Ookami88

While I do agree on all accounts about Hinata (though I actually have no problems with her Shippuuden outfit, the first one we see, not the army uniform), and it is unfortunate for me that such a long wait is before we can see her (I just like her a lot!), personally I think it will be good for us to wait for her. Because while waiting we can throw some ideas that may make her episode even better than anticipated! If I may throw such suggestion, but regarding Tenten, or some other kunoichi that appears later, maybe Kushina or Tsunade – trial of combat. The Daimyo could demand a show of skills from the heired kunoichi, one where she has to wrestle with her opponents, without using any chakra related techniques. This would be explained that there are many enemies who could use chakra against their users, not to mention that the Daimyo didn’t wish for his castle/mansion/residence be destroyed. The kunoichi in question has no other choice than agree, she changes into an outfit provided (skintight leotard, another demand, to see if the kunoichi are really trained to fight in any conditions, like just in their underwear or something as embarrassing), and is led to an arena, where her opponent, an expert in hand-to-hand wrestling combat, is waiting. During the fight the wrestler uses graplings and other moves to immobile the kunoichi, and when she is held down, he gropes her body in various places. Next round, the kunoichi has to fight two wrestlers, as a penalty for losing the first round, or just to show if she really can fight that many opponents. Again they immobile her, this time they go even deeper with their treatment, sliding the leotard’s parts aside and showing her pussy and nipples, while groping them mercilessly, even going as far as rubbing the special oils on them. The idea is actually from one of the doujins by Crimson Comics, but with clear diferences regarding the setting and participants.

That would be helpful for the newcomers.

Oh, that actually makes so much sense. I thought that it is one full story, when in reality it’s a bunch of separate story arcs. Thanks for clarifying it for me.

Exactly my thoughts regarding Ino, when she was younger and in her teens she did seem like a girl that would like to be pampered. And since the Hokage actually was against his kunoichi going into ero-service missions the Daimyo proposed, I find it a little illogical that he would agree for so many of thewm going to the lord and not come back afterwards. The clans however have their own autonomy to a certain point and wouldn’t really care about the details of mission, if they appear fine at first glance, especially if they are from the Daimyo and there’s a chance of gaining more prestige for the clan. Anyway, I’m glad that anything from what I say is of any use for you and your story.

You know, I have another suggestion, this time regarding Hinata’s reason of being in Daimyo’s clutches. Let’s say that she actually got the mission not from the Hokage, but from her clan. To gain more influence in the Daimyo’s court, the clan agrees for their heiress to go for a service time proposed by the Daimyo, and since it is an internal affair of the clan, the Hokage has no say in this matter, therefore whatever happens during this special assignment it stays between the Hyuuga clan and the Daimyo. It just came to me today and wanted to know if it could be of any use for you in the story. And for Ino’s chapter, maybe some exhibitionism or public nudity could be a good way to break her. Or maybe have her sent to the Daimyo’s private hotsprings, only to find a bunch of male servants who are there to service her, like massages, drinks and etc. Slowly but surely they tease Ino's body to the point she cannot contain her lust anymore.

Well, if you want to know my opinion, here are my thoughts: No to – asphyxiation, Speculums, Enemas, urethral insertions or Nose hooks – these here just make me uncomfortable, especially enema, since it often involves scat, and that’s really out of my league of tolerance. Don’t really know what the big difference between pillory and stocks is, I checked and they are basically the same device, well maybe pillory is bigger and can be for more than just one person at the time. The other things that you could add… Really can’t think of anything good enough that isn’t already here. Though, what is your stand on tentacles? Like havin some summon or an exotic pet of Daimyo’s having it’s way with her? Anyway, I really can’t wait for when Satsuki’s episode finishes and the next girl comes up!

Cool. When it comes to Tenten, certain aspects of heavy bondage just seem right for her. Maybe it’s because of all those weapons she uses.

Basically what nyotaimori is, only in a less refined setting. Still glad you like that part of my idea. Another thing, I just got an idea for Tenten’s torture: Naked and with her arms bound behind her back, Tenten has to walk 20m with a rope between her legs, which is coated in lotion, so no rope burns would appear. The lotion also has a very strong aphrodisiac, and after just few steps Tenten starts to feel its effects. Somehow she manages to cross half of the way, but after 10th meter the rope starts to get tied in knots and they cause the kunoichi new sensations. She’s unable to finish the walk and collapses from the intense orgasms that hit her.

Teen actually, since her standing with her clan was still fragile at that point, and she was quite self-conscious as well, so that blackmail thing would also work. And simply enough, I’m not too much into MILFs. Though, pre-Shippuuden Hinata does sound appealing at certain aspects, however teen would be more preferable here. And like I have said, I only throw suggestions for you to either choose from or ignore. By the way, you did say that you had another idea involving food before I mentioned nyotaimori, could you tell what it was?

Regarding my idea (which I included above for a reminder) I have something to add, that came to me today (my mind sometimes works without my consent on those kind of things): Hinata is being “trained” by the Daimyo and his men, and they even film the whole thing, and make pictures of the Hyuuga in this shameful predicament. Then the Daimyo makes a deal with Hinata, with a contract that states: Hinata is to take part in an important dinner with representatives of another country (let’s say Lightning Daimyo and three/four Kumo shinobi as his bodyguards, random ones), and should she endure this event, she will be compensated for her time in Daimyo’s service, as well all evidence will be returned to her. However, should she fail in this task, under the penalty of the evidence being published, she will need to participate in any game the guests will choose, additionally for the next month she will be serving in the castle, obeying all commands given, regardless of who will give them, once more under the penalty of the evidence being published. After the month passes Hinata will be given another task, and should she fail again, another month of servitude will be added. As for the dinner itself, Hinata has to endure as the guests and the Daimyo eat from her naked body, all the while teasing her sensitive spots, like catching her nipples with chopsticks, or drinking sake from between her thighs. Once all food is gone, and Hinata has a fleeting hope of the whole thing to end, but then Daimyo announces that it is time for dessert. Initially Hinata wanted to jump and run away, but she remembered about the movie and photos taken from her “training”, she couldn’t let them to be known, especially she was afraid of what her family would think of her, therefore she stayed still and obedient. Servants came with special oils that would null any leftover scents and aftertastes of food, making Hinata again squeaky clean. Next a tray containing whipped cream cans, bottles of various syrups (maple, strawberry, orange chocolate etc), and fruits (strawberries, cherries, blueberries, oranges etc.) was brought in and the guests took their favorites. Hinata was then decorated amateurishly with the sweet contents, beig over the edge as the men would sample their treats directly from her body. The last straw was when the two Daimyo’s both attached their hungry mouthsa on her cream and cherry covered nipples, while squeezing her breasts and fingering her pussy. It was too much for her, and Hinata climaxed very hard, which was the cause of her loss. Well, that would be all for now. For penalty game, the only thing that I keep getting is Hinata being gangbanged by all those men, and through that one month she’s a sex toy for anyone in the Daimyo’s castle, even made into a comforter for the guards in their barracks once a week. As for that contract, I think that legalizing the reason for the Hokage’s kunoichi to agree to serve under the Daimyo would put a cork on that plot hole in my opinon. This may sound like a solid script, but really all of this is just a bunch of suggesstions, and just how I would see such a chapter. Use it or forget about it, your choice really. I only hope that you’ll find anything useful for either the future Hinata episode or for another kunoichi.

Oh, Tenten is my second fav kunoichi from the show, while Ino is third. Not into milfs like Kushina or Tsunade, so I hope the younger girls will get the first rows. And glad you liked my idea.

Okay then. Something just came to me while thiking about this story, at least for the torture part and some later service: Hinata is helplessly bound standing, completely naked, when those servants that treated Satsuki, came to her and also started to smear some oil on her skin, the difference being that this one not only made her sensitive, but also slowly dulled her mind with lust, as it was also a very strong aphrodisiac, soon enough a mere touch to her skin would make her wet. The Daimyo then comes in, with other servants too, who were also carrying various tools, like ink brushes, feathers and some sex toys (the do have electronics, so I see no problem with vibrators being present in that world), and they start to tease the Hyuuga’s oversensitive body to the point where by tickling she climaxes very hard. This goes on long enough until she’s presented by the Daimyo to his allies, in a form of a nyotaimori (naked girl’s body serving as a table for various dishes like sushi and others) – they enjoy her reactions to their assault on her sensitive parts, and once all food is gone Hinata is too dazed with pleasure to stop the men from having their way with her, even two or three at the time, with all of her holes being used. An initial thought, hope that it may be of some use for you.

I just finished reading both chapters, and have posted my review. The whole idea is really interesting, and while I’m not into gender-bent characters, I must admit that Satsuki here did a nice job in keeping me entertained. While it most likely won’t happen for a while, I really would love to see Hinata being subjected to a sexual torture like that (not exactly the same, but something along those lines), she’s my fav character in the entire serie. I do have some ideas that could involve her, as well as others, but I’d like to know if you have something planned for her, if at all, first.