anywhere because I never really found a place where he could really fit. And with some of my files being corrupted, I don’t know where to send him.
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I want to see Toon Town above all else. That’s my favorite story from you.
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I imagine him thriving in One Piece considering his Avada Cadavera can kill anyone regardless of their devil fruit. And the fact that he can cast it while others like pirates and marines are busy monologing why they'll take him out and how their above everyone else.
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Nothing beyond the norm, but I believe that there's already a story like that on hentai foundry.
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2 hours ago, Snake_King said:
Uh…not really the kind of protagonist I’d follow, no offense.
Which is why it never went anywhere.
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I actually had a Concept about shimoneta where, because he fails his entrance exams, someone else gets into the high school instead. This person being a closeted perv who knows how naive and ignorant other student’s are, and plans on abusing that to his advantage.
But, like all my ideas, it never went anywhere.
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16 hours ago, Snake_King said:
Hey Praetor.
I just wanted to run by a Spider-Man story idea I had and see if it tickled your interest a bit. It’s admittedly got a similar premise to Omniharem, but hear me out.
Basically, Thanos (or some other big name villain) has wiped out most of the other heroes and is after the cosmic cube, a one-use-only artifact that can warp reality to fit the desires of the one who touches it. Before the villain can touch it, Spider-Man manages to snag it in time and grants his wish, although it went above and beyond what he initially thought it would do. He awakens back on Earth in his bedroom and then finds things have changed as a result of the cosmic cube:
- The heroes who were killed by Thanos/(the villain of your choice) are alive and well
- His parents and Uncle Ben are among the living too
- He’s got respect as a hero both in the super community and among the civilians
- He’s in good with the Avengers and Iron Man has provided him and his family with state-of-the-art security and protection
- Many of the lovely ladies he’s courted or been interested in over the years are all buxom, curvaceous, in heat, and decided that they wouldn’t mind sharing him
Harem:
- Mary Jane Watson
- Gwen Stacy
- Felicia Hardy/Black Cat
- Betty Brant
- Debra Whitman
- Carol Danvers/Captain Marvel
- Kitty Pride
- Black Widow
- Rogue
- Liz Allan
- Black Widow
- Jessica Jones
- Julia Carpenter
- Silver Sable
- Silk
- Any others you would like
Anyway, that’s the idea.
I actually like this idea a lot. Recently, I’ve been reading this story call The Spider by I’mjusttryingtofindmyway (https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12592223/1/The-Spider) a story that involves a comic book fan from our world taking the roll of Peter Parker in a conglomerate universe that combined events from the movies, comics, and cartoons. Despite his struggles, he was able to not only solve most of Peter’s issues like finances and school by using his knowledge of the Marvel Mythos to his advantage, he became the face of the Avengers and the most popular hero through the use of social media. He was so popular, that when he blew up shield to stop Hydra during the events of Winter Soldier, he had legions of fans all trying to bust him out, and even General Ross, backed him up by letting him escape.
My question is, how old is Spider-Man here? Is he in high school, college?
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15 minutes ago, Guest Kid Coheed said:
The idea is a more Ero Version of the popular yet seemingly abandoned Harry Potter Story 'Harry Potter and the Distaff Side' where Voldemort uses a spell on 14 yearold Harry to send him into a world where men are the fairer sex and to side side saddle on a horse is to ride like a Cowboy, much like that Doujin you linked.
While there are real similarities between your idea and mine the biggest difference is the world setting. Mine is still set in the 'real world' somewhat, where men pursue women and women are the fairer sex and ect.
In the challenge I'm purposing it isn't a world where women are the more dominant sex but rather taking place in a town with women and girls hard up for it for some reason, so Hard up they make high end Host clubs to date around or are willing to bang a Highschool Junior/Senior packing a missile launcher in his slacks. Think a combination of NYC where there is a 53/47 split between Men and Women with women coming out a head and modern day Japan where marriage and birth rates are dropping like stones due to men 'grazing' or just not pursuing relationships at all. A city where there is slightly more women and 15% of all avaliable boys just aren't interested in what these girls and women have to offer. And the Naruto comes in selling Porn sex and a Footlong dick for ¥8500 or $75 a pop
Okay, first of all, while you are right in some aspects, there is one thing that needs to be clear. This isn't a genderswap where everything is the same except it's rule 63 all over. No, society has changed because virtues and behaviors of the same people are completely different.
For example if Harry Potter suddenly woke up and took the place of his alternate self, that scene in the GoF where the other schools are introduced to Hogwarts would play out very different. Ron (still a boy) would be very blushing and bashful around the French girls, likely too stunned to make a comment. While Hermonie (still a girl) would look at those hunky Hungarian hottie like nobodies business along with the rest of the girls. Rom would act more innocent to the idea of sex because he likely doesn't understand it (because he's still not that smart) and Hermonie would fully understand the concept of sex and likely wouldn't mind a good finger or two thinking about taking some certain foreigners to bed for a quickie.
Does this make sense?
Second, I get your challenge. Off the bat, it seems like a modern day setting with women more willing. And I like that! A guy using his charms as a service isn't something one typically sees in smut fiction now a days. I just wanted to use the idea of him becoming a gigolo because I already played around with him being a prostitute/slut in the new world. (Also because I didn't know there was a word for it till now, thanks for that.)
Third, thanks for the input, I really appreciate it! You don't need to worry about any actual race play, the character is only supposed to be somewhere between tanned to "ambiguously brown" where he has dark skin but isn't strictly African American. For reference, think of Chad from Bleach, Katara/Korra from Avatar, and Brock from Pokemon.
I'm still trying to make a solid personality for Daisuke Watanabe (his name may be changed). So far, he's a tough, silent, no nonsense type of guy who's internally an awkward nerd that tries to get by life without too much issue. When he gets teleported to Opposite Land, he isn't used to all of the attention and popularity he's getting all of a sudden. So? He tries to figure out the process and navigate through life living in this world. Soon, he figures out just how powerful he really is after realizing that he's been unintentionally becoming a gigolo for some of the richest members of this society? And becomes a much more carefree social butterfly while also gaining some sultry sugar mommas and side pussy to boot.
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16 minutes ago, Guest Kid Coheed said:
Sure, you said it was a original, so is it going on Amazon or whatever or is it being posted on one of these sites?
I’m posting here and on HentaiHaven
The story basically follows the rules of this old doujin here: (https://hentai2read.com/world_of_reversed_gender_roles/1/) where a young man ends up in a world where the gender virtues and sexual behaviors are inversed. So a man who sleeps around would be labeled a slut, while a women would be a stud. Men are much more insecure and emotional while women act more dominant and abrasive. This even extends to their sexual stamina, as a healthy man can only go 2-3 times a day, while a woman can get ready as soon as they want.
In this story, the man that’s sent into this parallel paradise is this large, buff, muscular, and (importantly) dark-skinned young man. Due to his swole body and foreign features, people assume that he’s a delinquent at best, and affiliated with the yakuza at worst. This is despite the fact that he’s a respectable citizen with clean record. Still, he has a decent life, living alone in an apartment with the barest essentials (more on that later) But all that all changes one day when he wakes up to find that the world is… strange. Billboards and ads featuring scantily clad, gorgeous men are everywhere in the city of Satu (The fake Japanese city this takes place in). Women let their tits hang out like it’s no big deal. Entertainment, especially of the explicit nature, are tailored more to females and most porn involve sexy men being taken advantage of by gangs of bitches. But it doesn’t stop there.
Due to this new world, the young man finds himself going from someone who people actively avoided at all costs to this tall, dark, crust covered drink of water everyone wants to sip out of. It’s overwhelming how the shift in popularity occured, but he eventually figures things out and how this world works. At first, he uses this popularity solely for sex with sexy colleagues and strangers. Taking some liberties from your challenge, he starts receiving money and gifts from the women he slept with, unintentionally becoming a Gigolo. And a damn good one considering his size and stamina has only ever been seen in Doujins of unrealistic proportions in this new world. Now fully aware of the power and influence he has, he carefully uses it to pound his way to a better life, and gets more than he bargained for.
I wasn’t sure if I should make him a student in high school/college, or an office worker in his early 20s. Let me know what you think.
Also, for reference of what the protagonist should look like, here’s some pictures to get the general idea.
https://i.nhentai.net/galleries/1259206/10.png
https://i.nhentai.net/galleries/988865/2.jpg
https://66.media.tumblr.com/47f530f7c7aa27fbb90f89ee7e3f1dd3/tumblr_oexix9GEKU1rntn47o1_1280.png
Your thoughts?
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18 minutes ago, Guest Kid Coheed said:
Well please link us in when your done @Red_Light_Zone
@TheDogSage Actually it would only be Temporal Suicide is if that next nut is the nut that makes you or your line.
Would you like to know about it?
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I’m actually in the process of writing something like this, but it’s an original story.
Sword and Sorcery
in Harry Potter
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So… would it be prudent to call him a battlemage? I don’t know, the thought of a “Barbarian” still leaves me with the idea of a burly dude with an axe.