RailaRay

My story is called Why Must I Suffer. It's set in a sort of futureistic time in the rebuilt city of Sailen. The main character is Jaiden, a USER who hunts and kills DarkSades. It's in originals/ paranormal M/M. I have trouble writing decent lemons, as I've never really don it before. I was told before on another site to draw from stories around me, but I'm not sure if it's stealing or not. Help of any sort will be GREATLY appreciated!! You can either give me some advice, help me write a lemon, or wtevr. Thanks much!

I'm glad! I really want to read more about Shye and what happens to him. <<Love samurais!

This is a hard one! Hmmm.... I guess, Zuko, with his longer hair!

Thank you so much for reviewing my story Palantean! I loved how your review was layed out. Very thorough. I like reviews like these! Please continue to read. Chapter five is ip!