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  1. well, its more an opening scene w him ‘training’ her n her having to leave early, bc i like Naru getting degraded by him. so im just splashing him here n there. no big scenes.

    alright, I get what ur going for here. so hows the layout? in a session w mizuki, she goes to the hokage, mention hanging out w sasuke, he goes to town on her then n the hokage scene w the itachi flashback?

    will have to change something in the other chapter too for the sasuke part.

  2. I did use him during that scene, if only briefly. so maybe a swarm of uchiha bros? i think the set up would be nice as well with a tell dont show vibe.

    hm, that’d be interesting, like her dragging him off for some hanky panky? but he takes the reins fast?

    n what kind of mizuki stuff do u have in mind? bc I am opening w him in this chapter. hard to think how to dip him into some chapters w out going too into it.

  3. i like it, some uzumaki-cest would be yummy. plus Naruko could learn to bite her just right~ man, so noting that. she can be Naruko’s sex secretary or something. n no, no filler.

    also, after his little clone bang, should Itachi would sweep her with tsukiyomi? like 3 days w of constant fucking to make her mind go numb? n easier to set up for sasuke?

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