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That doesn't sound too bad, you know. But, how about finishing this one, plus Northstar and weave a story around Going Home. What do you think Magus?

But, do you think that Max would create something that he has absolutely no control of in the final analysis? There must be some sort of destruct switch, at least I think there should be. These things are too dangerous not to have one.

That was a hint Magus

Timmy indeed!!! I wonder if Legion showed his capabilities too quick! I am also wondering if Max can do anything about it because what Legion did was something that Max would think before doing and, they are all full of nanites. Suppose one of them did something that Legion did not like, KABOOM??? Don't like that Legion just went off and kill the SG that was invading the hacienda. But, maybe Max programmed him to do that. Don't know! This is too much guessing now.

You probably will get a gold star if you post! C'mon Magus you are killing me! You have me reading some old stories and books; everything I can get my hands on! It seems as if all the writers I follow have writers block. Feels like collusion sometimes! Either that or I read the stories too fast after they are posted. Mrs. M, can you tickle him for me and see if anything 'drop' out, like a post! Thanks.

Magus, wherever you want to take this story I will be here, lots of sex and all. Just wondering if it will be the same length as BITG and GITG. If it gets to be that length everyone will be part, percentage I don't know, machine. Every chapter someone gets injured and need Nanites and sometimes the pod and the inevitable rescue. I don't see how Joanne fits in now she is rescued. Joanne, Samantha, Evan, Gerald and Jenna--------??

Magus, I need the next chapter. Too much things is happening in too many places and Max has not gone after the SG yet! Wonder what Legion did that caused Reynalds to throw up? There are kids in there! Well, I wanted to see what Legion can do now I know! There needs to be a sit down and discussion about the way forward. Too much tangents. SYELDARB, this was not the battle I am waiting for, I am waiting for the battle when they take the fight to the SG. I hope that a lot of them don't get dead or injured in the meantime. Plus,bother need to find Alice.

Legion flew past the boat with the major, how come he did not see the boat?

Damn Magus, you are good! One important piece I missed, I think. How does Legion make the transition from hologram to something that can be touched and how can the nanities get into a person's body if there are no wounds, and Max, Alice or Cat don't inject the individuals? Legion is a more extreme version of Max. The nanities are not invisible because the show up on X-rays but the SG guys holding the hostages AND those outside doesn't seem to see them. They only see Legion. You really went to town in this chapter. So, where is Alice and where is the major taking her? I thought he reported to the guy in the sub.

I believe that I should think about some things other than raining vengeance on the SG. Max, Legion, Amy and the rest of the family are coming! This is a suggestion for a few chapters down de road. When Max discover how Alice and May can make a baby, and the genius will, let the babies father be Rick. Max can't want to hog up everything. Plus he will have earned it with getting shot up and all and the family need some new blood!! Just a thought. Magus, now that the appetiser is consumed I am ready with my knife and fork, well sharpened, for the main course. ETA?

Alice may be kidnapped! May, not sure yet. It depends on whether the spider can catch the Major from the SG.

I hope the taser didn't scramble some of her programs when everything went dark. Wonder if her personality will be messed up. She might not recognise Amy. That would be a riot. She would probably want to kill them more than once!

Sorry guys. Those last 2 posts were from me but I forgot I had close my iPad and went to play a domino game!

Too much mechanical people are "self aware" and not doing their jobs! Everyone around them having sex and that is affecting their usefulness and effectiveness. I thought that this building, or whatever it is, was secure but it seems not to be. Why the hell did Max have to go and save, if he could, Joanna. He should have interrogated the SG guys that were captured a long ago. He would gotten some measure of the man and what he was capable of! It is probably a good thing that some of them left otherwise quite a lot more would be dead. Thank you for that Magus. Rick used to work with these guys he should have insisted that Max interrogated the prisoners. They have been there long enough! The place is not as secure as everyone thinks. Ok enough with the complaints. I do not think that all the people shot are dead because of Legion and the nanites. The love of Legion's life was shot and I want to see what he is going to do. Alice seems to have been taken so Max, and Amy, will be on the warpath. Why did they not think that an attack could come from the sea. After all, that is how he left on his excursions! If they can use the satellites the the bad guys can use them too which they have been doing a lot longer than Max and Alice! Ok Magus, you have wet my appetite for the next chapter which, I hope, will be along one to deal with the happenings in Chapter 8. Max, Rick, Sarah and the rest have to think about the security of the homestead, it is not safe!

You turning into a poet on me Magus? "........drowning is a sea of their own blood". That bit should refer to the SG!

Just where do you get these ideas from Magus? I hope that the residence is fully fortified because it seems as if no one is minding the store! Legion and Mika :yahoo:Hilarious! The SG is coming and Max is concentration on producing the child of a self aware machine, an android and Max himself! They need a wake up call and it is a coming. Wonder who will survive?

I believe that Magus want them go as close as possible to a machine without becoming one. It was a long time ago that Alice said that Max was 42% machine systems. And that was before the rescues, the sub blowout, etc, etc. So Magus, how much percent human is Max now? That Game of Thrones, it is like they walk around with a guillotine to chop off the stars head or kill them!!! Haven't seen a series that abuse the stars like that one! It is quite different than the books, similar to the Bourne trilogy and the books by Robert Ludlam. ETA for Chap 7?

Totally agree with the first sentence! He needs to get after those guys. It's like there is no urgency after finding the SG guys. Even Max seems to have gone to sleep where security is concerned, after almost eating off everyone head for not mentioning the guys they captured! Now it looks like they will be shortly invaded!

Someone mentioned killing Amy! WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That must be someone who recently started to read this tale. So Max promised to create a life with a machine, even a self aware one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That is way out there in sci-fi land! Whew! This I gotta see.

They are taking the ex agent with Max questioning him, don;t think I like that very much!!!! Going to bed.

YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Check HollyHobbit13 on this site. He write a story "Only One" which I like. Another author I follow is a fellow named Captius, he is on Wattpad. I read whatever these (Magus, Captius and HollyHobbit13) authors publish! Unfortunately, Magus last post was the last time anything has come from either of the three. Magus is the best of the lot because you know what is happening. The others, not so much!

I have reread everything that he has written quite a few times! Magus is killing me!

. Looking for you Magus!!!

I believe one of the problems that Magus will have when he is posting all those chapters is the comments on this forum. Normally when he releases a chapter there is a cliffhanger which we comment on and he may include our comments in a future chapter! Note I said "may". If he releases a lot of chapters at once the suspense of the cliffhangers will be diluted. Right Magus? What say you release them a chapter a day to give us a chance to guess where you are going next! Now I know how readers, me included, are dying for these chapters so now that I have made the suggestion I am going to hide in my manhole and cover from licks!!