ElectricOutcast

Well to answer your question: I want every detailed studied. Also depending on the situation I guess I'd be willing to see what you ask in return.

Finished preliminary writing on a story that's a sequel to another story I did earlier this year. Prequel is not on this website but on another website (won't plug it). Anyway, I know I need to improve on the story but I don't know which parts I need to fix so if any of you can give this story a proofread and hopefully help me improve the story a bit I should be good to publish it. Story is called "Return to the Rain" and if there is anybody out there wanna volunteer I have the story attached and feel free to give a reply when you reach a conclusion. Thank you very much. Return of the Rain.odt