GEMINI

Ok. Found the link to your forum.
Great story. Love cliffhangers. Need to see next chapter to see if she makes it or not.
You are learning from the master cliffhanger (Magus) in leaving your readers wanting more. Just do not leave us hanging to long or we will move on to other writers on this site.
To many stories are left undone or listed as completed and the story had no ending to it when it was stopped.
Please continue the story so we know what happens to her sister.

What is funny is I don't think it was ever mentioned who was older Max or Cyndi. By Magus math it looks like Max is the older brother because he was 12 when June told Marge that her husband died 7 years ago. In the last chapterof GITG it was mention that they were two and five.
I can't wait to see what Magus comes up with where Leia came from

What is funny is I don't think it was ever mentioned who was older Max or Cyndi. By Magus math it looks like Max is the older brother because he was 12 when June told Marge that her husband died 7 years ago. In the last chapterof GITG it was mention that they were two and five.
I can't wait to see what Magus comes up with where Leia came from

Or Rick lied and did have a family but he had to keep her safe knowing his job risks.
Regarding the flashback,he can also use italic font

Cool thx, every class has a know it all or a tough guy

Or he can take it with him at his first day of class and used it as target practice for his students.

I going with Mike has no choice because they have his parents. Even though magus said he doesn't like them, they are still his parents. I believe his parent were in Europe. Just have to wait and see.

Carol doesn't have to. Jeeves will handle everything all she has to do is get her in the pod.

I agree with Bigman, Amy always makes the plans how to get the job done. Max and Alice just make little changes so nothing bad happens to the family members or Max and Alice take the hard tasks of Amy's plan.

I now what you mean, that last part really caught me by surprise. Hopefully the next chapter comes out soon.

I now what you mean, that last part really caught me by surprise. Hopefully the next chapter comes out soon.

Does it really matter which core member you kill. Wouldn't they just end up in Max's mainframe to bring back like June.

we are here in the shadows waiting for our target to return :-)

I now what you mean, that last part really caught me by surprise. Hopefully the next chapter comes out soon.

we are here in the shadows waiting for our target to return :-)

Chapters 1-19 are up. They were the ones I had completed for the other site. Other chapters will be coming shortly.
Hope everyone enjoys!

I have the same problem too with my tablet, when I'm not near my computer or laptop

Same goes for me about Rick's background and also what Suzy might do. I have a feeling no matter how much see love her mother, I don't think she can leave the safety Rick and Max has given her.

EVIL JUST EVIL. make us wait an extra day, now you want to tease us.