elspyth

I'm seeking a beta reader for my Predator / AVP fanfic. It's currently posted: http://movies.adult-fanfiction.org/main.php?list=487 The first three chapters have not been beta read so that will give you an example of where I am with my writing skill. I have the fourth chapter written (editing tonight). I'm primarily hoping for a beta that is fast. Someone who can beta and send the file back within a day or two is ideal, but I will take what I can get. I hope to write a chapter a week and want to avoid a backlog of chapters waiting to be beta read. Apart from customary grammar and plot checking, I'm working particularly on a lack of description with characters and locations. You don't need to be good at descriptions, just spotting where I need to add them. I don't need to be babied, but please don't be rude. If something sucks, tell me why and suggest alternatives / fixes / improvements / research. Just so we're all clear: My fanfic is a threesome predator-human-predator pairing. Two males and one female. Males share the female with no interest in sex with each other. There will be sex as often as I can squeeze it in. Story Description: Amelia is settled into her life as a Yautja's mate, at least she was. When her mate insists she takes on a second mate life is turned upside down. If you're interested, please send me a PM. I'd be very appreciative!