C_Wade
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Thanks a lot! I will try that.
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14 minutes ago, Guest Oracle said:
Hey there, did you get any further info on the story you were looking for?
Nope, nothing … I don’t suppose you have anything?
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I think I might skip the Tenten chapter and just write the tsunade one… however i’m really busy with work atm and the new semester just started as well, so I really have no time to write right now
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no I have never really thought of doing a story like that. I have to many stories I’m working on atm anyways, so I won’t start anything new either, sorry.
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I honestly can’t say. Most likely I will post it right after I finish it, but who knows when that will be...
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Man, I hope so too. It’s really annoying me tbh, adding to that is that we finally have some decent weather here in berlin, so the motivation to write such a difficult chapter is even lower.
I like the shampoo idea, very ‘realistic’ too.
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there have been a few things mentioned here in the thread, which I noted down, but I didn’t decide on anything yet. So just lay it on me.
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Several nice ideas here, I won’t commit to anything just yet, seeing as the Hinata episode is still quite a while off, but I noted them down regardless.
I personally am quite a fan of traditional Japanese clothing, both for males and especially females, though I admit the Jessica Rabbit dress is good as well. The idea with the manipulated fabric is also quite interesting.
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most likely not, I still have two scenes to write, and I don’t see myself doing much more today
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uhg, I hope so, I’m still not done, but I have all day tomorrow and sunday to write with nothing else to do.
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Just now, Guest omega said:
Who is after tenten ?
… are you serious right now? I just wrote that down…
The list is in order, I thought that was obvious.
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Small update,
finally got over my hangup with the Tenten chapter and managed to write some today, hopefully a lot more will follow. A few people have asked me about the posting-schedule so I though posting it for everyone might be a good idea.
Tenten part 2, Sunday (fingers crossed)
Tsunade (most likely 2 if not 3 parts, there is a lot of content to cover)
Kushina (also 2 or 3 parts)
(Ino/Sakura/Hinata) in any order, although I still don’t have a solid plan for Ino yet, except for a few Ideas.
Kurenai
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Thanks again everybody for the feedback and your contributions in this thread, would be way harder if I didn’t get all those ideas from you guys.
Edit: The list is in order, from top to bottom, in case that it was not clear enough.
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2 hours ago, Guest Guest said:
Unfortunately, the only real way to learn to write tentacles, is to read tentacle porn and see what works and what doesn't.
That is true, i’ll just have to do my best.
We’ll see about a fitting scenario once I decide who, and when, although I quite like the investigation idea.
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And an update for the Tenten chapter, I don’t have written as much as I’d like, and I most likely won’t finish the chapter this weekend, seeing as I will be going to visit some family in another state and I’m not sure how much time I will have to write there.
Now the question is, do you want me to post the chapter as fast as possible, or should I wait for next Sunday and get a head start on the Tsunade episode, which will be next.
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Hey, thanks for contributing all those ideas,
the Tenten ones are most likely out, because I do have the rest of the chapter planned out already.
Naruko: maybe, I have no concrete plan for her yet, so anything is possible.
Ino: the mindreading one sounds interesting, I’ll see if I can fit it into the episode, the other most likely not.
Anko: same as naruko, no concrete plan for her so anything is possible.
Tsunade: it most likely will be kind of like that
Tsume/Hana: Not much of a beast fan, I don’t mind reading it on occasion, but I don’t think I will write it.
Shizune: That was the same idea I had, so unless something better comes up, that will be it.
Sakura: Somebody already request Sakura with minors, so maybe a children hospital?
Kurenai: Maybe to the alcohol serving, most likely no to the brush writing. The assasination idea is good, although it will most likely fail and lead to the punishment. Pregnant sex is like beast for me, dunno if I will write it.
Hinata: Well, since it is requested twice...^^, dunno if the sexy dancing works out for her, but I’ll keep it in mind
Ino/Sakura: dunno if I’ll be doing episodes with more than one featured girl, but if I do I’ll keep it in mind.
Hanabi: same as Ino/Sakura
Kushina: Maybe, but not likely
Shiho: Maybe
Mito: sounds good
As for the other two, tentacles were requested once or twice before, and I wouldn’t mind writing them, but I have no idea how.
Gloryhole fun sounds good.
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Yes, but the point was more to get Tenten angry.
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4 minutes ago, WillowDarkling said:
What we do NOT allow on the other hand are requests for copies of stories, nor links to sites where the story has been posted by someone other than the author. Therefore, I have edited your post.
Alright, thank you for clearing that up, I wasn’t sure since the Forum rules explicitly state: Nor are you permitted to ask for people to send you copies of the story if it's been removed from AFF.
As the story was never on AFF, I thought it might fall into some kind of grey area… oh well.
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Hey there, as the title already tell you I’m looking for an old original story called ‘Charlotte’s Movie’ by Ken Randall.
Now, after reading the forum rules I don’t know if this kind of post is allowed, since the forum is supposedly only for stories posted on AFF and to the best of my knowledge this story has never been posted there.
The thing is that I know exactly where I read the story, I even have the, now broken, link to it. But, for some reason, the author decided to take down the story. I usually would respect that decision, even though it pisses me off, but the author didn’t really remove the story, he only cut out about 600 pages of content and renamed it into ‘A Beautiful Mess’.
So, if anyone has a link to the complete version of the story, then I would really appreciate it if you shared it with me. I have been looking for this story for more than a year now, so I’m really kind of desperate here…
The author’s profile on SOL is here.
Edit: I also remember that the author offered his works as paperbacks for sale at lulu.com. So as a last resort I wouldn’t mind paying for the story either, provided the story is being sold on a legit website and the original author profits from it.
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That’s a great idea. And it fits really well too.
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I can see what you mean, will have to think about how I could make that work in the story.
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First, thanks for all your reviews and sorry it took a while to answer.
@Ookami88 We’ll see, I still think the particular phrase ‘Sex Slave-chan’ is a bit too obvious, I might go for a different term, otherwise I like the idea though.
Sorry to disappoint you though, except for the things mentioned in this thread I don’t really have any ideas and or plans for Hinata yet, as you said it is still quite a while off.
@knowpein It seemed it a bit rushed because it was rushed, admittedly not my best work, but I wanted the chapter out on Sunday. Glad you still liked it though.
As for the sadist Kunoichi, maybe Anko? I think she might fit what you are suggesting…
@snake1980 Thanks. So you want Tsunade’s corruption to take place inside Konoha? Did I get that right?
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The idea with hypnosis/subliminal messages was planned for kurenai and, to be honest, I can’t quite think of a way to include the word sex slave-chan (or similar) in a conversation without making Hinata suspicious. If the daimyo randomly says the word sex slave-chan and Hinata suddenly gets horny she would immediately make the connection, it would need to be a word that can be inserted into a normal conversation without arousing suspicion.
The second idea sounds good, I’ll see how I can work it in.
I’m sure I will find a Kunoichi that fits the idea, there are still quite a few left after all.
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@redlox2 It will be two chapters, just like the previous episode. And also thanks for the review!
@Ookami88 Thats what I feared, tbh it was rushed, I wrote more than half of it on Sunday in one go…
As for the pleasure breaking, the orgasm denial is a good idea, as is the tickling.
@snake1980 as redlox already said, I might do other villages after Konoha is done. It depends on how far I take the story and how long my motivation for it lasts.
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Thank you, I’m glad you enjoyed it.
Original MF Story - Charlotte's Movie
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i managed to piece together just about anything except for 2 or so chapters