Emperor-of-Evil
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Gotcha. If you need help though I will gladly assist
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3 hours ago, Ikarusu-dono said:
It was the length that I originally had planned for the story. (I.e. potential for 10+ chapters.) When I wrote it the challenge manifested itself in the form of a one shot.
I see. Hmm. I'm honestly not sure if you can make it 10+ chapters. 5 chaptes definitely though
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3 hours ago, Ikarusu-dono said:
Here’s an update on the stories so far:
Gremory’s challenge – It’s about ¾ done, reason for the slow progress being a busy schedule the past couple days & lack of a beta. Went back and corrected the grammar myself.
“Watch Your Back” Combo of Emperor’s and Bitter’s Challenge – I believe that this challenge needs further development. About half of the first chapter was written when I realized that I’d been writing a one shot. So, Emperor & Bitter, let’s do some more brainstorming to shape the challenge differently. And, if we all have such a mind, perhaps an entirely new challenge. (A bodyguard mission?) Not entirely certain where this one’ll end up – but something will get worked out.
Hmm. I honestly don't know what else really needs to be said. What are you having trouble with?
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How does baki fit in? He's from the hidden sand. Unless you meant ibiki instead
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3 hours ago, Ikarusu-dono said:
Before I forget – Bitter wanted to know if the first teen she fucks is genuinely trying to help nurse her back to health or has an ulterior motive. You can pick either, or leave it up to me. Just let me know soon.
Originally it wasnt healing her of drugs. It was a simple cut from a bandit. However I would say ulterior motive would be best
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3 hours ago, Ikarusu-dono said:
Alright, I’ll wait ‘til about 10 PM EST before I start the new challenge. That should be enoguh time for some people from the old thread to come over and give their feedback on the second challenge. While waiting for that deadline I’ll continue on Gregory’s challenge.
Sweet
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3 hours ago, Ikarusu-dono said:
Ultimately there’ll be a sub-plot as you suggested, perhaps Orochimaru or an OC that planned the whole thing. So yes, there’ll be more than just teens.
Alright – with approval from you and Bitter the challenge is (roughly) set.
Any further request for chapters or plot? I’m about 2/3 with the first chapter of Gremory’s challenge.
Nah I think we have all the bases covered
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3 hours ago, Ikarusu-dono said:
That he will.
I’ll probably end up doing a combination of Emperor’s & Bitter’s first challenge. I.e. – Kushina goes to a small town with bandit problems and fights them – teens will attempt to drug her so she can repopulate the village with Shinobi. When she is first fucked it will be by a teen who heals her, per Emperor’s challenge. Thoughts?
I dig it
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3 hours ago, Ikarusu-dono said:
I like your town guard one the best. The mod said, “post a link to [Gregory’s challenge] in this thread as soon as you post it to the Archive, and then you can discuss all of this here.”
Taking his advice under consideration, I’ll finish Gregory’s challenge ASAP. In the meantime could you elaborate further?
Ok so the town guard idea. Kushina has just recently started training again to take a mission after naruto enters the academy. Minato has bot touched her since naruto was born. So after gaining some skills back sbe goes on this simple mission. However during the misssion she is flirted with and even hit on by teens in he town. At first she ignores it but as it continues she feels special from it. At one point a bandit injures her. Nothing fatal or even severe just a small cut. One teen helps heal it and at that point the dam opens up and kushina bangs him. Afterwords however she cant find an off switch for her sex drive so she goes arund town getting banged by teens.
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3 hours ago, BitterNTR said:
Thanks, but I’m in quite the writing slump right now and this thread is for Icarus’ story. I wouldn’t mind hearing that one out through a PM though.
I was referring to a pm
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Bitterntr good to see you on here huge fan of your work. Might send you a message for a story idea if you are interested
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Ok so for both ideas it's pretty straightforward.
Bodyguard: escort and guard a youngteen and his family or a group consisting of young teens with one elder. That way they can make frequent stops so she can get fucked a lot.
Town guard: simple guard a town from bandits. She'd have to stay an extended time for the mission probably 2 weeks to a month. Enough time for her to be banged senseless by teens.
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Ikarusu-dono sent you a message with ideas for story 2
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3 hours ago, Ikarusu-dono said:
Emperor, I'll be sure to message you when the time arrives. In the meantime – do you have any ideas for the #2 challenge?
3 hours ago, WillowDarkling said:I’m going to step in now and ask all of our readers and users to please read the rules for this forum. They are pinned at the top of each of the sub forums.
It is clearly stated that the Challenges and Request forums are for issuing Challenges or Requests to other authors, not for discussing you own ideas. It is also stated in the rules that this forum is not to be used for “think tank” posts, which is what this thread is turning into.
So, please keep any further discussion on this thread focused on the original post, and Ikarusu-dono, create a Review Reply thread in the appropriate subforum as soon as you have a story up on the Archive. There you are free to discuss all of this as much as you like, and guests can post there too without needing to sign up.
Willow Darkling, forum moderator.
My apologies I misread the original ideas vote as coming up with new ideas. I humbly apologize
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3 hours ago, Ikarusu-dono said:
I’m just going to make a blanket statement here – literally for the past 20 minutes I’ve been writing replies to everyone and when I hit “submit reply” the site logged me off.
Emperor-of-Evil: I’d be open to academy ideas, but I’d put them on the back-burner. They’d be the third story I work on after the two ones coming up.
TheBossMan: Majority rules, so I’ll be doing Gremory’s challenge & challenge #2.
Cora: Not bad ideas, but I won’t be using them. People voted for #2 & #4 (Gremory’s idea).
Assasin, Desert and Haruka: Your votes are noted. As #4 is the plurality vote taker and Gremrory’s idea is the winner of it, the idea will become one of the two stories I’m doing.
JordoZ: I listed the rough ideas I had – but nothing concrete, no. Just a general sketch of young, hung teens being guarded by Kushina. Any ideas of yours would be welcome.
To everyone: My apologies for the mass rejection of ideas, but democracy rules. #2 and Gremory’s challenge will be the two main stories. Upon the completion of those Emperor’s academy will take precedence. Any thoughts and ideas are welcome.
Tl;dr – Democracy rules: #2 & #4 (Gremory’s challenge) won. Continue to share ideas.
I understand. Tthak you for letting me know. When you are ready for the ideas I will send them to you no problem.
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3 hours ago, Ikarusu-dono said:
This topic has exploded since I last logged off – quite shocking, really. I didn’t expect it to gain much traction. Thank you to everyone who’s participated thus far!
No problem happy to be on and this being the first topic I take part in since joining yesterday. While you're on now though could I please get an answer on if the academy would be too young for the topic. Cause honestly I can think of ideas you could possibly use on that subject easier. If not though it is fine. I just want to help as much as I can. Tha k you
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http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600106143
Does this one count as bodyguard?
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5 hours ago, JordoZ said:
Hmm, you know...this thread kinda leaves a bad taste in my mouth. Granted, not because of Ikarusu. It seems most people that replied just came to try and force their ideas on you in a way – not one of them even discussed the ideas you already proposed, the ones you’d already thought on yourself. Out of the votes, the one I voted for myself was the bodyguard mission. Since, all the other ones actually have had lemons written for them. Not many, but still there hasn’t been a bodyguard one for Kushina – out of all the ideas, it’s the only one that hasn’t been done already.
Do you have anything thought up for that one?
Admittedly you are not wrong. And for that I apologize but he did say he wanted to hear ideas. In my case though I honestly just had no interest in the other three choices. The genin team has been done before. Same as the bodyguard mission and undercover mission just seems too generic. However that doesnt mean they can be good if done. Before anyone says anything I do not want to start an argument at all. I just wished to state my opinion. Also cause I never got an answer to my original question I just wanted to see if ikarusu could answer my question if he was interested at all.
I retract my statement on the bodyguard story
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For the teen stuff out of curiosity would the academy be too young for her? Cause I can think of a few ideas for it. however if the students wouod be too young I can probably think of other ideas. Do let me know.
Kushina Uzumaki. Konoha's Shota Slut
in Naruto
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I love slutty kushina stories quite a lot and while I don't think there's enough of them to begin with, I believe there's definitely not enough kushina fuccking younger men and boys fics.
So here's my challenge/story idea:
Kushina Uzumaki still has naruto so she's still a mother. Whether minato dies or not is irrelevant to the story. She survived the nine tails. Attack on konoha.
However as naruto grew older kushinas sexual inhibitions waned and soon enough she starts fucking younger men and eventually younger boys around her sons age.
I.e she's fucked by konohamaru on occasion, she teaches at the academy and ends up getting fucked by her class of boys, etc
What I want to see:
Kushina is depraved and doesn't care she's fucking younger men and boys but still loves her family
Big breasts
Blowjobs
Titjobs
Gangbangs
Dirty talk
What I don't mind seeing:
Alive or dead minato (either works)
What I do not want to see:
Naruto x kushina (there is honestly far too much as it is)
Scat
Guro
Incest
I look forward to seeing if anyone is interested in this idea.