Onihime
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Boo for having a beta that stole your stuff. What word processing program do you use? Does it have spell check? Also a beta should be able to catch any grammar errors that you've missed.
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OMG!!! The vampire needs to go away! Andy could be so happy with Matt! The hobgoblins are just plain creepy, kudos on adding them! I wonder, will Matt and Nicholaus have to -gasp- work together to free her? Or are the hobgoblins dragging her to one or the other of them... And what's Jesse's part in all of this? Is he wanting a piece of Andy as well? Oh! Jesse is the one the hobgoblins are taking Andy to! Haha, just kidding. Please, please, please don't make us wait so long for your next updates!
EDIT: I forgot to ask, do you have a proofreader? Do you need/want one? If so, I'd be quite happy to assist.
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oh my goodness.. that chapter made me cry! lol awesome job Sanura! I'm still loving it and am looking forward to where ever you take me and everyone else who's reading this story.