I'm not overly satisfied with the sex scene I have at the start of my story and I would like another opinion/tips on improvement if need be.
Gotham tv series airing on FOX in the US.
It's a dub-con, maybe a bit more on the non-con side. One character unknowingly drinks a glass of wine containing ecstasy and roofies and a more sober character decides to take advantage of the fact that the first character is all over them and drugged out of his mind.
Example of prospective beta is encouraged, but not strictly required.