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  1. IRL I’m actually kinda squeamish and haven’t done anything quote-unquote “romantic” in over four years now, I think, and I don’t really have confidence anyways. Though I’m certain a lot of people may or may not have picked up on that bit about me having “negative confidence”. So, just about anything I write in my stories, I probably haven’t done, or wouldn’t do. So, because of my squeamishness and vanilla-marshmallow-y-ness, I suppose just about everything I write is no-experience kind of stuff, almost, whether or not it excites me. Although I wonder if that’s the question asked, now that I think about it……….
  2. 36665 Ohhhh noooo, it’s the triple six…… XD does that mean fun times ahead?
  3. The only one I’m writing is the one I’d say I’m proud of. But I can guess a few reasons why it isn’t very interesting for most people. It’s likely very boring, too many explanations of things/monologues of people sitting around talking, pace too slow, chapters are very long, and there isn’t exactly a whole lot of sex. Arguably, not really any, although at one point there’s a bit of innuendo, and I’ve fallen into a bad habit of people winding up crying of blacking out at the end of the various chapters. One of the things I’m trying to get away from. For me, I’m just going to keep writing whether or not anybody’s reading it. It makes me happy, gives me an out for parts of my insanity, keeps me out of too much trouble. If it’s appreciation, I appreciate it. It’s fun-ish for me, and I suppose that’s all that really counts some days, right? Writing for the sake of writing? On that note, some say pride is a sin. I don’t think so. I don’t think any of the Seven Sins or Seven Virtues are those things, but rather things that need to be kept in balance, otherwise being too far one way or the other would destroy a person either mentally or spiritually. Basically, like, I have pride in my story, and you have pride in yours, and that’s okay, it’s not a sin, like some people would say it is, but we’re not really treating it like god’s gift to earth, at least I’m not, although I do wish I could get a review, but maybe that’s the way it’s kept in check. Maybe it’s written really well, and the lack of comments is the way of keeping one’s pride in check? Well, except for when it comes to me. I’m just boring. XD Anyways, my guess is, sometimes people really do like a story, but they just don’t have too much to say about it, so they don’t leave a review? Or they’re not an official registered member? Anyways, point is, maybe people really did like it, but they don’t have anything to say to express their feelings about it?
  4. If that was what can be considered “flirting” then it occurs to me I know absolutely nothing about flirting. While this was something I already knew, it seems I know less than I thought I did. However, whenever I see something like that, I tend to think I’ve made somebody uncomfortable or made them think I’m attempting to flirt with them. While I have no intention of flirting with anybody, at least not conciously, I learned a long time ago that I have to be careful about what I say because I don’t always think about it first. I’m told I generally overthink things and that I usually get things wrong or know nothing about relationships, but basically, in that case it would sound more like you were flirting with them than they were with you. Although I could be wrong. In that case, it could be that she was nervous because she didn’t want to assume you were flirting with her intentionally and seem rude or concieted, or maybe thought you might have been flirting with her and just didn’t want to acknowledge it in hoping you weren’t. If she is taken, then she wouldn’t want to lose a customer or her job over a misunderstanding, so it could just be you potentially put them in an awkward situation. Or, possibly, they were flirting with you. I have no idea. Wasn’t there, I don’t know much about relationships, if anything at all, and I’ve never actually been out on an actual date, so, honestly, I have no credibility there.
  5. Foolish (yugioh card: Foolish Burial)
  6. So, this is my first attempt at a fanfiction, to be fair, and I figured, now would be the time to say something about it, since in the next chapter I’m planning on having them start with the “adventures” that Trainers have. I update it with chapters whenever I write them, but that means randomly, I guess, with no set schedule. I’m putting in any tags I think might be needed, although I’m not quite sure all of them are. I’m probably doing something wrong, so I apologize for that, but if you could PM me, I will probably try to fix it as soon as I get the chance. Author: Sparky Muse Title: Grimouija Region Journey Summary: Two Gijinka- Pokemon turned into half-human, half-pokemon Humanoids- start out on a Trainer’s Journey across the Grimouija (Gree-moi-jah) Region to get badges, figth Team Spirit, and have adventures. A region where Team Spirit is trying to give people the power of Pokemon. Feedback: I would absolutely love to have some feedback or comments. I know I'm probably doing something wrong and it's pretty boring at times, but then at least I know people are reading and hopefully enjoying themselves. Fandom: Pokemon Pairing: N/A Warnings: OC Violence UST Spank Abuse Contro SH Hum Angst MF Bi Dom Ds HJ Oral SH Other WIP Solo story or chaptered story: Chaptered, at the time of this posting, on chapter 9, average of 7 pages on Word apiece URL: http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600090297 Review Reply thread: I do not have a review reply thread yet but plan on editing and putting up a link if I think I need to make one. Part of what I’m doing with this story, other than writing for the sake of writing and for having fun, is exploring things I’ve noticed in Pokemon and explaining them in my own way. I got the idea from Mystery Dungeon, in some ways, where the main character is a human turned into a Pokemon. So why not the opposite? I’m taking things from canon that I’ve noticed in dex entries or item descriptions in the game and putting them into the story as well, trying to make people laugh, examining things and defining them in my own way. I want to address some of the more disturbing things there, like in some dex entries it says when people die they become Pokemon, or that some people eat Pokemon or Pokemon eat other Pokemon. I’m defining in my own terms how Pokeball, Trainer Bag, and PC technology works, and how Pokemon have their powers. I haven’t written it in yet, kind of, but I will have Pokemorphs eventually. I’m kinda of squeemish about outright writing sex scenes and not quite ready to give into my dark side yet, although Chapters 6 and 7 might be interesting for those who are looking for that. 0.0 *whistles innocently* I know I’m long-winded, rude, and boring, but the idea is more to figure out my own thoughts over anything else. My goal is to try and take a bunch of things from canon dex entries or games and toss them together into a story for the fun of it. I have not played the Pokemon Ranger series by the way, so my depiction of the Ranger Corps might be off.Sorry about that.
  7. 0.0 To be fair…. although I’m a very squeemish/shy person when it comes to sexual matters, and don’t know too much about it at all…...I just wanted to say, I find it funnier/better to use puns when writing, depending what you’re writing. Referencing the source material if possible or the situation people find themselves in, while I don’t think it’s always clever, can make for a better sex scene in several cases. That said, while I have heard most of the words here that I saw while skimming through as a quick glance, and do use them on occasion, I also find I have certain speech patterns I find hard to break. Knowing them might not make too much a difference if a person isn’t actively trying to find ways to use them. I’ve certainly fallen into a rather repetitive pattern with my usages, far as I can tell.
  8. 36584 Aww…. nobody’s playing the other forum games….. 0.0
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