Caressedbythorns

Hey My story Finding Draco Malfoy is in serious need of a beta. The later chapters are okay but I have been working on it for 2 years now and the first seven or so chapters are in terrible need of a rewrite. it is a Harry/Draco story although I am not one to jump in to relationships that aren't cannon so they are still trying to overcome their differneces 18 chapters in. I would really like to continue this story soon but as it is I can't being myself to add to it before the obvious errors are delt with and I can refocus on the plot. I would love for you to take a look at the story and get back to me on wether you would be interested in helping me out or not. Thanks CBT

I would like to be your beta, I am quite practiced at giving constructive criticism and hashing out problems authors are having with the flow of their work. I help in my writing lab at college and was my English professors TA last semester, although you wouldn't know it from my own work... I am a speed reader and it shouldn't take more than a few days to get through a chapter and comment on it, although I am taking classes this summer so that may slow down my time between receiving the chapter and the return of it. If I feel the chapter needs changing I will do so in another color type in brackets with a note in the margins. If you would be interested in giving it a try just reply here or e-mail me. Hoping to here from you CBT

I am looking for a beta reader to help me with the flow of my original piece that I am currently working on. I would need a beta who could work on a set schedule of two chapters a week. Someone who has a firm grasp of American English and it's grammar is a must, as well as someone who can catch small spelling errors. My story is for the most part grammatically correct and error free but I feel it is lacking in some aspects. It is a drama, set in an alternate reality earth, it is leaning towards being very violent; rape and torture are going to come in to the story. Although right now it is only planned as a plot device and is not going to be the center of the story it's self. At the moment the work is not all that "adult" but I plan to change that with the next chapter, if anyone is interested please reply to me here or through my e-mail, VGamsky@Gmail.com. Thank you CBT