Bluekazoo

Hey all, I've got a Naruto fanfic that's getting pretty hefty (around 70k words at the moment), but missing some key events that I'm having trouble writing out. I'd like someone to proofread the work I have done at the moment, and give suggestions about how to present the missing pieces in a novel and interesting fashion. The fic is going to include a little bit of everything, including yaoi, yuri, het, futa, bdsm, a furry, foot fetish...yadda yadda. I'm not going to say I'll do everything under the sun (that's a lot), but an open mind is pretty much required. Also, ninja abilities are fantastic for sex scenes. Just sayin.