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  1. Naruto: Learning His True Self [Responses to Reviews]

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    From ANON - LemonSmut on September 23, 2016
     

    Ok this is my last time trying to put some sense in you...

    1. Naruto was made in asia and asian people are humans like you and me, so my statement that they have, compared to the rest of the world, the tiniest dicks is ofc statistically true.

    2. I dont care who you like and you don't like. Different people have different tastes. You can't force your opinion on other people. 

    3. Personally my life was not as bad as Naruto's, but we share some similarities and I certainly have not cracked. There are other charaters in Naruto who had it very hard themselves. Besides what does that matter? Naruto isn't real. You wont hurt his feelings. Site like these are made to get out of boundaries. If only straight canon would be allowed than... wow pretty boring fanfictions.

    4. Just because he got Hinata knocked up twice doesnt mean he is a bull... People get other people pregnant even without some kind of sexual experience... they are all bulls? Besides Hinata loved him to death and even sacrificed herself to save him. She would never leave him, because of mediocre sex. By your logic Sasuke must be a bull as well and what kind of a bull he is: He is almost never in Konoha, gets Sakura knocked up anyway and she still loves him like a puppy even though he is never there. He must have literally fucked her brains out. ... 

    5. Naruto is asian and to be more precisely japanese(asia): their names, history, relgion, architecture etc is all asian... if naruto has not an asian background to you then what background has he? 

    6. There are no ton of cockolding/bull fics on this site... Most fics are either: a) Narutox??? with him like a sex god. b) yaoi c) cheating <- doesnt count as cockolding...

    7. To answer your question... There is only 1 Story currently on front page that futures cockolding and what probably irks you even more: Naruto bashing. It's this story... The rest are either yaoi or Naruto x ??? ...

    8. The only reason i chose this fiction to defend the writer has nothing to do with the fanfiction or the writer himself, but people like you, who come here anyway even though they have been warned and insult, and insult, and insult anyway ... no constructive criticism. I dont like yaoi at all, i'am a straight man but these people have the right for porn just as i have and if i dont like these story, then i simply ignore them. The same goes for every fucking fandom on this site and if you dont get this, then you simply aren't mature enough to be on a site where people can post smut as they like. Simply as that.

     

    … I think I’m beginning to love you.

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    From ANON - LemonSmut on September 23, 2016
     

    1. I clearly stated that I didn't like this cockolding fiction, not because it's badly written (it's not), but because cockolding is not turning me on what so ever. Just like Yaoi and other fandoms... 

    2. How can Naruto got Hinata pregnant twice? Ask the asians... They have the tiniest dicks arounds the world statistically, but the biggest population. And considering the Manga... no body is a bull there... i have the feeling you dont know what a "bull" is...

    3. Sasuke wasn't even mentioned once in this fic... so either you're just retarded or didn't read the fanfiction... either way your reaction is moronic

    4. Why need i compare my REAL life against the life from a fictional character just because you dont like what others write about? Are you gonna ask me next why i'am not jumping from tree to tree or use Kage Bunshin to make my chores? You can't compare those... LOL

    5. So whats the matter with yaoi, cockolding etc... i dont like them as well... i skip yaoi completely and i just take a look in this one because of the many comments and to see if i like or not... Imagine this: those fics all disappear... Then there would be maybe 10-20 storys max... because most use a theme you dont like.... by the way i never see you flame fiction in which Naruto has a harem, treats women like slaves etc... 

    6. I have the feeling you really love Sasuke as well... I mean you mention him all the time, even though he isn't even mentioned in this story... 

    7. Last point... If you want variety, start writing yourself. I'am dying to see what... bullshit..., huehuehue, you're coming up with...

     

    You’re STILL my favorite reviewer LemonSmut!

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    From ANON - anon on September 22, 2016
     

    Konohamaru, huh? Didn't see that one coming. While I'm not the world's greatest fan of the subject matter, this is far and away the best written Cuckold/Sissification Naruto Story, and I can tell that you put effort and attention to each chapter.

    I for one hope that some of the more domineering females like Anko or Tsunade or perhaps even Kushina get brought into the action, since I'm sure it is only a matter of time before Naruto is introduced to pegging.

     

    Maybe on Anko, Tsunade, or Kushina being brought into the action, and definitely on the ‘it’s only a matter of time before Naruto is introduced to pegging’.

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    From ANON - LemonSmut on September 22, 2016
     

    Like always... Dont like - dont read...

    Those who insult writer just because they dont like the type of fanFICTION they write is rather pathelic in my opinion.

    I dont particullary like this fic myself, because i dont like the cockolding theme, but aside from that, the story is not worse than other fics on this site. he even used other characters (kiba/konohamaru)

    And Naruto certainly is not a bull... he was hopelessly in love with Sakura, got beaten by her and didnt even realize Hinata's feelings in the Manga... please guys ... if you want to bash the writer,  dont make things up...

    Naruto tiny cock is not possible because of Uzumaki bloodline? really? you guys have read why too much fanfiction to come to this conclusion. Uzumaki are famous for longlivity and their seals not for perfect bodies and such... lol

    Just get it into your heads that fanfiction, and especially smut fanfics mostly dont make sense their are tons of harem fics located in the Naruto verse and they make no sense what so ever... like i said FICTION ...

     

    You? You I like LemonSmut. In fact, you may even be my favorite reviewer, because despite not liking the fic, you’re not being an asshole about it and defending my right to write it. And yes, I’m being an asshole in these responses, but since both sides are acting like children I’ll just say “They started it!”

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    From ANON - ice on September 22, 2016
     

    this story dosen't make sense naruto is to far stong willed for this to make sense and hinata to kind for her to do this to him

     

    Naruto? Strong willed? You mean the guy who basically became a battered girlfriend to Sasuke for the entirety of the second part of Naruto and had to be stopped from giving up repeatedly during the final battle (and was in fact the only named character who had to be stopped from giving up)?

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    From ANON - Braeden1002 on September 22, 2016
     

    Interesting concept especially since the other stories of a similar nature tend to be one-shots or a similar situation to Minato. I'm guessing that eventually Naruto will become Hinata's girlfriend either full time or outside of their professional capacity as ninjas. To the point where he may become an actual participant as someone to cleanup the aftermath or as a bottom to Hinata and Konohomaru.

     

    Now I do have a slight request, would it be possible to see a similar story to this but one where Naruto is the bull. Whether as a series of one-shots or a similar plotline to this one.

     

    … GET OUT OF MY HEAD!

    As for the request… I really should, shouldn’t I? Especially considering I’m planning a “cruel” version of this fic where Hinata isn’t as kind as she is here. I’m gonna get MEAN to poor Naruto in that one, and people who don’t like this story definitely shouldn’t read that one.

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    From Naruto-Gremory on September 22, 2016
     

    Must agree with other reviews do something original.
     

    From Naruto-Gremory on September 22, 2016
     

    Do you accept my challenge 

    Naruto Namikaze lives with her family friend Kushina after a fire burned down his house as a child. They live their lives, until fellow colleague Mikoto Uchiha, who is jealous of their close friendship makes a surprise move.

     

    No. And… No.

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    From ANON - on September 22, 2016
     

    how well do you know the Naruto universe? From this, piss poor. This is impossible due to uzumaki's strong life force = near perfect bodies.

    genetics, even worse. A micropenis is a penis that is less then 7cm (2 3/4 in) in length, micropenis form due to hormone in balance in the groin area.

     

    As said by another reviewer, an Uzumaki’s “strong life force” does not equal “near perfect bodies”. It means they live longer than normal people even when using techniques that shave years off them and that they have chakra dense enough to make them viable jinchuuriki for the Kyuubi no Kitsune.

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    From ANON - Zweig on September 22, 2016
     

    Nice story.

     

    In regards to potential Bulls I would like to see I have those four:

    Haku (I think he would fit really good for the final Bull, though Konohamaru would be a good choice too)

    Neji

    Gaara

    Suigetsu

     

    Hope you use my suggestions and update soon.

     


    I’ll definitely take those into consideration.

     

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    From ANON - Larry on September 20, 2016
     

    Why? This kind of thing makes no sense. Naruto's father is supposedly this powerful man, but allows to be psychologically abused like this? He lets them abuse his son? And this second chapter, where Naruto just goes along with Hinata proposing the same humiliation and violation be visited upon him when he's clearly stated it's not what he wants is fucking disgusting.

    I get that you're doing a challenge here, but you're doing it poorly. There is no build-up. There is nothing believable about the sequence of events. Why are you doing this? It's no good.

     

     

    Well, thank you for this well-written, thoughtful critique of my story. It’s people like you that keeps me from making it impossible for ANONs to review. I see your critiques, and I guess it’s a good thing I’m doing this for free.

     

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    From ANON - naruto17 on September 20, 2016
     

    im really enjoying this and i hope you continue it. you are a very good writer, this and your other Naruko fics are very good. but cuckolding is my FAVORITE fetish, so i hope you do more stories like this.

    i hope sasuke is the bull just because of how much more humiliating that would be for naruto.

     

    Why thank you naruto17, and I’m planning to continue this story. Thank you for the praise of my writing skills and that you enjoy my stories. I enjoy cuckolding porn from time to time myself, and I’ve already got a different version of this story planned (it’ll be a lot ‘crueler’ to Naruto than this story will be).

    As I’ve said in regards to ANON – Ero-sennin’s review, I’m planning to have them ‘interview’ several potential  bulls, and Sasuke is likely to be one of the candidates.

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    From ANON - Ero-sennin on September 20, 2016
     

    Can naruto be trained before getting a bull???

    And can the bull be Haku? Or a futa by chance?? Like a futa Hidan or sonwthing (her/his? Curse jutsu would be amazing for sexual activities)??

     

    The way I’m planning this story pre-bull training unfortunately won’t be an option.

    As for Haku being the ‘bull’, well, he certainly could be one of the potential bulls they ‘interview’ (don’t want to just go with the first guy, you gotta try out several to find the man who best fits you). As for a Futa (not Hidan, bloodplay and the like aren’t my thing)… Hmmm, that is certainly an interesting idea for one of the potential candidates.

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    From York on September 19, 2016
     

    Can some one please explain to me the appeal of these types of stories

     

    I wish I could, York, but I can’t any more than I can tell you why “bondage” erotica appeals to some people, or why “CBT (cock/ball torture)” erotica appeals to some people. It just does, and so long as no one is hurt it’s just a harmless way to get aroused.

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