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Ooohhhhhh, sniper got a gold star! He's special, I never get gold stars
You probably will get a gold star if you post!
C'mon Magus you are killing me! You have me reading some old stories and books; everything I can get my hands on! It seems as if all the writers I follow have writers block. Feels like collusion sometimes! Either that or I read the stories too fast after they are posted. Mrs. M, can you tickle him for me and see if anything 'drop' out, like a post! 
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Magus, wherever you want to take this story I will be here, lots of sex and all. Just wondering if it will be the same length as BITG and GITG. If it gets to be that length everyone will be part, percentage I don't know, machine. Every chapter someone gets injured and need Nanites and sometimes the pod and the inevitable rescue. I don't see how Joanne fits in now she is rescued. Joanne, Samantha, Evan, Gerald and Jenna--------??
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Magus, I need the next chapter. Too much things is happening in too many places and Max has not gone after the SG yet! Wonder what Legion did that caused Reynalds to throw up? There are kids in there! Well, I wanted to see what Legion can do now I know! There needs to be a sit down and discussion about the way forward. Too much tangents. SYELDARB, this was not the battle I am waiting for, I am waiting for the battle when they take the fight to the SG. I hope that a lot of them don't get dead or injured in the meantime. Plus,bother need to find Alice.
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Damn Magus, you are good! One important piece I missed, I think. How does Legion make the transition from hologram to something that can be touched and how can the nanities get into a person's body if there are no wounds, and Max, Alice or Cat don't inject the individuals? Legion is a more extreme version of Max. The nanities are not invisible because the show up on X-rays but the SG guys holding the hostages AND those outside doesn't seem to see them. They only see Legion. You really went to town in this chapter. So, where is Alice and where is the major taking her? I thought he reported to the guy in the sub.
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I believe that I should think about some things other than raining vengeance on the SG. Max, Legion, Amy and the rest of the family are coming! This is a suggestion for a few chapters down de road. When Max discover how Alice and May can make a baby, and the genius will, let the babies father be Rick. Max can't want to hog up everything. Plus he will have earned it with getting shot up and all and the family need some new blood!! Just a thought. Magus, now that the appetiser is consumed I am ready with my knife and fork, well sharpened, for the main course. ETA?
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Alice may be kidnapped! May, not sure yet. It depends on whether the spider can catch the Major from the SG.Holy crap, it's the cliffhanger from hell. Legion just gets Mika and now she's gone? Gotta think there will be hell to pay for that one. Carol, Stella and Hans? Hoping they're just out and not dead. And who the hell kills off the dogs? Yes, I used hell three times. That's what I'm feeling after reading this chapter. You are a cruel man, Magus! Hoping Alice and Amy go nuclear.
Shame on me. After seeing the title, I should have known not to read it until the next chapter was out. I hate cliffhangers. Serves me right for being so anxious.
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Sorry guys. Those last 2 posts were from me but I forgot I had close my iPad and went to play a domino game!
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Too much mechanical people are "self aware" and not doing their jobs! Everyone around them having sex and that is affecting their usefulness and effectiveness. I thought that this building, or whatever it is, was secure but it seems not to be. Why the hell did Max have to go and save, if he could, Joanna. He should have interrogated the SG guys that were captured a long ago. He would gotten some measure of the man and what he was capable of! It is probably a good thing that some of them left otherwise quite a lot more would be dead. Thank you for that Magus. Rick used to work with these guys he should have insisted that Max interrogated the prisoners. They have been there long enough! The place is not as secure as everyone thinks. Ok enough with the complaints. I do not think that all the people shot are dead because of Legion and the nanites. The love of Legion's life was shot and I want to see what he is going to do. Alice seems to have been taken so Max, and Amy, will be on the warpath. Why did they not think that an attack could come from the sea. After all, that is how he left on his excursions! If they can use the satellites the the bad guys can use them too which they have been doing a lot longer than Max and Alice! Ok Magus, you have wet my appetite for the next chapter which, I hope, will be along one to deal with the happenings in Chapter 8. Max, Rick, Sarah and the rest have to think about the security of the homestead, it is not safe!
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soon grass hopper, soon...the clock slowly ticks down as quiet men take to the battlefield that is their stage, the stage that has seen the play of violence and blood performed countless times for no audience but the Gods; the fickle Gods for whose amusement men die in a sea of their own blood!
Oh and someone will probably get shot or something
You turning into a poet on me Magus? "........drowning is a sea of their own blood". That bit should refer to the SG!
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Just where do you get these ideas from Magus? I hope that the residence is fully fortified because it seems as if no one is minding the store! Legion and Mika
:yahoo:Hilarious! The SG is coming and Max is concentration on producing the child of a self aware machine, an android and Max himself! They need a wake up call and it is a coming. Wonder who will survive? -
I believe that Magus want them go as close as possible to a machine without becoming one. It was a long time ago that Alice said that Max was 42% machine systems. And that was before the rescues, the sub blowout, etc, etc. So Magus, how much percent human is Max now? That Game of Thrones, it is like they walk around with a guillotine to chop off the stars head or kill them!!! Haven't seen a series that abuse the stars like that one! It is quite different than the books, similar to the Bourne trilogy and the books by Robert Ludlam. ETA for Chap 7?
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Forget the damn sex, cuddling, snoodling and more interpesonal action amongst the secondary characters; it's time to start resolving all of the problems caused by the black ops groups as promised. If you were going to delay this story, which can now be wrapped in 3 - 5 chapters if you'd stick to the main storyline, you should have had more snafus in Max's head with maybe Legion getting entangled in Max's mind with him & Nadi and panicking but picking up a better understanding of Max/humans because of it.Or showing that "Mr. I'll Kill You" has finally over stepped his boundaries and has been targeted by higherups afraid that he's gone off the deepend Re: Max. It is time to start winding down not adding more things like Evan's mother's predictiment just to prolong the events. The parts of Mike, his mother & Evan were totally not needed any more, especially as no one burst in to take hostages. And what are Rick, Early, et al thinking having everyone spread out knowing that there is someone trying to capture/kill Max & Co.? Even if some of their 'friends' are still on patrol, that spreads their resources really thin and I'm sure none of their homes are as fortified as Max's. OOPs you did say that there would be a culling. OH well it's your story, Carry On.
Totally agree with the first sentence! He needs to get after those guys. It's like there is no urgency after finding the SG guys. Even Max seems to have gone to sleep where security is concerned, after almost eating off everyone head for not mentioning the guys they captured! Now it looks like they will be shortly invaded!
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Someone mentioned killing Amy! WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That must be someone who recently started to read this tale. So Max promised to create a life with a machine, even a self aware one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That is way out there in sci-fi land! Whew! This I gotta see.
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They are taking the ex agent with Max questioning him, don;t think I like that very much!!!! Going to bed.
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YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Can anyone give me the names of any other good stories to read? I already know a few but I just want to explore more stories so I have plenty to read!
Check HollyHobbit13 on this site. He write a story "Only One" which I like. Another author I follow is a fellow named Captius, he is on Wattpad. I read whatever these (Magus, Captius and HollyHobbit13) authors publish! Unfortunately, Magus last post was the last time anything has come from either of the three. Magus is the best of the lot because you know what is happening. The others, not so much!
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Oh my...I'm getting so ready for new chapters I've started reading the whole series all over again. Pretty desperate but I miss Max and the gang.
I have reread everything that he has written quite a few times! Magus is killing me!
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I believe one of the problems that Magus will have when he is posting all those chapters is the comments on this forum. Normally when he releases a chapter there is a cliffhanger which we comment on and he may include our comments in a future chapter! Note I said "may". If he releases a lot of chapters at once the suspense of the cliffhangers will be diluted. Right Magus? What say you release them a chapter a day to give us a chance to guess where you are going next! Now I know how readers, me included, are dying for these chapters so now that I have made the suggestion I am going to hide in my manhole and cover from licks!!
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Guys and Gals, maybe time warner is bringing this fiber from far far away. I can relate to that. In my country I have been on the 'list' for months to get fiber to run to my house! Now Magus, the empathy I am showing must be good for 2 extra chapters, even if it's Northstar. You should have about 8 chapters for us when u come back on line!!
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Hey Magus, my man! You are giving me a very warm time. Are you okay health wise? If you are then you are killing me! I am following 3 stories, yours, Captius (on Wattpad) and HollyHobbit13 and everyone seems to be writing, nothing has been posted for weeks now! I have to go and wrestle with some George R R Martin books so that I can catch up with the Game of Thrones HBO Series!!!! Those are some humongous books! C'mon Man U have to treat us better than this. Is it still Time Warner giving us grief?
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Timmy indeed!!! I wonder if Legion showed his capabilities too quick! I am also wondering if Max can do anything about it because what Legion did was something that Max would think before doing and, they are all full of nanites. Suppose one of them did something that Legion did not like, KABOOM??? Don't like that Legion just went off and kill the SG that was invading the hacienda. But, maybe Max programmed him to do that. Don't know! This is too much guessing now.