krakenknight

Totally with you. I try and review every story I read at least once. Its just good manners.

I've done 3 chapters properly and a further 2 in segments
Title: The Data trap
Author: Krakenknight
Summary: Tai gains access to a program that allows him to change people in real ways. The problem is, he was the first person to be changed by its power.
Rating: Adult+
Pairings: Tai X Just about everyone but Kenyako is the only non Mind controlled one
Feedback: Please give I appreciate any feedback good or bad.
URL: http://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600051458

The strong smell of ginger intermingled with the chicken and vegetables greeted Jaydee's nose.
Cassandra gave him a suspicious look. He really did seem on edge tonight. Dumping the sliced green beans into the wok. Cassandra began to speak again.
'Mom got called into the hospital again and Dad's working late at the bar tonight. You want to do something or did you have plans?' she asked examining him closer.