ssb4lucariofan

Story link: http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600089557 Length: 1 Chapter - 5,314 words Summary: After recovering from a life-threatening injury, Riky the Lucario is eager to get back on the road and avenge his murdered Master. However, when his human friends put the Lucario and his Pokemon friends through some controlled battles to ensure they are still in top form, he overworks himself. His childhood friend and girlfriend, Fiona the Braixen, seeing he is hurt, decides to help him when he goes to wash off in the shower. The two Pokemon end up unintentionally seducing each other. Athor's notes: I hope I'm doing this review replies thread thing right. Don't have any reviews yet but I created this thread for if and when it happens. Anyway, This is the first lemon I've written. There is a good deal of buildup to the sex scene, which includes setting the overall scene and giving the characters some...character I feel lemons are best when there is some back story and the star characters don't feel like empty shells merely "clonking together" x3 at roughly word 1,731 it becomes suggestive/questionable, and explicit at around word 2,068, so the majority of the this fic is NSFW. Finally, sorry if some phrases or words come across as slightly repetitive; I wanted to stress how strongly Riky and Fiona feel for each other. To me personally, erotica (and sex in general) comes across as much more appealing and beautiful (for lack of a better term ) when the characters involved demonstrate not only lust, but gentleness, care, affection, and passion for their lover (throwing in some cuteness can also help x3). I feel that when adding these to the mix the end result is heartwarming, pleasantly arousing, and enjoyable to read. I hope my attempts at doing this here was a success cX All this said, give me your best shot...please? what do you like? what do you dislike? Do you have questions, comments...or concerns?