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Hey guys. Just an update: I was able to get a nice big chunk of writing done this weekend, but I decided to extend the chapter just a bit more. I realized that, if I released it as it was, the next chapter was going to be criminally short. So I'm taking a little more time to extend it. You guys are saints to be so patient and I'm sorry to ask you to wait just a bit longer but I promise, cross my heart, that I'm working to get it done soon. After this chapter, things will be smoother with release dates. Just trying to get back into the swing of it and getting used to my new job is...well, wonky.

I know, excuses excuses. I'm getting back to writing so I can get it out this week. That I DEFINITELY want to accomplish. This week.

I personally dont care about the when, I just need a fix of jack and kayla, dont even care about the sex anymore, the plots good enough.

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If he did it of his own accord I say he deserves everything he gets. He should have told them to bring more armour and to have an extraction plan for him. Dumbass. Haha

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I hope Jeeves talks to Max about making a body for him and Albert. It be kind of funny people walking into the library seeing Albert Einstein sitting in the couch.

And getting frisky with the butler

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Yeah but mike knows about the virtual world and that takes all the fun out of it

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Albert and jeeves, would be funnier if he was called chives

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You could explain how david and june met, and bring cynthia into it. Flashbacks are a wonderful thing.

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Maybe the boss could be the next book or the team up

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Imagine if mia could communicate...

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Great chapter, I figure the bad guys are holding Mike's parents somewhere and are blackmailing Mike. Either that or Mike has been brainwashed somehow. Waiting patiently for the next chapter. Maybe Max will figure out how to build a force field for his house.

Or just move undeground

[She is the One]

At least youll be able to get a good chunk done this weekend. Im sure I speak for everyone here when I say I cant wait.

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dun dun DUN! Well, that was interesting. Was wondering when you were gonna reveal the mole, juat didnt think itd b who it is.

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I think amy and amy should hit it off

So I would say present day northstar

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Anyone else miss northstar, girl in the grass is great but some of the north family wood be good. (imagine a cross over, nick and max bump into each other, just a subtle hint about who it is)

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Sometimes Max has to put the brakes on Amy for the overall good of the family. Amy's are more fum BUT Max should be astute enough to know that the safety of the family has to come first so that they don't get shut down entirely.

Maybe amy does a raid behind maxs back, she is sneaky after all.

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True, amy is one of the best characters, but its a close call theyre all so great

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Itd be a good way to make a profit for free work, or rather not doing free work.

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Weve waited this long, what harm is a few more days(or weeks. Months and it might be harmful)

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I like bigmans theory, would like to see david, flashback or evil present time plot twist

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I did the same(thankfully before he started the big raids, makes it harder due to sheer number), I mearly had it, realized I forgot suzy and just thought fuck it, cant be done.

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Congratulations, you just saved yourself a hell of a lot of editing

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Out of all the chapters for you to be high while writing, I think this was the best choice. Great chapter, cant wait to see how Letti and Walter fit into the fray.

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Take a bit of a rest for a few days, heal up a bit more. We can wait.

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Yeah, doped up magus is a fun magus

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i hate when people are that stubborn that even when you provide valid proof for an argument, and the argument has ended, they still insist you follow their point. And then complain when you call them stubborn.