AlexavieraRaven

Hi my name is Alexaviera Raven, please feel free to call me Alexa if you wish, I know that I am a decent writer and I just think I need a little help with my stories.. Samples of my writing can be found at: http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/authors.php?no=1296882193 Which is my author page, I primarily want some advice and help with one of my stories, The Diary Of A Slytherin Prince The Diary Of A Slytherin Prince is about Draco's life in seventh year and how he wants revenge on the world for his Father's death at first but then he begins to fall in love with a certain Gryffindor Bookworm who shows him there is more than hatred in life... They are both broken due to their families and end up healing each other. Hermione is very occ in it.. It's a twisted love story.. I've never had a beta reader work with me on any project and so I don't know exactly what it would entail.. Please forgive me for when I write I just write, I tend to it seems write the way I think and sometimes it gets confusing. I am normally very good with spelling and I thought I was also with the grammar but I suppose that I have much to still learn as I try to perfect my craft as a writer. Any help would be welcome even if it is to tell me exactly what I did wrong,all help is appreciated.. I would thank anyone graciously who can help me breathe my thoughts and ideas into life and help me entertain the world with my fiction.. My stories generally consist of a m/f pairing and time to time a slash pairing.. But the above two mentioned stories contain only the hetero pairings.. I always have a spot of violence of course and Thank you in advance!! Blessed Be!! Alexa

Hi my name is Alexaviera Raven, please feel free to call me Alexa if you wish, I know that I am a decent writer and I just think I need a little help with my stories.. Samples of my writing can be found at: http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/authors.php?no=1296882193 Which is my author page, I primarily want some advice and help with two of my stories, The Diary Of A Slytherin Prince and Another Chance At Love?? Ordinarily the one I would like help with most is The Diary Of A Slytherin Prince as I have already completed Another Chance At Love?? Another Chance At Love is a crossover story between Harry Potter and The Covenant, the Pairing is Draco/Hermione/Reid The Diary Of A Slytherin Prince is about Draco's life in seventh year and how he wants revenge on the world for his Father's death at first but then he begins to fall in love with a certain Gryffindor who shows him there is more than hatred in life... They are both broken due to their families and end up healing each other. Hermione is very occ in it.. It's a twisted love story.. I've never had a beta reader work with me on any project and so I don't know exactly what it would entail.. Please forgive me for when I write I just write, I tend to it seems write the way I think and sometimes it gets confusing. I am normally very good with spelling and I thought I was also with the grammar but I suppose that I have much to still learn as I try to perfect my craft as a writer. Any help would be welcome even if it is to tell me exactly what I did wrong,all help is appreciated.. I would thank anyone graciously who can help me breathe my thoughts and ideas into life and help me entertain the world with my fiction.. My stories generally consist of a m/f pairing and time to time a slash pairing.. But the above two mentioned stories contain only the hetero pairings.. I always have a spot of violence of course and Thank you in advance!! Blessed Be!! Alexa

Hi my name is Alexaviera Raven, please feel free to call me Alexa if you wish, I know that I am a decent writer and I just think I need a little help with my stories.. Samples of my writing can be found at: http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/authors.php?no=1296882193 Which is my author page, I primarily want some advice and help with two of my stories, The Diary Of A Slytherin Prince and Another Chance At Love?? Orimarily the one I would like help with most is The Diary Of A Slytherin Prince as I have already completed Another Chance At Love?? I've never had a beta reader work with me on any project and so I don't know exactly what it would entail.. Please forgive me for when I write I just write, I tend to it seems write the way I think and sometimes it gets confusing. I am normally very good with spelling and I thought I was also with the grammar but I suppose that I have much to still learn as I try to perfect my craft as a writer. Any help would be welcome even if it is to tell me exactly what I did wrong,all help is appreciated.. I would thank anyone graciously who can help me breathe my thoughts and ideas into life and help me entertain the world with my fiction.. Thank you in advance!! Blessed Be!! Alexa