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  4. Ben 10 X Avatar crossover harem challenge

    in Avatar - The Last Airbender

    Posted · Edited by Snake_King
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    5 hours ago, Rexfan12345 said:

    Yeah, good point there.

    Those are really good ideas there, I think it would make since for Azula to be bored with royal life or something like that as well as sexually frustrated. 

    I like the idea of having a bisexual relationship sounds pretty cool, could really make it fun honestly.

    Sokkrara sounds like a great name.

    It will still keep things from the show with a few changes here and there, to keep things from getting boring.

    Glad you like the ideas for Azula.  I thought it might help to throw in some things that help build up to her switching to Ben’s side, as opposed to her just deciding it out of the blue just because the sex was good.

    As for the names, if we’re going with Sokkara and Zuka, I wonder what would be a good female name for Fem!Aang?  Nothing comes to mind at the moment, how about you?

    That makes sense about keeping things from the show with some changes, although that raises the question of just how changed things are, aside from who switched genders and the like.  Namely, when do you think would be good points for when each girl joins the harem, as soon as they appear or a short time after?

    And who replaces Azula as the one chasing our heroes once she joins?

  5. Ben 10 X Avatar crossover harem challenge

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    15 minutes ago, Rexfan12345 said:

    You got a point, but I feel it's the only way to somehow get her in the harem without being unrealistic, I'm not a fan of rape, but I like your idea of her kidnapping Ben, maybe she and Ben make a deal if Ben can make her cum or something like that she will let him go and if not she will kill him. What do you think?

    I do like a beisexual relationship between Zuka and Mai, that can be hot. 

    Unrealistic, huh?  In a story where a guy has an alien watch that can change him into a variety of aliens, as well as somehow giving him a huge dick, and he gets sent to another world that is psuedo-medieval and has people with power over the elements, and he gets a harem comprised of multiple, mega-curvy and busty women from this world?  “Realistic” isn’t exactly a word that comes to mind in describing this when you think about it.

    But, putting that aside, I get what you mean.  That idea of Azula making a deal with Ben after somehow kidnapping him might just work.  Then, during the intercourse, she could get so much pleasure that she decides to devote herself to him and the pleasure she gets from him (assuming that anyone’s capable of being THAT good).  After she tells him that she’s with him, Ben’s a bit reluctant, but upon realizing that she won’t take “no” for an answer, decides to just go with it.  That sound about right?  Although, I think it might not hurt to have some build-up to this change in Azula’s attitude, like say...being bored with the royal life and being unsatisfied with the prolonged conquest the Fire Nation is attempting, and maybe some pent-up sexual frustration?  Any thoughts there?

    As for the bisexual relationships, yeah I think it might be best for the majority of Ben’s harem here, with the guys-turned-girls here being in bisexual relationships with their canon love interests as well as being a part of Ben’s harem.  Like:

    1. Zuka/Mai
    2. Fem!Aang/Katara
    3. Fem!Sokka/Suki/Princess Yue

    I think a good name for Fem!Sokka might be Sokkara or something like that.

    Also, given the nature of your challenge, would this be a re-telling of the entire Avatar series, or just keeping some key points with some major changes here and there?

  6. Ben 10 X Avatar crossover harem challenge

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    26 minutes ago, Rexfan12345 said:

    Yeah, you got a point about Azula, but maybe have Ben to possible use his horse cock to make her his slave. I'm not sure about Mai having a thing for Zuka because they love Ben, I don't mind lesbian moments.

    Um...wouldn’t Ben using his horse cock to make Azula his slave entail a bit of rape?  And didn’t you specifically say that you didn’t want rape or mindbreaking in this story?  Although, I suppose an alternative might be to have Azula somehow hold Ben prisoner (not sure how considering the Omnitrix), and she tries to seduce him and make him have sex with her while she has him tied up, but the pleasure she gets from his cock is somehow enough to bend her over to him (no pun intended), but even then, that sounds like a bit of a stretch.  Any ideas?

    As for Zuka and Mai, I think it might make sense for them to be a bit bisexual, given them being in Ben’s harem and having it for each other.

  7. Ben 10 X Avatar crossover harem challenge

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    9 minutes ago, Rexfan12345 said:

    I thought about having them reform or something like that because of Ben's heroic side, but I'm still thinking on it actually.

    That might work for some of them, but I doubt that it would work for Azula, if we’re sticking with her characterization from the show.  She’s a sadistic, manipulative schemer who sees everyone and everything as either her plaything or an obstacle in need removing for what she wants.  And, as we saw at the end of Avatar, when her dad betrayed her, she went cuckoo for Coco Puffs.

    Also, would Mai still have a thing for Zuka?

  9. Markorrasami Hypno Threesome

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    Posted

    Not many people seem to want to do this threesome, so I figured I’d lay a challenge for it, but don’t let the title fool you into thinking that this will go the typical route with hypnotism.

    Premise:

    The Krew discovers a long-lost technique for being able to bend other people’s minds via hypnosis/mind-bending.  Realizing that it’d probably be dangerous if it fell into the wrong hands, the four of them decide to keep it to themselves.  Mako, Korra and Asami decide and agree to test it out on each other one night, and as a result, become a threesome, loosening inhibitions around each other.  Each one has a fantasy or something they’ve always wanted to try out.

    Korra: She’s always wanted to try being a nudist/exhibitionist.

    Asami: She’s always had a secret fetish for getting spanked.

    Mako: He’s a virgin, but secretly wanted to try anal with a girl, and do it nonstop until they went to bed.

    All three of them: they have feelings for each other.

    As a result of learning these things about each other, they decide to all move in together and be a threesome.  And because of the mind-bending technique, they are able to fulfill their fantasies: Korra disrobes herself whenever she arrives at their home, Asami wears a thong and gets spanked at any given moment when they’re alone (though never to extreme degrees), and both women happily allow Mako to fill their butts with semen as he alternates between them.  And this is all when they’re alone at their home.

    If you have any questions about this challenge and/or would like to take it up, feel free to respond.

  11. Praetor's Discussion Thread

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    Posted · Edited by Snake_King

    Thank you for the pleasant review Finny94. I am very proud of my fic's length, girth and size. I have noticed my intersex dialogue is lacking and am working on it. I don't know how to make things more dirty and depraved, I mean it's already a graphic futa schoolgirl harem story with gross proportions, a daemon and anal? Oh Ino will be in the cumming chapters, don't you worry your pretty little mind.

    But that won't be for a little bit. I am mainly trying to get another chapter of Omniharem out next and a long overdue L&PD chapter. I am also making headway on Overlord HTTYD with input from the requester. I will also be retooling the Mortal Kombat fic with the new alternate plotline because the biggest problem I was having with that story was awkwardly trying to fit Ben into the grand scheme of things and the tournament even though the newer game's plot itself largely abandoned it. I also want to take a swing at the Booblover's FanFiction Resident Evil challenge except with a different protagonist because I am getting tired of writing Ben. Then in the distant future some of the striaght shotas but I don't know which. I need to figure out a poling scheme... Anyways, ideas, suggestions, would like to see's, flames and/or quips welcome.

    In terms of depravity and dirtiness, I think that they were referring to just bigger dirty talk and the like. Things like the girls saying they want the sex everyday and declarations of how slooty they are and the like.

  13. Praetor's Discussion Thread

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    Posted

    My basic initial reaction: FUCK. YES. There are far too few good Naruto fics nowadays without Yaoi or NTR in them. Normally I'm a bit leery of Modern AUs for Naruto, but having such a long first chapter be devoted to Hinata gets you ALL the points from me. Keep it up!

    As for criticisms, the way you described Hinata's tits made them sound kinda...saggy, at certain points.

    I'm not too fond of Yaoi or NTR myself, and I especially hate NTR. Glad you liked the chapter.

  14. Praetor's Discussion Thread

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    I like the idea of one, or a few, in particular being exhibitionists who are far more overt about their escapades and make it a point to be ready and randy at any moment but they're all going to become degrees of nudists. Julie imports fine silk kimonos for them to wear when answering the door but otherwise they will be wearing sexy lingerie or in the buff when inactive. I'm leaning towards either Emily or Molly for the next addition.

    I understand, as that does make sense when I think about it.

  15. Praetor's Discussion Thread

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    Posted

    really cool idea, would be hot to see her in a apron naked or something.

    That it would. I've kind of had this fantasy in the back of my mind where a girl or woman has sex with her lover and afterwards stops wearing clothes. It's a relatively minor one, but still a bit of fun.

  16. Praetor's Discussion Thread

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    Posted

    One thing that really does help is discussion. The input from various readers and Rexfan really expedite the writing process, which is a key reason why Omniharem is outpacing L&PD even though that's been in the works much longer. As I indicated, a lot of the issues stem from a lack of direction, so if you have any ideas or suggestions, no matter how minute, please share them here or in a PM. Also, have you read any of Omniharem and if so, what do you think?

    Read the latest Omniharem chapter, and it was a good read. It did it's job, and I look forward to when you're able to make and upload the next one.

    As for ideas and suggestions, I'd still like to offer up the one I made a while back in a review on one of the chapters. Namely, that one of the alien girls that joins the harem (preferably Looma, but I'm not picky) adopts a nudist/exhibitionist lifestyle while living in Ben's home, namely because her culture says for her to do so after mating with her chosen lover. She can still put on clothes if she leaves the house, but once back in, they immediately come off, and she has to be always at the ready for when Ben's raring to go. Sound good? Just a suggestion, but I'd like to see this if at all possible.

  20. Praetor's Discussion Thread

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    Posted

    Complex real world business keeps getting in the way. I've been too busy to even think about the fics, pretty much writing in brief five minute increments. I wrote a 'short' (4000 word) threesome that centers around Ben's first anal and am thinking of posting it as a short separate, interlude 'thanks for waiting' kind of chapter since I can't find a way to bridge it into the encounter for the next chick to join the harem (who I also haven't decided on yet).

    How about Looma for the next girl? Just throwing it out there as a suggestion, and you don't have to do that if you don't want to. And who's the anal scene with?

  21. Ben 10 Alien Planet Harem Challenge

    in Cartoons

    Posted

    Unfortunately, I'm already writing a Ben 10 harem fic with overbusty, sexually enhanced women and a hung and horny Ben. The only thing besides the setting that'd make it unique would be if Ben had an actual horse's cock, although the conditions make it interesting. What do the locals look like and what happens when they eventually leave the world?

    On the subject of the locals appearance, I was thinking of something like this:

    1. Their bodies are mostly human-like with curves and faces akin to what we consider beautiful.

    2. Their skin is colored blue with thin, red, zebra-like stripes up and down their arms, legs, and torso.

    3. Their eyes have black sclera, slit pupils, and irises whose colors range from silver to bright red.

    4. Their hair is much like that of the Predator

    5. On the name of the locals' species, I'm not sure, but perhaps something like the X'Hallegi or something like that.

    6. On the name of the planet, how about something like Xenagotha or something like that.

    (I thought of those last two off the top of my head)

    As for what happens when they eventually leave, Ben and the gang are provided with a new spaceship, go to find Rook, and return to Earth and establish a new house to live in, as well as open trade and talks between the planet they'd left and the intergalactic community. Sound okay?

    I'm sorry that you feel you won't be able to do this story, but I'm glad that it piqued your interest. Any other questions or thoughts on it?

  22. Ben 10 Alien Planet Harem Challenge

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    Posted

    Like make him ripped and buffed up? That would be cool.

    Yeah, that's pretty much it. It would make sense for both him and his female companions to undergo changes both physical and mental during his stay on that world and when exposed to the substance in its air. Any other ideas or questions?

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