MarvelMaster616

I just posted a new installment of Festival of X. I meant to post this earlier and Drunken Scotsman has already been kind enough to leave a review. For this, I thank him. I appreciate your comments. I agree that sex can be humorous and fun. lol I had fun with the Amara/Scott scene and the Remy/Jubilee scene. I'm trying to do some unique things with these pairings so tha the sex scenes aren't all the same. I hope the next update comes sooner. I was on vacation last week so I couldn't update as soon as I wanted. Thanks again for the feedback I've received and I hope there's plenty more sexy action to come with this series.

Heya, sorry I haven't posted here in a while. I just placed a review for your latest chapter for Fast Times. It was definitely one of my favorite to date. You're one of the few writers on adultfanfiction that tells really good Jean Grey/Cyclops stories. I think it also helped that you didn't have to do an accent with this chapter. lol But I just wanted you to know that I'm still following your series and I'm still interested in your work. I hope you continue and I appreciate all your support for Festival of X and my X-men Supreme tie-ins. I recently updated Festival of X and it did involve Jean Grey as well, namely her and Bobby. I hope in the next chapter you touch a bit more on how Scott and Jean's relationship developed after that. I'm sure the other girls are probably interested in their sex life more than ever. lol Please keep up the good work and thanks again for your support.

I know it's been a while since I posted a new chapter. I kept getting stalled and distracted. But I managed to get it done. I hope it's enjoyable. Thanks to everyone who took the time to review. I have plenty more to come with this series and I hope the support continues.

Just reviewed your latest chapter. I thought it was pretty good. I'm glad you made an effort to deal with the Kurt/Amanda relationship. It didn't seem to fit in some respects, but it was still an enjoyable read. So who is next on the docket? Any clue yet? Or are you going to make us wait with bated breath? lol

Sorry, but that was not intentional. I didn't know Drunken Scotsman would update on the same day I would. Guess great minds think alike!

Even though no one seems to be discussing anything in this thread, I thought I would still make a quick post to announce that Chapter 5 of Festival of X has just been posted. It took longer than I thought. My good friend, Agent-G, was a big help in helping me get over brief bouts with writers block. I also want to reiterate that I am flexible when it comes to a fic like this. If someone finds an error or something they think is wrong, I'm willing to revise it. I've done it already with Chapter 1 and I'm willing to do it again if necessary. I appreciate everyone who has supported this story. Agent-G, Daye, Drunken Scotsman, and Royboy have been very kind and I hope I continue to have your support as this series unfolds.

Just posted a new issue! This issue has some different pairings that are not usually seen in the comics or cartoons. I know it's a bit tough for some readers who want to see their favorite couple get it on, but I wanted to mix it up with this story. A bit part of the premise is that it allows certain characters to hook up that wouldn't do so otherwise. So I hope it's still enjoyable. Please note I'm still open for pairing suggestions or scene suggestions. I can be very flexible with Festival of X so the door is open for all kinds of sexy awesome.

Heya. Just finished reading and reviewing your latest chapter. I thought it was really good, although the accent was still a bit difficult to read and some of the slang she used was a little off. I don't remember her using that in the comics or show so I thought it was a little confusing at times. But overall, I enjoyed it. I think you did a good job of making Rahne's first time unique. Although that level of multi-orgasmic capacity is pretty extreme. I imagine her animal physiology would have a role in that. Perhaps that's something you can explore later if you want to. Either way, I'm looking forward to whoever the next focus is. You've been writing these very well for the most part and I think you can do so much with this story. As for Agent-G, he's a close friend of mine so I'm a bit bias. Don't take it personally. He tends to be brutally honest with his assessments. I don't think he would be reading your story if he didn't find it appealing on some levels. Just keep pushing forward with your story and try to make every chapter better than the last. Also, thanks for your support on Festival of X. You too, Daye! ;-)

Oops! Forgot to log in before posting the last response. Sorry about that Daye! My bad.

Hey, I just reviewed the new chapter. I thought it was pretty good, but I agree with Daye. The accent may take it too far. I think you overdid it a bit. I get that you tried to make it sound phronetic so that it would capture her accent, but that's just too hard to read. In the comics, they do have her say things like "Aye" and "Lass," but they don't go much further than that. For the next chapter, I recommend you cut back on the accent so it's easier to read. I also think it's good you're not laying out who tells their story after who. Take it one chapter at a time and let it happen naturally. I think that's a good way to go. I look forward to the next chapter and once again, I thank you for your support on Festival of X.

Quick update for everyone. Based on feedback from others like Daye and DrunkenScottsman, I've decided to edit Chapter 1 of Festival of X. Some thought that tricking the others into drinking the wine was wrong. And I agree. So I wrote in another scene where Amara apologizes for the deception and gives everyone a chance to walk away and remove the effects of the wine. None leave so the rest of the story hasn't changed, but there is that difference and I think it makes it more honest. Thanks again for the feedback everybody! I hope it continues.

Thank you. I really appreciate your kind words and I'm glad you like my pic. I try not to be too harsh with my criticisms. I try not to be too generous either. If I see a problem, I will point it out. While we didn't see eye-to-eye on "Down Under," I don't doubt your skill in writing that story. You definitely have a great style and a great feel for some of these characters. I think you have a great opportunity to do something extraordinary with this fic. And I did get your review for Festival of X. I appreciate it and I'll try to send you a message later because I have an idea that might help with your criticism, which I think is perfectly valid. As for your story, what can we expect next? Any previews? Thanks again!

Thanks for the response. I appreciate it. And since I did make some significant changes to continuity with keeping Jean alive, I don't think that reading all the comics leading up to this point would be much of a help. I hope it doesn't detract from the series. And I like the idea of Cyclops/Surge. I plan on doing some chapters down the line that will have the younger students hooking up with the older members of the X-men. Because you're right. It couldn't happen outside this setting. Thanks for the suggestion and if you have any other ideas I would be happy to hear them out.

Hello, DrunkenScottsman. Been a fan of yours for a while now and I'm glad you started a thread on this story. I really like the setup, having all the characters in X-men Evolution get together and reflect on sexual experiences. You write sex scenes very well compared to most writes on this site, including myself. I like how detailed you are and your overall language skills. You're also very realistic as the latest chapter showed with Amara and Sam. A condom breaking isn't something most people want to write a fic about, but it does happen. And people do freak out like Amara did. So I really applaud you for playing up that angle. As for Amara's characterization, I agreed with AgentG on some levels. But I don't think that took away from the story as a whole. Amara was not portrayed as a princess in X-men Evolution and was mostly just a teenager. However, I think you still made it work and I look forward to seeing more. So with this series, do you plan to use other couples? Who else do you plan on highlighting? I always had a soft spot for Scott/Jean in X-men Evolution. I thought their relationship was very nicely done in that series. I also like Kurt/Kitty. I think those two were pretty cute. And if you write those scenes as well as you've written others to date, I certainly look forward to them. I also see we have a common friend in Daye, who has been nice enough to provide feedback on my stories as well. At the moment I'm working on a story called "Festival of X." Ironically, I think I updated it the same day you posted chapter two of this story. Have you read it yet? Overall, keep up the great work! I look forward to whatever you have planned next.

Greetings. I thought I would start a thread on this story because I've gotten some great feedback from generous reviewers thus far. I've been writing on adultfanfiction for a while now, but I haven't really started any threads on the forum. This is because most of my stories are one-shots that spin out of my X-men Supreme fanfiction series. However, this has limited the stories I can tell and I really wanted to start a series that had the potential for multiple pairings in a controlled settting. That's how Festival of X was born. The inspiration for this story came from fics like AgentG's "Sex Ed" and Royboy's "The Virus" series. These stories put the characters in situations where they could explore and hook up with others. It had many possibilities and I really enjoyed that feature. So I sought to create one of my own. Originally, I was going to try and set it up in X-men Supreme, but that would have just been too cumbersome. So with some advice from AgentG, I set up the scenario for Festival of X. As I stated in my AN in the first chapter, it takes place in 616 before House of M and Decimation. Colossus and Psylocke have recently returned. I also made a few changes. Most notably, Jean Grey is still alive and has worked things out with Cyclops. Wolverine is dating Storm and she never had this elaborate history with Black Panther that I never liked to begin with. For those of you who have read it, the story is pretty basic. Amara sets up a sex ritual and uses special wine to get her fellow X-men in the mood so to speak. So over the span of a day and night, they indulge in all sorts of sexual excess. At the moment the following characters are involved: Scott, Jean, Logan, Ororo, Betsy, Warren, Emma, Warpath, Domino, Bobby, Alex, Lorna, Kitty, Piotr, Rogue, Remy, Kurt, Tabitha, Roberto, Elixir, Laura, Prodigy, Jubilee, Surge, Amara, Julian, Sam, Danille That list may expand to other characters, but for the moment this is who I'm working with. I've already received some nice reviews. I'd like to open this thread up to discussion. I don't exactly have a complete plan for this story. I don't even know who long it will be or when it will end. It's mostly this open environment for me to use these characters in a controlled setting. So with that in mind, I'm open to any suggestions for pairings or scenes. I've already received a few, but I want to open it up to others. So what do you think? What would you like to see in Festival of X? How could I make it better? Any advice or feedback is very much appreciated. Thank you and I look forward to exploring this story. MarvelMaster616