brightneeBee

review for "Granger's Anatomy" o.O.... :crabbegoyle: ...... :umbridge: Excuse me? Sincerely, brightneeBee

Risotto, Thank you, thank you! I do enjoy getting reviews. I am hoping to have the next chapter up before mid-August, but since the muse (which tends to be blocked out by my beta for "Assassination" and her knack for distracting me when I so need it XD and Doctor Who marathons) has been quite flighty, I am inclined to say that maybe a new chapter will be loaded at the end of August. lol. But I am slowly working on it, in between several fics for a forum challenge. Thanks again for the review. They are always appreciated. Sincerely, BrightneeBee

reply to Dy: Thank you for the review - it really perked up my day! The next chapter is taking editing slowly - and I apologize for the errors you have found (I have no Beta for this story, so my reviewing chapters before they are posted are somewhat worthless since my mind says it's fine when my gut says there is something I need to fix, but I overlook those errors every time.) I am hoping after August that posting will be more frequent. I have challenge fics in progress as well as editing chapters for Remember November, so I am finding my attention drawn several ways. I have outlines for chapters all the way to the end, and several pre-written chapters to be altered and added-onto, it's just proving to be a longer process than I thought. XD I plan to finish this story, no matter how long it takes. I am so glad that you find my writing so enjoyable. I have been told that I need to adapt to writing for the internet, because my long-winded sentences are meant more for books and not fanfiction online. I am working to change that so chapters are more easily read. It's hard to do, especially when I have taken imaginary stock in the use of semi-colons. *snnrks* Again, so extremely glad that you like this story! I will try to get another chapter up soon. Sincerely, Brightnee

I think it's just unfathomable to my mind that Harry and Hermione should do anything more than sibling-hugging. I find it hard to imagine Hermione and Ron ending up together, either....XD Yes, reading it, I can tell that it was a first fic XD but it didn't stop me from the temptation of copying and pasting so I could beta without asking you first. But, I've thought that maybe me Beta'ing would be a bad idea, because I would be sorely tempted to beta-out the HarryXHermione bits XD sorry. Yes, well everyone has their different ways of creating stories and typing them up. I, for one, end up with a journal and a few multi-colored pens and start writing an outline, of sorts, and adding in research in the margins before typing the outline up in a word-program. But I always have the first chapter, middle chappter and ending chapter outlined before I go through and fill in with details and dialogue, and then comes the filler chapters. It helps create a timespan between events. By chapter 64 of Precious Mudblood, it became extremely hard to understand where you were taking the storyline. I can understand that writing blind works for you, but structuring the chapter itself would have helped to create a more visual picture of what exactly was going on. I'm still between the thought that A) Hermione split herself into two selves and sent one 50s years into the past, B) either her waking up with only Draco alive is reality, or her time in the past is her reality and her awake with Draco is just a dream that she never remembers, or C) I have no flipping clue what the hell is going on. XD It's very confusing, and difficult to understand. Literally made me want to pull my hair out by the time I got to chapter 75. I can understand the need to avoid structuring a solid idea for the entire story, but the chapters themselves are so disorganized at times that it hurts to try and figure just one chapter out. Also, a side note since I was reviewing my full outlines for a possible Volmione that I wrote over a year ago and plan on starting once my Remember November is finished...I read the chapter in Prec. Mudblood where Hermione threw herself out of the hole in the wall to kill herself and couldn't help but thinking - "Oh my god, that's my suicide scene down to the last sentence!" I've never read your works before, and I've been working on the outline for this upcoming epic for two or more years on/off, and I have to say, it was like rreading my outline without knowing it. Except for the conduit thing... Anyway, I didn't mean to come off as a total bitch just now - I did not have that intent when responding, at all. I apologize if my reply was...rude. I am actually hoping you will update Captive Audience and Precious Mudblood soon ? -brightneeBee

Well, I can't take all the credit for the well-written part. NerysDax helped me a great deal in the Beta process. But there is one more version to go for this story - the unBeta'd original with smut. Thank you for the review! I always appreciate reviews!!!! XD Sincerely, BrightneeBee

LadyCandi, I'm so glad that you liked the chapter! Yes, I can't wait to write more of Tom's interactions with Snape and Hermione, as well - and hopefully the next chapter will be up soon! XD XO -brightneeBEe

Oh, Oribia, your review lifted my spirits! XD I am thoroughly happy that you are enjoying it so far. Tom will show up in the next two chapters so keep a look out! Sincerely, brightneeBee

Remember November, Chapter One Reviews... LadyCandi 2012-06-11 what happened? last I had checked Remember November was quite a few more chapters along than this, i was looking forward to a new chapter **LadyCandi, I do apologize. I found plot-holes and deleted the story so I could slowly fix them throughout the chapters. I have fixed chapters 1 & 2, and am currently working on chapters 3-11. I promise, this is the last time Remember November disappears. I am pushing myself to rewrite and edit the holes that I have found, and post them as quickly as possible. I hope this hasn't deterred you. I just want the story to be as solid as possible. I hope you enjoy the coming chapters! Sincerely, Brightnee