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Title: Krock Author: Flebtastic Rating: 5/5 Summary: Master Cyclonis unearths a mysterious artifact that can instantly transport people from one location to the next. She unknowingly sends her minions to a nightmare unlike any they have ever known Feedback: Reviews preferably Fandom: Storm Hawks URL: http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600093045 Thank you for reading my hopefully awesome fic. -Flebtastic

I'm working on a Storm Hawks fic with RPG elements called Krock and I've already got the first chapter done. I'm looking for someone who can give helpful feedback on improvements that can be made to a written chapter, possibly beta read it in case I overlooked any grammar errors and help make sure I'm accurately portraying the characters. Even roleplay their reactions to different situations if needed. If anybody out there is interested or knows somebody who would be then PM me and we'll talk. I'm really looking to improve my writing skills and make an interesting fic. -Flebtastic