Mal

I think that a competition would be really good. I think the girls can turn off their inhibitions for a fun, special day just like they did for the pool orgy. 
Gotta go with what's hot, what escalates the story, and what degrades the characters the most. I'll vote option 1 and put my trust in Mal to do a great job with it. 

Hey there gang! I just wanted to pop on real quick because, as Joe pointed out, Billion Dollar Harem has just hit 150,000 dragon prints! I won’t go into a lot of mushy stuff this time around, but, I do want to thank all of you guys for reading along and offering up your comments, criticisms and suggestions over these past few years. I also want to especially give a shout out and a huge thank you to my editor, you know who you are! Thanks so much, my friend!
I also wanted to announce there will be a fan poll in the works for hitting this milestone! But, before that, I thought I should clear up the resolution to the last poll. I never officially announced it, but I closed the voting on it a while back after it seemed most of you had cast your votes.I wanted to quickly share those results with you guys.
The winners are:
Newcomer: Ariana Grande (by one vote!)
Veteran: Emma Watson (won by 3 votes)
Scene: The winner was scene 5 (by an overwhelming 11 votes!) Just a reminder, scene 5 was: As a gift to their master, the veteran asks the newcomer for their help giving him a present he’ll never forget in a scene featuring a “moderate” to “hard” fetish of my choosing.
I can’t of course say how long it will take to work this scene into the story, but I honestly could see it happening within just a few chapters, depending on how long it takes to wrap up the current day/events… My guess would be within 3-4 chapters.
Now, here is my plan for the new poll. Since it seems at least some of you really like lazyninjas idea, and I know I think its pretty cool, I want to try and incorporate it. But, here is the caveat, there is no way I could write a smut scene(s) depicting the entire sex competition. Mostly, this is because it would probably take 2-3 chapters just for that one thing. With 5 pairings, then the grand finale that right there is a serious page commitment. I’m simply not willing to commit that much of my time for what would basically amount to a small side plot. But, I want to stay true to what lazyninjas proposed. So, here is my idea.
I will generate 5 random pairings (this won’t occur until after the final two ladies are announced. Which will, by the way, delay the implementation of this poll at least until a few chapters after all the ladies have arrived in the harem. Which could right there mean that this scene won’t happen for 8 or 9 maybe even 12 chapters...  (Random pairings will be determined by me using dice) I’ll have you guys vote on which pairing should win the competition. (Those pairs which didn’t win will receive a much shorter synopsis of their attempt to seduce Alex, which I would feature as part of a different chapter.) The winning pair will get a featured section of a chapter where I detail how/what they did to win. Then that lucky couple will be included in a second scene with Alex being more intimately involved. I would imagine this scenario right here would take one entire chapter to put together. Alternatively, if you guys don’t want to wait that long for the next poll to be featured in the story, I could create some different scenarios similar to those I’ve created in the past and just have  you guys vote on those. So, for the first stage of this poll, here is what I want you guys to vote on:
Sex Competition (assuming the caveats I’ve detailed above) Standard Poll created by me In a month or so, I’ll announce the winner and then create a poll for you guys to vote on. (keep in mind if option 1 is selected, this poll will not be posted to the forum until after the final two girls are announced). As always, please do  email me with your votes if you don’t feel comfortable posting them here in the forum. If you have any questions, email me or post them to the forum. I will be more active here this next month in an attempt to resolve this poll.
Once again, thank you guys so much for 150,000 dragon prints! You guys mean the world to me and have fun with the voting!
Till next time,
-Mal

@Romavictrix I think there’d have to be a major timeskip cause Emma Watson’s birthday is in April.  Would be interesting if there is a timeskip sometime in the story, like the last women come after they seemed to finally settle in with Ari’s introduction.  

I think this could easily be worked around with Alex saying it’s fine to not enter, but then each girl who would sign up reads that they may get partnered up with a random girl  and have each girl think about it before finally accepting. For a prize he could do something like give them no weigh ins or chores for a week or even maybe a “get out of the punishment room” free card for a one time slip up. They couldn’t do anything on purpose for it to be used but an “oopsie” situation could be worth it. 
 
 
You can always have it so if Emma is not in the game and keeps her top status.  Alex could make it so they have level 5 freedoms but are still their level they’re at before the contest started, so the two winners still have to obey Emma by the end if you decide to do the level 5 reward. This can also help Alex develop stronger bonds with girls that have just arrived like dove or have had a bad history in the harem like Bella and help build/rebuild a stronger relationship to Alex.  
 
 
For the recent chapter, I love that dove got an entire chapter to herself mostly and how she had sorta of a split personality thing going on as she said we and us. Like the darker side of someone seen as pretty innocent isn’t as innocent as we believe.  She needed some character development like this. Great Chapter. 

I liked giving development to Dove and what Alex’s goal is with her.  The interaction with Ariana was good but felt the line was weird.  Like the wording felt...too proper while trying to be mischievous??  Still, can’t wait for the next one!

Man Alex does some magical shit in his bedroom. Love it! 

Hello again, Multiverse!
Good news everyone, Chapter 39 is here! The new chapter exactly meets my new page goal at 15 pages. This is mostly because it only details one girl’s events. It picks up at the very beginning of day 41 and covers just a tiny fraction of the day. I won’t give away which celeb is featured in this chapter, but I hope you like her, cause this chapter is all about her. Only one other celeb gets any page time, and that, is very limited. It was necessary to do the chapter this way to establish the next phase of this celebs journey. The smut in this chapter may be a little vanilla, but I think that  just opens it up for all sorts of depravity to come in the future. 
I plan to start chapter 40 sometime soon. I’m debating however, on page length. As it stands now, chapter 40 could either have no sex and hit the 15 pages, or, to include some smut, it would likely have to go significantly over the limit, which could inhibit the time it takes me to get it done. I haven’t really decided yet what I’m’ going to do. In someways hitting 40 chapters is a big deal, and I’d like that hallmark to be a chapter to remember. But I also don’t really want to write a 25-30 page chapter just to include some smut… I suppose we’ll just have to see how things turn out. Either way, I’m planning some time soon to include a time jump. I plan to fast forward at least 2 days. Other things I see coming soon (in the next chapter or 2-3) is Taylor’s punishment coming to an end, Margot and Felicity relationship continuing to evolve, and hopefully, the second fan selected smut scene that you guys voted on in the middle of last year. It might take 3 or 4 chapters to get all this in. But once I do, I’ll be looking to finally bring in the final two celebs, and that promises to be a very memorable moment!
Alright, let me then just quickly move onto you guys:
Joe: I hope two chapters at once wasn’t more “content” than you could handle.  I’m glad you like the BDSM scene. I was kind of worried that there had been so much Mdom at this point that a switch up could really turn people off. But honestly, I’ve had a ton of positive feedback about Alex getting lightly domed, so I may bring it back again at some point. As for the Bella/Coke/Depravity comment, all I can say to that is that I really hope you guys like what I have planned for Bella. My gut tells me you guys will either love it or hate it….
lazyninjas: Hey man! Its great to see that you’re still following along. Its been so long since you chimed in I thought maybe you’d given up on me.   On the one hand I love your idea. I think it would be truly fucking awesome to see pairs of unlikely girls pair up / team up and put on a show. I think it would be super fun to write, and really fucking hot to see play out on the page. On the other hand, I don’t think a contest like this is at all Alex’s style. First off all, outside of the punishment room, he is all about free will. So I don’t think he would ever directly force the girls to pair up, let alone with someone they didn’t want to be with. Second, Alex is a fairly measured guy. Meaning, I don’t think he would just willy nilly take power from Emma (someone who earned the right to lead through her action and her attitude) just because someone else won a contest. Last and probably least, there are two more girls on the way in (either Gal Gadot or Alexandra Daddario, and an as of yet unannounced surprise celeb) meaning there will be a total of 11 girls. Now, Emma could sit out and there would be 10, but I just really don’t see Alex forcing the girls to do this. The only way it could work would be if they freely signed up for it and chose their partners, or signed up for it knowing that they would be assigned a random partner.  If I did decide to do this, that would be the way I would have to set it up and the prize would have to be different I might have to give some thought to what the winners would get. Maybe what I’ll do is set this scenario in motion for the next fan selected vote project with clearly defined voting parameters. I’ll give is some thought, because I do think it would be fun to pair up unlikely girls… Overall this is a great idea!
Juan: Glad you enjoyed the chapter. More Taylor torment on the way! But… maybe soon she’ll be back in action…. you’ll just have to wait and see.
Romavictrix: Glad you too enjoyed the chapter. I plan on taking lazyninja’s idea under consideration, though likely, as I said above in a modified way. The book...is thus far not coming along as well as I would like. I have only made a little progress, and I keep second guessing where the many different ideas I have should go… Perhaps this month will see more progress there…. Valentines day? Not so much, as Sazbi said, February is a very long way off. I will say this though. Although I did not do it on purpose I think this chapter (39) is kind of romantic in a twisted girl succumbing to Stockholm Syndrome kind of way…  So maybe that counts as a Valentines day Chapter…. I’ll leave that up to you to decide. 
Sazbi: I too am looking forward to the new Chloe’s interactions. I think there is a lot of potential there, especially in one of the rules Alex gave her. I’m thinking specifically of the rule where he said she has to “obey” all the grown ups in the harem… that could be very fun to play with… This is a question I can answer for once! When Taylor’s punishment ends, she does not go back to being a level 4. Once a girl is demoted, the only way to get back to that level is to earn it. (I may have ignored that rule one time, I can’t remember for sure), but for the most part once demoted, you have to earn you previous potion over again. I really hope you all like what I have planned for the final two girls. Not only do I hope you like my selections, but I hope you find the way I plan to bring them in believable and exciting… we’ll see!
Well: I’m not quite sure I understand what you mean by put a collar on all of them. All of who, every girl in the harem?
One last thing before I go. I am currently working on something. A very dark project with a very questionable fetish… (I won’t go into detail yet, but it has nothing to do with snuff or underage celebs) I am unsure if, when finished, that I will post it here on AFF because of the dark themes and demented fetish. (although I am unaware if AFF disallows certain types of content when it comes to real people) I will say this though. The story stars Dove Cameron, and I will post it on a different site even if it doesn’t go up here. I will let you know when it is done either way, and, if I don’t post it here, I will give you guys a link or someway to find it… I’m not sure if that violates this forums rules… I will have to look into that. But rest assured, if you are interested in reading it, I will find a way to get it to you. 
Ok gang, 
I’m Back to the Black,
-Mal

Had an idea for a day or chapter that might interest you mal. Here’s what would happen. 
 
Alex decides he wants to make a contest within the harem. Alex would pair up the most unlikely couples (Bella/Felicity, Ariana/Margot ect..) and they would have a sort of sex contest. they would choose to either have a threesome with Alex or do a lesbian session in front of Alex and the duo he finds turned him on the most or made him cum the hardest gets to sleep with him in his room for 3 days and also have level 5 privileges for those three days too. 
 
I know Alexandra Daddario or Gal Gadot is supposed to enter at some point so then there would be 10 girls exactly to match up. Now as to why I think this would be a good idea for you to write is because it gives the readers chances to see girls together that don’t really interact much sort of develop a relationship while grouped together and it spices up things for you in case the same relationships get stale. It also gives Alex a chance to see what certain girls would do with level 5 clearance. The absolute best part of this however is if you ended it on a cliffhanger of who alex chooses as the best “act” so to say and let the forum vote on who wins the challenge. Hope you take this idea into consideration Mal. 
 
-LazyNinjas
 

Hey Mal. Real great stuff on the most recent chapter! I hope my girl Taylor will be back in action soon. I miss her worshipping Alex. 

I’m interested in the interactions between the new Chloe and the rest of the harem.  When Taylor’s punishment ends does she end up back at level 4?  Kind of wish there will be a moment with Ari and Tink fighting for attention between the girls.  Can’t wait for how the last two women get introduced. 

Hello again everyone! 
I promised a short turn around and I aim to please! So here we are, chapter 38 is now up on the site exactly one week later! I doubt things like this will happen very often, but I had some very unexpected downtime in December and January and as such, was able to get a lot of work done. This chapter went a little over my new 15 page goal at 20 pages, but I think the extra length was justified to properly finish up the much anticipated BDSM / Alex / Emma / Cara scene that you folks voted on in what I’m sure seems like forever ago to most of you. But, I try to keep my word, and I have delivered the much promised scene and well I think it turned out pretty freaking incredible. I honestly can’t wait to hear what you guys think as its done in a way I’ve never tried before, I’m sure you guys will have no trouble picking up on how its different. Aside from the BDSM scene, this chapter furthers the Margot / Felicity stuff that was teased in the previous chapter, as well as has some stuff with and Taylor. It also features a little hint of something to come for one of our newcomers in the next chapter!
Speaking of which, I’m about 5-6 pages into chapter 39 as of right now I expect it will be ready for publishing by the end of the month or early in February we’ll just have to see. I am also working on my book, and a new secret project here and there so how quickly 39 gets done will depend greatly on how much of a diversion those two things prove to be. But 39 promises to be a lighter affair as our newbies begin to become more comfortable in their new home. By the way, I haven’t forgotten the other scene poll. If I remember correctly, (I don’t have the info in front of my atm), but I believe Ariana and Emma in a present to Alex scene were the winners. I have plans to put that scene in probably in 40 but we’ll have to see how much some of the other side plots distract from that.  Other than that, 39 will mostly be about furthering the developing plots as we get closer to the announcement of the final two celebrities. (I’ll announce them in the story before I put it up here...) I expect it will be at least 3 chapters maybe 4 before I’m ready to announce them Oh, and fyi this will be an entirely new… that’s right NEW method of introduction!
Ok, enough of that, on to you folks then I’m out!
Sazbi: I hope it was a pleasant surprise for you! The DD/lg fetish is one I’ve been wanting to write and incorporate into BDH for quite sometime. It was just a matter of bringing it in the right way and with the right celeb. Personally, I think I nailed it! I’m not sure what you mean about Margot’s being upset with Emma’s reaction, it was Emma who turned Chloe into Toy and Margot was just as upset with that as she was with Ari’s transformation… As to the RIP to Toy, I would say that is a safe assumption. The DD/lg fetish is very likely here to stay. I obviously can’t speak to Bella or project Arcadian, but I will say that plot line is far from resolved…. <queue the dramatic music!>
Juan: You mean like Chloe making her own sexy music video while dressed in a Catholic school girl’s uniform… Hmmmm a Catholic school girl’s uniform… I wonder if that could somehow be incorporated into the DD/lg fetish…. hmmmm very interesting <grin>  If you like where Bella is now, I can’t wait for you to see just how far I’ll push it! We’ve barely scratched the surface of Project Arcadia.
ArcherNexus: Thank you for the very kind words, good Sir or Madam. They are very much appreciated. I do what I can to keep the story fresh and interesting!
Well: First off thank you. It feels very good to feel so much better. I hate feeling that way and unfortunately I have to live with knowing that feeling will likely return. But as long as I stay positive, and have things to help bring me back from it, I also know that I can banish that feeling and go on with my life. I’m glad you like Chloe’s outfit. I have plans for her to wear all kinds of little girl stuff maybe even… a school girls uniform…  I’m not sure what you mean by your “put all of them” question. And, if everything works out with Cara, Bella and Taylor won’t have to share a room, which I know could have been fun, but I guess you’ll just have to read on to see.
Ellen Degenerate: I’m very glad that my little story inspired you to create an account and more importantly to add your voice to the discussion of that story. I am always very excited to hear what my fans have to say about the story, and to try and answer their questions. Please do feel free to chime in whenever you like, I try to respond to everyone whenever I post a new chapter. Also, I very much appreciate the compliment. As I’ve said on numerous occasions, I do this story just as much for you guys as I do for myself so in a way I’d be doing it a disservice by not being dedicated and trying my absolute best to put out a great story. As to CSSA, there are a couple of reasons I didn’t like posting there. 1) Once posted, you have no power over your story. So if I wanted to make a small change or correct a small mistake, I can’t edit it. (I try not to make big edits once posted because I feel that it could impact too much of what has already occurred). It also means that if I ever for some reason wanted to remove my stories from there that I would be unable to do so. And 2) The quality of submissions there wildly varies and the time lapse between when you submit a story to be posted and it actually going online is sometimes ridiculous. I think it has been over six months since the site has been updated at this point… When I finish a piece, I want it up right away, not six months later… Lets see, I plan to add two more girls. Those will be the last two, but I seriously hope you won’t be disappointed when you see one of them in particular fall from grace… should be pretty awesome! (I can’t say who they will be, but it is unlikely one of them will be Beyonce….) Finally, if you are new to the thread, you might not know that I created a hand drawn map of the complex which I’ve offered to share with anyone who sends me an email. If this is something you’d be interested in, simply drop me an email and I’ll pass it along.
Ok gang, that’s it for now. Hope you all enjoy the new chapter!
Till next time,
-Mal

Hot stuff, Mal! I hope Chloe can do a Britney Spears “One More Time” schoolgirl kind of thing sometime. I also really like how Bella is becoming a coke addicted slut. Keep up the fantastic writing!

Hey gang! 
I have great news for everyone who commented anything along the lines of “can’t wait for the next chapter.” Because, that day is here! That’s right folks, I’m publishing chapter 37 onto the site right now! This chapter definitely falls with in the guidelines of my newer shorter chapter format. Its only 16 pages in Word. But, don’t let that get you down. It is still chalked full of smut and interesting plot development. In this chapter that mostly takes the form of Chloe getting a “LITTLE” adjustment. I found this chapter particularly… engaging… yeah that’s the best word for it. The chapter was extremely engaging lol! In addition to Chloe, we get to see the full reaction of the Harem to Ari, and a little sneak peak of things to come for Bella. I really hope you like this chapter, I honestly think its one of my favorites as it features a fetish I’ve been dying to write for… well for a very long time. I can’t wait to hear what you guys think.
In other good news. Because of some very unexpected down time, chapter 38 is almost done! I don’t want to spoil anything of what is to come. I’ll simply say that my days of putting off writing the Alex, Emma, Cara, BDSM scene, you know, the one you guys voted on like forever ago are finally over! I can’t say for certain when I’ll get it posted up. It still needs a bit of work, but I would imagine the turn around will be very short. Probably a week or so, so please do look back soon! After I get 38 posted up, I plan to put in some much needed work on my E-book, and probably won’t begin work on chapter 39 till nearer to the end of the month. I hope to have 39 done and posted by maybe 2/15 or so… Lastly, I mentioned a while back that I was on a roughly 50 chapter time table to finishing Billion Dollar Harem. Well, I going to revamp that a little. Since going to this new shorter format, and not being at a point yet where I can introduce the final two ladies, I think it only right that I up the count. By my guess, it’ll take around 60 chapters or so to finish this story up. So good news for you is plenty of BDH yet to come!
Finally, I wanted to thank everyone who took the opportunity to wish me happy holidays. I really appreciated it. Mostly, I spent my holiday at work. But that honestly worked out for me because it also gave me lots of time to work on my stories.
Now I’ll just address a few of the  comments that were directed at the story:
Joe: I enjoyed your comment. I haven’t seen that movie, or is it a TV show… Its Disney something right. (But then again what isn’t Disney at this point?) Thank you for the comment, and you’ll be happy to hear the writing is going very well and I’m very excited to be back at it!
Steel: Thanks! Its good to be back here in the Black. Now I just need to find a nice Alliance friendly bar on U day! (P.S. if you don’t get the reference, a, shame on all of you, and b, you must watch Firefly like today!)
Juan: Margot and Emma you know, sometimes I feel the same way. Like why can’t I just get these two chicks into bed. Then… I wake up and remember why… lol! On a serious note though, I do have things planned for them. I can’t tell you unfortunately whether those plans include them hooking back up. But I, like you am rooting for those two crazy kids!
Sazbi: If you didn’t see Chloe’s reaction coming, I know you won’t see whats in store for her in this chapter. Hint: Its just a LITTLE adjustment! 
Romavictrix: I look forward to writing those new chapters. and I’ll try to give you guys progress reports on the e-book as it proceeds.
Alrighty guys, that’s about it for now. Remember to check back soon for chapter 38!
I’m Back to the Black,
-Mal  

Great chapter, Mal! Bella just can’t catch a break. 
With Margot and Emma, I find myself saying, “Just Fuck Already!!” I hope it works out for them and that they have some group fun with some of the other ladies and Alex. 

Well guys, as I sit down to write this update, I almost don’t even know where to start its been so long since we talked. I guess the first and most obvious thing, is that I’ve just posted Billion Dollar Harem chapter 36! So, yay for BDH not being dead! 36 picks up on day 40, or the very next day where chapter 35 left off. I don’t want to give to much away in the forum, but several big things get set in motion. Things which will play out in upcoming chapters. It sees an end to Bella’s session in the punishment potty, a new form of corruption, a potential rekindling of an old romance, a brief glimpse at the harem’s reaction to having a new pet, and a teaser for upcoming things with Chloe. I didn’t quite get to the much much much promised scene with Emma and Cara, but I promise it will happen soon. I plan for it to be in the next chapter, but I’ve said that before…. However, this time I’m going to try really really really hard to mean it lol….
Well that’s enough about chapter 36, I guess its on to me… First off, I want to apologize for my extended absence. There were several contributing factors that I’d like to share with you guys. As I talked about in my past couple posts for a while there, things at work were pretty crazy. There for a couple months I was working a ton of hours and being put into some stressful situations and I found it hard to concentrate on writing even when I had the time to do so. More than that though, since right about the time I posted chapter 35 I was struggling with depression. For me this is a problem that comes and goes I’ll go long periods where I feel fine, and then I’m stricken with it and will be almost immobilized for weeks on weeks. Its not really something I like to talk about, but it effects my confidence and my drive to work on anything, much less my writing. Anyway, this bout was particularly tough for me to overcome as things in my RL, (not just work) weren’t exactly great and I just sort of felt very underappreciated in everything I was doing. In addition to my mental health, I was also struggling financially and considered giving up BDH in order to work on writing that I might be able to make money off of. I worked briefly on that Hogwarts Harem project while I thought about my options… In the end though, I started to feel better and decided why not do both? I began working on an e-book. For the past two months or so I’ve been brainstorming and sample chapter writing ideas for a short novel that I could market on Amazon. This story would, of course, feature original characters and a brand new storyline with brand new characters and some brand new, for me at least, fetishes to play around with. Right now, that book is in its very early stages and I plan to give some brief updates as progress on it advances. In the mean time I don’t really want to let you guys down, I did after all promise to finish Billion Dollar Harem. So, as of right now, I’m moving forward with the following plan. I’m going to try to put out 1 chapter of BDH every month, although from here on out I’ll be aiming for a soft chapter page limit of around 15 pages instead of 20. If I can write a shorten chapter in 2 weeks, that will leave me 2 weeks to work on my e-book. Its my hope, that in a year or so I’ll have BDH finished, and an e-book ready for publishing. Now, I’m notorious for missing deadlines, so that timeline is definitely not set in stone. But I’m a man who likes to have a plan...and for now that is it lol!
Lastly, I’d like to take a moment to thank everyone who wished me well or who thought about me over the holidays, or who reread a chapter of Billion Dollar Harem (or any of my stories really) while they waited for my return! You guys are so amazing and as I’ve said on multiple occasions the reason this story even exists as it does today. Without all of you I would have given up a long time ago. I won’t address individual comments, but I wanted to assure you all, everyone who made them, I saw them and they helped me when things were hard for me. They gave me a little light to help move forward and I’m not sure I would have found my way out if not for knowing you all would be here to support me on the other side! Billion Dollar Harem is your story as much as it is mine and I look forward to finishing it for all of us! Its not quite the new year yet, but, I’m raising a glass (Diet Pepsi, not liquor, I don’t drink) to all of you for a great year ahead and to not looking back on the failures of the past. Thanks to all of you!
I’m out!
Till next time,
-Mal

Hey Mal! Nice to see you back on the forum.

Well it’s very good to see you still reply to this thread.  First off, I’d like to thank you with the power of a billion people for this story.  It’s so excellently written that, no pun intended, I can’t put it into words.  I’d come across this story probably over a year ago but only read part of the first chapter and then forgot about it.  Oh how stupid I was.  I finally got around to reading it, expecting to only find mindless sex.  But the way you manage to weave this story into what could, in a horrible alternate world, be a factual story is so beyond my own writing comprehension (I have a story of my own in the Fallout category named The Lone Wandering Couple if you’d like to check out what I’ve got so far) that I can barely understand how you managed to write it.  The way Alex has planned for every eventuality is incredible.  From the infallible (save for Zeru, that lazy dumbass) African guards to the code locked doors that can sealed from a central CIC to the knockout gas to the end of the line neurotoxin hall.  The way Alex is able to play with his girls buttons like a master accordionist playing Säkkijärven Polkka and was able to turn Emma from a feminist, women’s rights, UN ambassador to the lover and supporter of a man who’s kidnapped her and 8 other celebrities and holds them in a doom fortress in the middle of the Yukon wilderness and who, when presented with the choice (rigged choice of course) of being able to call for help or continuing the life she and the others live, she chooses the latter.  Everything is so perfect that I’m practically giggling just writing this.  On a side note, I just thought.  Is it possible to hike/climb up to Alex’s mansion?  I mean, if people can climb Everest and return alive, then surely someone could stumble upon the mansion.  If they could, how would Alex handle it?  Also, do you think it’d be interesting for one of the new captures, Ari or Dove whichever, to get some alone time with Emma and have a conversation explaining how she could’ve fallen so hard so fast?  The idea of having someone who knew Emma as a women’s rights feminist find out that she assists Alex in breaking new girls and keeping the rest in line is so juicy, my mouth is practically watering.  Just some random, curious thoughts. 

Now if I tried writing out everything I loved, this post could be a story in and of its own lol so I’ll just sign off with letting you know that I have officially named Alexander Whitley my honorary brother.  This is a title that no other character in any mode of media, from TV shows to Movies to Anime to other fanfiction, adult or otherwise, can boast.  Please keep up the writing.  I can’t get enough.

Hey guys, I know it feels like forever, but I’m back.
First off, I just want to say I’m sorry this chapter was a little longer in coming than I would have liked. There were a number of problems that conspired against me getting to you guys as soon as I would have liked. The first, being that this is the longest chapter yet, at 24 pages in word. The second being that there were a number of continuity problems, caught by my editor that had to be addressed before I could post it. Finally, and perhaps most importantly, is, and basically there is no other way I can put this, THINGS HAVE BEEN A GODDAMNED NIGHTMARE AT WORK! (sorry for the all caps assault.) This is the busiest time of year for me at work and it just simply makes it harder to find the time and motivation to work. Also, and I’m very sorry to say this, but its likely things won’t get much better in the next month / month and a half. Which is another way of me saying that chapter 35 is here, but it might be just as long before chapter 36 is up. (I’m officially putting Emma Watson’s Blowbang Spectacular on hold till things slow back down at work.) I want to do my very best to deliver one chapter of BDH every month and right now I just don’t know that I can do both. (I’m not even sure I’ll have 36 done before September is over. (But, it should be close either way.) And that’s not to say that things at my job could slow down earlier, and I’ll have more time and motivation, making it possible 36 will come faster…. Its just too hard to say right now. (I HAVE A VERY UNPREDICTABLE JOB!) 
Ok! Lets talk 35. This chapter, as promised has a ton of plot for upcoming stuff in it. Plenty of harem politics, new friendships, old friendships and even a touch of the unexpected… Overall, I think this chapter is one of my best from a writing perspective. We get to see Alex continue to work with his new kitty cat. We also get to see Emma really beginning to thrive as harem mistress as she goes above and beyond to bring people together. As for the smut scene, it should be (at least I think) a very pleasant surprise, and, if I do say so myself, exceedingly hot. I won’t spoil the surprise of who’s in it and how things go down, but I really hope you guys enjoy it. Finally, as I’m sure some of you will notice, I’ve laid all the ground work I’ needed to finally include the first fan selected smut scene. If everything goes as planned, it will be in chapter 36. 
As I’ve said, I plan to only work on chapter 36 this month. I have some big things planned for this chapter. Lets see, well first off, as I just said will be the inclusion of the first fan selected smut scene. To those of you who voted it should be no surprise as to who will be in it or at least part of what it will contain so I won’t say more about that. We also should see an end to the Bella-potty and the Ari-cat’s introduction as well as some surprise torment involving (section deleted). The only other thing I really have planned right now for 36 is to continue to build on relationships and plots that have begun to develop in 35. I’m not quite sure yet just how that will take shape though.
I’d like to offer a big shout out to my editor. It was just over a year ago on August 14 2017 that I started working with him. He has had an immeasurable impact on this story and my writing, and I can’t imagine this story taking shape without his influence. So, THANKS BUDDY, YOU KNOW WHO YOU ARE! I really really hope you guys will take the time to thank him as well. Without him I guarantee this story would be very different, and not for the better. If you want to thank him for all his hard work, just please add a #THANKS to any posts you make. I’m quite sure he will appreciate it and I will too.
Lets move on to you guys:
ArcherNexus: All I can say to that comment is that there is a reason I write. I have all these fucked up fantasies and I think the very best way to get them out is to write them down. That way no one gets hurt, and ideally, I can entertain some people in the process. As to your Ariana fanfic, I really enjoyed your Emma Watson fic, so my advice would be to write it down. Ariana is smoking hot and in my opinion doesn’t have enough stories. Anything you write would be welcomed I’m sure. There is more Ariana training stuff in this chapter (admittedly, though not as hardcore) for you to enjoy and plenty of Emma, although I don’t know that she could be described as bitchy in this chapter…
Niveral: I’m really glad you enjoyed 34. I hope you like 35 as well. as I said, I think its very good. But then again, sometimes I really like a chapter and it ends up getting like zero feedback so...who knows… I also hope you enjoy the short little Emma/Margot scene in this chapter and I should say that your comment in no way influenced the way their interaction went down. I’ve had an end game in mind for those two well… basically since almost the very start so… I can’t wait to get you guys there. As for your suggestion about Chloe…. hmmm what can I say without giving anything away…. I think all I can say is that big, no, little… yeah… little things are in the works for her
Sazbi: Ariana’s intro will have to wait till the next chapter… unfortunately. I just didn’t have enough space in this one. But, you will get to see her official kitty uniform. I hope you guys like it! Also, Alex goes over some of the logistics of her being a cat, so that should answer some of your other questions / concerns.  And, there is a conclusion, of sorts, to the Margot / Cara problem. It is my hope that after BDH, that I will continue to produce fiction. Now, what form that will take I have yet to decide. But, I started this with the intention of practicing my writing, and I think I’ve grown by leaps and bounds. If you don’t believe me, just re-read chapter 1… wow is that a mess. I do have a few ideas about what will come after BDH ends but I’m just not ready to share them yet. As to your plot to smut ratio concerns…  we’ll just have to see how that goes down. When I say I want them in by chapter 40, I hope to have them in and ready by 40 not announced and in transit…. (hint that means an in story announcement will be coming soon)
Juan: As I said above, there’s more Ariana stuff in this chapter and its much lighter fair so you should really enjoy it… its logistical rather than sexual, but the build up is half the fun...right... and I completely agree with your assessment. One of the main reasons Ariana’s initiation was so rough was so that it would be believable that she would fall in to this new role and do so without much rebellion. As for your question about whether I always intended Emma to be in charge. The simple answer is yes. From chapter 1 I knew that Emma was going to be the level 5. Now, back then, I had a much different vision of what that would look like. In the beginning, I pictured Emma behaving more like Margot behaves now. Someone who cared and nurtured for the girls and always tried to protect them. That obviously evolved. I wouldn’t say that other plots crossed my mind… I always had a general direction I wanted the story to go. What has changed and therefore changed how the plot developed was how the character of the different ladies evolved. When Emma becomes a dom and Chloe a sub for example. Those weren’t things I knew would happen when I started, so as they came to pass through the organic way that I write it created subtle changes in how the plot developed around them. I hope that answers your question…
Ambien: Glad to see you back and glad you’re enjoying the story again! Sounds like this next chapter will be right up your alley. There is stuff with Ariana, and more harem politics… lots of interactions between the ladies and one hot smut scene that evolves from those interactions. I can’t wait to hear what you think.
Zoetrope: Glad you like the kitty stuff. There’s plenty more where that came from, but just a taste of how far I plan to push it in this upcoming chapter. But, stay tuned, I’ve got things planned for “meow.”
Reader: Glad your liking the kitty stuff! I have some big things planned for (section deleted) that I bet your going to love along the lines of your comments. I don’t know how much of it will come in 36 but I expect it to be fully in the works by 37...so stayed tuned and keep reading along!
Backerton: Again, sorry for the delay in the chapter. But, its here now! No latex mask, but you will get the fully kitty suit in this chapter… happy reading. (Your vote has been tallied)
Well: Glad you like the kitty stuff. There’s plenty more of it in the works. Sorry there probably won’t be any cat fights… its just not really my thing. As to BDH, the story might be ending, but I won’t be going away. When I decide exactly what I’ll be doing next, you can bet I’ll be posting it here so you guys will all know the plan.
Ok, I’m out. My battery is dying, and for some reason my lap top isn’t charging…. This could be a very bad thing…. Hopefully not….
Thanks as always for reading along,
Till next time,
-Mal
 

Hey Mal. Really enjoyed the Ariana stuff. Not the biggest fan of the hard rape genre, but this was quite good. Also, I know some people love it and it makes the eventual breakdown a lot more plausible. 
I was wondering, when you were beginning this story, if you always intended Emma to be in charge and (presumably) to stay in charge? Or was it it just something that happened after you developed the 1st third of the story? Curious if other plot paths might’ve crossed your mind back then. 

Really liked that Ariana wasn’t turned on by her degradation at all. In too many instances female characters body’s react even when they don’t want them too. I found the Time Jumps quite jarring especially as some of the scenes were prior to events that occurred in the previous chapter. Its fine when your showing what one set of characters did and then showing what other characters were doing whilst the first set was doing stuff. The problem for me is when you break causality since Cara’s and Emma’s interaction in chp 33 happened before bella’s punishment in chp 32 and the interaction between Cara and Emma in chp 33 affected the way Cara behaved in chp 32. I think I understand why this is the case as you want to give the reader a big scene in each chapter. I really like how Bella was fucked especially since it showed her loss of the masculinity that she had gained when she had the feel-doe and reminded us that she is still part of Alex’s harem. Although I really like it when girls, with a dick, fuck other girls. I’m surprised that you find big tits and arse unattractive. I assumed that since I have no preference when it comes to physical appearance, assuming youth and good health, that all men were the same and that the most significant factors were the way someone behave and what they were like as a person. I always found Amelia Pond unappealing she is the only Doctor Who companion that I dislike. Partly this is due to my dislike at Steven Moffats style as Head writer and that when I first watch Season 5 and 6 I was disinterested and confused by the whole Silence thing. One reason for this was Moffat’s habit of breaking causality. One reason why I find her unappealing is that i was 14/15 when I first saw her on DW and at that age I wasn’t attracted to adults and since then I’ve learn’t about her character and I would be very annoyed with the way she behaves if I was Rory. Those shows with Jenna Coleman were all BBC stuff So in mid 19th Century England there were two schools, Eton and Rugby, who both played Football but they both played with different rules. So they and some other schools got together to decide the rules of the game. They eventually made two versions of the game known as Association football, where using your hands is prohibited, and Rugby football, named after the school that played it, where you can use your hands. These commonly referred to as Soccer and Rugby since Soccer is English posh slang for Association. These games spread all over the world thanks to the British Empire. At the same time Soccer Football become popular with the lower class in England who called it Football. In the U.S Rugby Football became popular after they changed all the rules so they called it American Rugby Football which later became known as American Football. In the U.K and the most of the world Association Football became known as Football and Rugby Football became Rugby. The U.S is pretty good at women’s football finishing in the top 3 at all seven world cups two of which they hosted while these girls were growing up so maybe the Americans won’t be terrible. The British girls will probably be terrible since the FA banned women’s football in England in 1921 because it was more popular than men’s Football and they didn’t want women to take the spectators and ticket sales from the men. They got away with it since women had just won the right to vote. They only unbanned it in 1971 and it still isn’t popular with girls in schools in the U.K. But I really like the idea of the girls competing at some sort of game perhaps a card game perhaps they could gamble stuff.  
FIFA tournaments are Football Tournaments organised by FIFA. So you really couldn’t have a FIFA tournament. Unless Alex bribed FIFA officials to hold a tournament in secret which knowing FIFA might work so I guess you could do it I’m hoping that Ariana never gets an orgasm even when Alex is much more gentle and loving with her. As it would show that no matter what she will never be able to completely trust and relax with him. Also a lot of women don’t reach an orgasm during sex. As for the vote I strongly dislike scene 3. I don’t really see why Alex would reward his guards with his slaves when they already have slaves of their own. It makes sense when he’s punishing the girls. But I think its in Alex’s self interest to limit the contact between the girls and the guards as much as possible so that the guards and girls don’t develop any emotional attachment to each other which may create complications. I really like scene 4 since I’m a massive fan of oral and rim and I would ideally like Ariana, Taylor and scene 4. But it looks like scene 5 is going to win and I would quite like to see Dove Cameron in scene 4. Also I think it would be cool to see Bella try to make up with the master. I will vote for Dove Cameron Bella Thorne Scene 4                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             

I woke up this morning with what I think is a very intriguing question for the awesome group of readers and writers here at AFF. So here goes: Recently TV shows like HBO’s Westworld, and video games such as Bethesda’s Fallout have been exploring themes such as AI (artificial intelligence) and synthetic robots that are fully capable of emulating human behavior and appearance. This morning, I had the thought what if the protagonist from my story, Billion Dollar Harem, an eccentric billionaire, was also a genius with advanced degrees in programming and robotics. He then used his brilliance to instead of kidnapping celebrities used it to build a synthetic robot harem with androids who were designed to look like and were programmed to believe they were celebrities. So, instead of capturing and imprisoning someone like Emma Watson, he built a robot who was identical in appearance to her and who believed she was her. This would allow for vast differences in personality and mannerisms than the actual celebrity. But also, it would allow for some separation from the problem of dealing with actual celebrities. I imagine the story could have fun little problems where the celebrity android’s AI acts up causing them to behave in odd and unexpected ways and the protagonist’s sometimes rough handling of them would require him to occasionally replace pieces of their hardware. Thus the story could focus just as much on them being androids as it does on them being recreations of celebrities. 
While I think a story like this could raise some interesting questions, my biggest question is in what archive would a story with these parameters be placed? On the one hand, it features an original character and is set in the real world as opposed to a fictional one. On the other, it does feature “celebrities,” albeit robot ones designed to appear real.  So? Original or Celebrity? Discuss.

I woke up this morning with what I think is a very intriguing question for the awesome group of readers and writers here at AFF. So here goes: Recently TV shows like HBO’s Westworld, and video games such as Bethesda’s Fallout have been exploring themes such as AI (artificial intelligence) and synthetic robots that are fully capable of emulating human behavior and appearance. This morning, I had the thought what if the protagonist from my story, Billion Dollar Harem, an eccentric billionaire, was also a genius with advanced degrees in programming and robotics. He then used his brilliance to instead of kidnapping celebrities used it to build a synthetic robot harem with androids who were designed to look like and were programmed to believe they were celebrities. So, instead of capturing and imprisoning someone like Emma Watson, he built a robot who was identical in appearance to her and who believed she was her. This would allow for vast differences in personality and mannerisms than the actual celebrity. But also, it would allow for some separation from the problem of dealing with actual celebrities. I imagine the story could have fun little problems where the celebrity android’s AI acts up causing them to behave in odd and unexpected ways and the protagonist’s sometimes rough handling of them would require him to occasionally replace pieces of their hardware. Thus the story could focus just as much on them being androids as it does on them being recreations of celebrities. 
While I think a story like this could raise some interesting questions, my biggest question is in what archive would a story with these parameters be placed? On the one hand, it features an original character and is set in the real world as opposed to a fictional one. On the other, it does feature “celebrities,” albeit robot ones designed to appear real.  So? Original or Celebrity? Discuss.

I woke up this morning with what I think is a very intriguing question for the awesome group of readers and writers here at AFF. So here goes: Recently TV shows like HBO’s Westworld, and video games such as Bethesda’s Fallout have been exploring themes such as AI (artificial intelligence) and synthetic robots that are fully capable of emulating human behavior and appearance. This morning, I had the thought what if the protagonist from my story, Billion Dollar Harem, an eccentric billionaire, was also a genius with advanced degrees in programming and robotics. He then used his brilliance to instead of kidnapping celebrities used it to build a synthetic robot harem with androids who were designed to look like and were programmed to believe they were celebrities. So, instead of capturing and imprisoning someone like Emma Watson, he built a robot who was identical in appearance to her and who believed she was her. This would allow for vast differences in personality and mannerisms than the actual celebrity. But also, it would allow for some separation from the problem of dealing with actual celebrities. I imagine the story could have fun little problems where the celebrity android’s AI acts up causing them to behave in odd and unexpected ways and the protagonist’s sometimes rough handling of them would require him to occasionally replace pieces of their hardware. Thus the story could focus just as much on them being androids as it does on them being recreations of celebrities. 
While I think a story like this could raise some interesting questions, my biggest question is in what archive would a story with these parameters be placed? On the one hand, it features an original character and is set in the real world as opposed to a fictional one. On the other, it does feature “celebrities,” albeit robot ones designed to appear real.  So? Original or Celebrity? Discuss.

Rape is a trigger tag, one that can gain you a good deal of readers due to the fact that fiction is the only way fans of this fetish can legally experience it. However, I feel that it is also a tag one absolutely must include in any circumstance which is even borderline (i.e. Coercion, Blackmail, DubCon (which to me is just a bullshit way of trying to make rape sound less rapey...) and even NC/Con (where a non-consenting individual becomes consenting) should most likely include the rape tag. Because rape is such a traumatic event, something that can leave a survivor of it scarred for the rest of their life, the tag can and should be used when there is any dubious content around consent. To me, as a writer of such fiction, i know I don’t want someone, especially someone who has experienced it, accidentally stumbling into a story with rape content. That, to me, is one of my greatest fears as a writer. I might bring that subject to life and fantasize about it, in a fictional sense, but to people who have experienced it, it is not a subject to handle lightly it is something we must respect at the utmost level and do everything in our power to warn away those who have an aversion to such things. In my stories, there is usually very little doubt about when the rape tag is needed, but its my philosophy is that its better to include it and warn away someone who might be reminded of a traumatic experience than to not have it and gain a few dragon prints.
I’m not sure how a Christian student could save Luzurial from her fate at the hands of Eparlegna…. unless he also happened to be some badass Witcher or an archmage or something...but I have a feeling both of those are against the rules of being Christian anyway… lol… I think its hilarious picturing some IT tech at a Christian University scanning browser histories, especially in this day and age, when you know every 18 and 19 year old boy in every dorm is streaming Pornhub like 24/7 lol…. You can picture them bent over their computer screens, brows dripping in sweat and thinking what the hell has this world come to…
I’ve read a several of your stories…. come to think of it, I think I’ve been a bit hypocritical since I never left you a review <ducks> but I’ve thoroughly enjoyed everything I’ve read so I really don’t think you’re giving yourself enough credit. As to going back and looking over past work, that to me is always cringe worthy. I’ve on occasion re-read some of my earliest chapters of Billion Dollar Harem, my first serious attempt at fan-fiction, and I think “oh god, why did I do this… or what the hell was I thinking...” So I completely understand that. I feel like I should go back and re-work them but then I also think well how different would the story be if I went back and changed something that happened 30 chapters ago. In then end I feel its better to just move on to the next thing and try not to think about it.
I can’t say I completely understand people’s aversion to celeb fiction (or any fiction which has had a character portrayed by an actor), since to me it isn’t real. As our disclaimer’s loudly announce, it is fiction. Part of writing and reading is parsing what is real from what isn’t and I just don’t understand not being able to separate those things. But I do really appreciate the offer the offer. I have been considering what I might do after Billion Dollar Harem is over. My two options at this point are 1) a Hogwarts Harem story set in an alternate version of the Harry Potter universe, and 2) doing some originals, which I’d practice on first by posting some stories here, before I then move on to writing stories that I’d try to market on Amazon. The problem with 1 is simply the proliferation of HP fiction and the propensity for such work to get lost in the veritable hurricane of such works. The problem with 2 is I’d have to write much tamer work if I ever hoped to make money with writing it.

Rape is a trigger tag, one that can gain you a good deal of readers due to the fact that fiction is the only way fans of this fetish can legally experience it. However, I feel that it is also a tag one absolutely must include in any circumstance which is even borderline (i.e. Coercion, Blackmail, DubCon (which to me is just a bullshit way of trying to make rape sound less rapey...) and even NC/Con (where a non-consenting individual becomes consenting) should most likely include the rape tag. Because rape is such a traumatic event, something that can leave a survivor of it scarred for the rest of their life, the tag can and should be used when there is any dubious content around consent. To me, as a writer of such fiction, i know I don’t want someone, especially someone who has experienced it, accidentally stumbling into a story with rape content. That, to me, is one of my greatest fears as a writer. I might bring that subject to life and fantasize about it, in a fictional sense, but to people who have experienced it, it is not a subject to handle lightly it is something we must respect at the utmost level and do everything in our power to warn away those who have an aversion to such things. In my stories, there is usually very little doubt about when the rape tag is needed, but its my philosophy is that its better to include it and warn away someone who might be reminded of a traumatic experience than to not have it and gain a few dragon prints.
I’m not sure how a Christian student could save Luzurial from her fate at the hands of Eparlegna…. unless he also happened to be some badass Witcher or an archmage or something...but I have a feeling both of those are against the rules of being Christian anyway… lol… I think its hilarious picturing some IT tech at a Christian University scanning browser histories, especially in this day and age, when you know every 18 and 19 year old boy in every dorm is streaming Pornhub like 24/7 lol…. You can picture them bent over their computer screens, brows dripping in sweat and thinking what the hell has this world come to…
I’ve read a several of your stories…. come to think of it, I think I’ve been a bit hypocritical since I never left you a review <ducks> but I’ve thoroughly enjoyed everything I’ve read so I really don’t think you’re giving yourself enough credit. As to going back and looking over past work, that to me is always cringe worthy. I’ve on occasion re-read some of my earliest chapters of Billion Dollar Harem, my first serious attempt at fan-fiction, and I think “oh god, why did I do this… or what the hell was I thinking...” So I completely understand that. I feel like I should go back and re-work them but then I also think well how different would the story be if I went back and changed something that happened 30 chapters ago. In then end I feel its better to just move on to the next thing and try not to think about it.
I can’t say I completely understand people’s aversion to celeb fiction (or any fiction which has had a character portrayed by an actor), since to me it isn’t real. As our disclaimer’s loudly announce, it is fiction. Part of writing and reading is parsing what is real from what isn’t and I just don’t understand not being able to separate those things. But I do really appreciate the offer the offer. I have been considering what I might do after Billion Dollar Harem is over. My two options at this point are 1) a Hogwarts Harem story set in an alternate version of the Harry Potter universe, and 2) doing some originals, which I’d practice on first by posting some stories here, before I then move on to writing stories that I’d try to market on Amazon. The problem with 1 is simply the proliferation of HP fiction and the propensity for such work to get lost in the veritable hurricane of such works. The problem with 2 is I’d have to write much tamer work if I ever hoped to make money with writing it.