magusfang

Before any one even reads the following rant, I want it known that I, Magusfang, am writing this post under duress (My wife and daughter told me to do it); that said, here we go: The following paragraph was flagged as a graphic representation of underage sex" “Hey big fella, you ready for a little fun?” Nick turned and saw TK walk into the kitchen. She was as beautiful a woman as Nick had ever seen, her caramel colored skin was flawless except for a scar from a knife wound that began mid-thigh on the inside of her left leg and ran down and left to end just above her left knee. She also had a circular scar on her right shoulder the size of a dime. The shoulder scar was from a bullet that had found its mark, a wound that had nearly killed her. The knife wound was from a smuggler in the mountains near Nepal. He evidently wanted to soften her up a bit before he and his mates raped the twelve-year-old girl to death. That was as far as the thugs had gotten, because right about then Nick had arrived and sent them to whatever after-life they believed in. Evidently the highlighted sentence is the root of the entire problem...thoughts?

Um, it doesn't bother me a bit, but I was under the impression that double posting was against the rules. I posted it as a stand alone to stop the emails I was getting because the other, unnamed, site deleted the story with one chapter to go.

Evidently: “Hey big fella, you ready for a little fun?” Nick turned and saw TK walk into the kitchen. She was as beautiful a woman as Nick had ever seen, her caramel colored skin was flawless except for a scar from a knife wound that began mid-thigh on the inside of her left leg and ran down and left to end just above her left knee. She also had a circular scar on her right shoulder the size of a dime. The shoulder scar was from a bullet that had found its mark, a wound that had nearly killed her. The knife wound was from a smuggler in the mountains near Nepal. He evidently wanted to soften her up a bit before he and his mates raped the twelve-year-old girl to death. That was as far as the thugs had gotten, because right about then Nick had arrived and sent them to whatever after-life they believed in. That constitutes a graphic representation of underage sex, so I've been banned. LOL, my wife and two daughters have been on the forum lighting them up. They are truly pissed for some reason, I'm like eh, whatever. So, I doubt I'll ever post a story over there again, I don't care much about the rule but it's obvious now that one of the MODS has it in for me, so I'll just stay here.

So just got banned from other site, evidently the first chapter of Northstar 1 has underage sex in it. I couldn't find any sex in it....maybe there's a new kind I don't know about...oh well, at least I have a home here...

What if I was a woman trapped in a man's body But didn't realize it because I was a lesbian!

I want you to know that somebody cares It's not me! But I'm sure there is somebody out there...somewhere......ok maybe not....

I know right? You'd think I disappear for weeks and tha my family is happy to see me, what's up with that?

Without a body, it's just a missing person....Just sayin

Assholes on Parade by Timbuk 3 It’s an asshole celebration and they’re all out on the street See them on the sidewalk, oh hear those shufflin’ feet As twenty thousand assholes do an asshole promenade Step aside good people it’s the assholes on parade We got the assholes for freedom, the assholes for fun The assholes for Jesus and the assholes for guns The assholes for justice, the assholes for crime And the assholes for assholes, the assholes of all time Assholes makin money, they’re makin all the rules Takin all our jobs and they’re fillin up our schools Assholes in the water, assholes in the sky Sign that says help wanted only assholes need apply Oh teacher won’t you tell me, Have I really made the grade Am I the head of the class Or just another asshole on parade Assholes give the orders and assholes row the boat Assholes get elected ‘cause assholes get to vote I once heard it said that old asshole never die They just lay in bed and multiply Assholes in the morning, assholes every night Assholes to the left and assholes to the right As twenty thousand assholes do an asshole promenade Step aside good people, it’s the assholes on parade

Assholes on Parade by Timbuk 3 It’s an asshole celebration and they’re all out on the street See them on the sidewalk, oh hear those shufflin’ feet As twenty thousand assholes do an asshole promenade Step aside good people it’s the assholes on parade We got the assholes for freedom, the assholes for fun The assholes for Jesus and the assholes for guns The assholes for justice, the assholes for crime And the assholes for assholes, the assholes of all time Assholes makin money, they’re makin all the rules Takin all our jobs and they’re fillin up our schools Assholes in the water, assholes in the sky Sign that says help wanted only assholes need apply Oh teacher won’t you tell me, Have I really made the grade Am I the head of the class Or just another asshole on parade Assholes give the orders and assholes row the boat Assholes get elected ‘cause assholes get to vote I once heard it said that old asshole never die They just lay in bed and multiply Assholes in the morning, assholes every night Assholes to the left and assholes to the right As twenty thousand assholes do an asshole promenade Step aside good people, it’s the assholes on parade

I stood here all day and nothing...I'm so depressed

The difference between genius and stupidity is that genius has it's limits! -Albert Einstien

Couldn't sleep so chapter 4 of northstar is up

It helps keep the nightmares away. When I write about things, then I tend not to dream about them. Someone (my wife) told me I should share it, she said it was good so I thought what the hell. But couldn't exactly post my writing as it was, so i adapted it to fiction. My early stuff is pretty dark and somewhat depressing but I do try to end on a good note read Going Home and you'll understand it.

K chapter three of Nortstar is up and chapter two of GITG. Chapter 2 of GITG is a little rough, think the story is a little stuck...hopefully I can find an elligant way to wiggled out of this dead end and get's some more action in the story...if not I'll bull through and ignore the whining

K posted chapter two for girl in the grass, not really happy with it but just couldn't get it to flow. Time to slap some mud on the scratches an move on! Three is going to take about a week I think real world probs, my pool is leaking!

I don't trust joggers. they are always the first to find the body I mean I'm no detective byt... just sayin...

Yeah, unfortunately there's not much you can do about stupid except hope they win a Darwin Award

ok, that took a strange turn...

Zoot Suit Riot by Cherry Poppin Daddies

Handguns have their uses, but your right, they require a fair amount of skill to operate safely; rifles are easier to aim and more accurate to begin with. But, this isn't a marksmanship thread; the problem with banning guns is the same problem that prohabition ran into. If people want them, and criminals do, then they will get them and the blackmarket in guns will create a whole new level of orginized crime. Illigal drugs is another example.

I hate you ALL!!! Oh sorry, I thought you were reviewing my story Do what I do, read the reviews you think are worthwhile and ignore the rest As for getting slammed when you try to review someone else's work, screw them too. If I try to help a drowning man and he spits in my face, well I'm gonna let him drown. Unfortunately we are, as a whole, a pretty pathetic and annoying species: You have those whose egos are so fragile that anything that could be percieved as negative just sets off. Also, you have those whose self-worth is so low, they are only happy when bashing other; they can't bring themselves up, so they try and knock everyone else down. So if your writing to make everyone happy, you're doomed! Make yourself happy first then those you deem worth your time. Remember your time is finite, don't waste it on the dregs of humanity, there are good people out there who will truly apriciate it, it's your job to find them - and that goes for everything, not just writing. Ok, need some smart ass comment here" Some people need a high five...in the face...with a chair...just sayin...

I like Sue/Stu's, but they have to be done right or they become to predictable. What is fun is to build a character like Mary Sue and then slowly reveal flaws and weaknesses, let the reader slowly discover that the character isn't as perfect as the she/he seemed at first blush. That way you show that your character isn't perfect, just better at hiding their flaws...that makes them real because that's what we all do obsess over flaws, either real or percieved, and try to deperately hide them from others

So, this seems like a pretty random thread, it has obviously wandered far from the path it's creator set it on, so I guess I'll ask this here since I really couldn't find another place that seemed to fit. I was going to try Solaris's idea threat but that just seems to be a dust bunny bin, or plot bunny I guess...whatever - a bunny is a bunny! Sorry been up a while and rambling now; so read this and please tell me if the dialog works or if it's just too far out there. “Hi, um I was in on you’re a…your friend’s surgery.” The young man stammered, he knew exactly what the two women were to each other but was too embarrassed to say it out loud. May wasn’t insulted, she knew he didn’t disapprove; it was that he, like many young men, her son included, had difficulty talking about sex in mixed company. She was sure that she and Marge would be a hot topic of conversation in both locker rooms; but she was used to the many different reactions their love for each other caused. While the intensity of some reactions didn’t really upset her, it did still surprise her; it was as though people thought lesbians were some mythical creature - like Bigfoot! May actually smiled slightly when a random thought shot through her brain and she pictured some redneck in a John Deere cap and bib overall’s giving an interview, “Yeah, I done saw two of ‘em! I was out der by rut 2, ya know where da big tree is by da crick; and bam, two of dem lesbian things run across da road right in fronna me! Damndest thin I ever done saw!”

If I go online and see that your profile picture is a car, I'm going to assume you are a Transformer!